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Thought of adding bridge scene like Nikki 😆
{credit goes to the owner}
well...well...well...here you are with a new update.First of all thank you so much for updating ,as we know that you are in your recovering phase from a minor accident but still you did update.Your such kinda gestures really make you one of the precious gem of this forum.😊
Here goes my review:-"Jitna bhagna hain bhag le... Par tu mere se door nahin jaa payegi... Jidhar bhi jyegi na... Mere ko tere samne khara payegi... Aaj tub hag rahi hain... Par bappa kasam antara...Ek din tu khud aise hi bhag ke mere pass wapas ayegi..."
The opening lines were fantastic...very soul soothing.It makes you get drowned into your own musings.😳Ria I don't think it could have been any more beautiful than this.It was so beautiful..so serene the way he crushed her in a tight embrace with a sarcastic smile on his face while remembering those lines.It was like bang on for me.Description of Antara's tormented features was painful to know.When she held on his jacket so tightly even in unconscious state only made me come to a conclusion that...this time she wasn't ready to let go...of him...where her heart resides...
where her soul resides...Trust me on this, even if I say it was 1000 times beautiful...it won't be enough appreciation for this scene.
Critic:-I don't know what others feel about this update ...I'm sorry but there was something amiss in this update.I can't make out what it is but something didn't click or reach my heart after the bridge scene.It might be the pace or intensity.When Raghu confronted Antara about her leaving him and when Raghu got to know regarding Antara's pregnancy...I couldn't connect to both the things.I didn't get to see an intense Raghu but I got to see an