Gun and Guitar-a RANTARA ff(3rd thread)(last chapter @pg66) - Page 27

Originally posted by: honeybees22

wowowoow

amazing update just too good to be true yaar

what happened to antu yaar? m confused

finally Raghu found her

the brigde hug was beautiful but again what happened to her

everything was written flawlessly

this was one of the best updates ever with so much emotion and something which cannot be described in proper words

pls cont asap

u hurt ur thumb aww get well soon with that

Originally posted by: lohananivedita

Loved it 😊
atlast do dilon ka Milan Ho hi gaya.
Waise bhi antara aur Raghu kabhi alag nahi Ho sakte.
Really rantara rocks.
Dear, thanks for such a wonderful update.
Love you.
👏

Originally posted by: ankusanu

thanks ria fr dat bridge hug scene 👏 👏...
jst loved dat...awww finally raghu ko mil gy antara 😳...
so happy dat dey r together again 😃...
cldnt see dem separated 😔...
cld feel d pain of separation 😔 😭...
bt in between all dis loved mm n shivanis fight 😆...
hey ria i cld guess antara ko kya hua hai 😉 😆...
hmmm so easy na 😉... 👍🏼...
wonderful update ria as usual ... ..

ps ... plz take care..u met with accident 😲... theek ha na zyada toh nh hua na kuch???? stay blessed

🤗

Originally posted by: Tsuchi

beautiful update ria...u r amazing writer...all emotions n feelings were expressed so nicely that can make anyone cry...rantara met after 1 month..jo ek dusre se ek minute ki duri bhi nhi seh sakte the...wo pure ek mahine baad mile...thanks fr including bridge scene its was so perfect...raghu will come to know some good news...hehehe..just a thought..anyways...rantara's reunion happened...the happiest thing fr us!

Originally posted by: liana2304

Lovely .

Loved it .

Thank you .

Originally posted by: Roy.nikki143

Res 😆

Unres 😉

Riyu riyu riyu riyu 🤗

Tujhe pata hai nah mujhe yeh hug scene ka kab se intezaar tha yar 😃

i know yaar... aur maine bhi tujhee prommise ki thi that i will give u hug scene..😉

DDEJ ka tittle promo key sare scenes sajde mein or GAG mein dekh kiya bus yeh ek scene reh gaya tha 😳😃

abhi bhi sare scenes nahin diye yaar... kuch baki hain... wooo sare scenes i am gonna include on tera sukkon if i can get chance...😉

Aj tune woh bhi dekha diya yar tu kya hai i literally loved today's update too much 😳😳

hayee yaar nikki iss gif ko dekh ke dil gardeen garden ho gaya,,,, thnk you

I can't believe key Rantara 1 month tak dur rehe

Dono ki kya halat thy I can understand 😭

haan yaar... mujhe bhi bahut bura laga yee sab likhte huye... but ky kare it was required for story...😭

But finally tune dono ko milwa diya yar

haan yaar woo mil gaye...😳

Tarif kya kya teri jisne tujhe banaya 😆

Awesome awesome awesome update riyu 😉

chal yaar ab itni tareef mat kar😆

Mujhe ab khud confusion hoti hai key mujhe sajda zyada pasand hai ya GAG 😆

LOL😆

Well tune hamare liye apni fingers ko hurt kar diya uske liye bohat bhura lag raha hai
koi nahin yaar ,me f9 it was just an accident😆

But you do take care of yourself 😃

Q k parosaan or junoon ki demands jald tere samne rakh deygy 😆😆

hey bahgwan... inn yedi ke demand se mujhe kabhi choot nahin milegi...🤣

Well done you did a splendid job 👏👍🏼

thank you again and again😳

Han ek or baat tune aj 2 demands puri ki ek to hug or dusri to tujhe pata hi hogy 😆

chal yaar sare demanda puree ho gaye GAG ke... now waiting for ur next demand list😆

Originally posted by: RaNtara4vr

wow...mindblowing chapter ria...👏

feels like a "fresh droplet formed on a flower"...after d chaotic storm...😊

so soothing n heart -rendering...😳

d chapter's beautifully described...from inspector madhavan's help... to kitkit of MM n Shivani...😉

as alwayz u hav given focus to all d factors...👍🏼...u r a ⭐️...⭐️...⭐️...

thank you thank you... i am really flattered now😆😳

ahhh...Raghu n inspector's convo...😊...

rightly said...👍🏼...wen Antu does Yedipanthi only Raghu can handle her...😃...

true yaar...😳

oye-hoye inspector Madhavan ne toh pahle se hi pata laga liya auto... aur uske owner ke baare mein...Raghu ke liye...woh bana cupid (inspector se match-maker/finder)...😆...😳...(sorry..samaj ne aaya ke inspector ko kaise describe karoon...apt words nahi mile...😃...😆...)

lol.. inspector bana matchmaker😆

Raghu n Pantarlog on mission dhundo Antara...

(ria ji dont mind abt dis...😊...u alwayz confuse us wid ur gender reference..u kno...his ka her ho jaata hai n etc...ab car n jeep mein bhi confusion...Raghu nikla police station se leke car n reached railway station in Jeep...i understand u write it in super speed...aur story itni intense n gripping hoti hai...ki yeh saari baatein unimportant lagti hai aur hum overlook bhi kar dete hain...lekin phir bhi padthe waqt confusion toh ho hi jata hai...😃...😆...yedi behna...😉...i know yaar , my gender problem is a big big issue😆... i am tryig to work on that.. but kya karoon main adat se mazboor😆)...

Haila...one month leap...😲..

Raghu still clueless about Antara...n on d other side madhavan about DM......

Raghu challenged even Bappa......👍🏼...haiye (mera) ❤️Raghu❤️...😳...

yup yaar... raghu too antu ke liye kisi se bhi panga lee lega😎

Akhir Antara ki khabar mil gayi......👏...Antara bani school (music) teacher...

i can't think of better option than that for her😊

i was re-reading paras to not miss anything...😊...

d description of Antu's state...😔...😭...ria...👍🏼...👏...

awwiee thax🤗

Antara dizzy...kahin khush khabri toh nahin...???...😃...😳...😉..

aap koo bhi samajh aa gaya... well ab main kya kahoon.. raghu ki yediyan bhi uss ke jaisa smart hain😎

(Kotagiri mein bhi log hindi bolte hai kya among localites...???...😆...mujhe tamil nahin ati yaar, kisi koo ata hoo too translet karwa doo...🤣)...

Raghu going towards kotagiri...👍🏼...

waah waah ria ji...kya connection joda Shivani se school ka...hats off...👏...

thank you again..😳
yay......finally hero-heroine ka Milan ho gaya...👏...aur Raghu ko milne wali hai Khush Khabri bhi...😃......"Party toh banti hai"...🥳...apun sab log aur Raghu ke bhidulog milkar manayeinge...😃...mujhe lagta hai ki agar Raghu ka bas chale toh akkhe(whole) world ko party de...😳...😃......🥳...

yee sahi kaha tune... 😆

n ria ji jitna aap mindblowing likthi ho...utna hi apna mindblowin khayal bhi rakhiye...😃...specially ur thumbelina...😆...😉...sorry lagta hai comments mein yedipanti ka overdose hogaya...😃...

thnk you. i will😳

Waiting for more......haaye-aaye RaNtara...😳...

Originally posted by: pampz

Riya ...this update of urs hv soothed my heart enormously ...😃

aww...😳

falling in love is an amazing feeling😳...loving someone with ur life is such a wonderful experience ...and then being loved eqally by that special person is one of the most precious blessings of God 😃...and when seperation happens it feels like life is being sucked out from one 🤢 ...and then again whn u r reunited u feel heaven on earth ⭐️

wow how beautiful thoughts just loved it...😳

Riya u hv penned down all these crucial stuffs in a beautiful subtle way touching the reader's hearts ...melting them exciting them and soothing them eventually ...😃

thank you yaar, u don't know how good it feels to read ur comments😊

awesomely written👏👏👏 ...affecting us to love this story head over heels😃

awiii..😃

am now waiting for Raghu's expressions hearing the goodnews from Antara...😃😃😃

lol... everyone understood the fact... really we are impossible😆

and yess the heavenly hug on the bridge was out of the world ...it wdnt got better than this one whch u hv created ...hatts off to you Ria ... i just L-O-V-E-D it 😃 and got facsinated by the scene ...

oye... u know ur comemnts really made me blush/😳

thank you for gifting us this soul touching scene .😃

luv u Ria ...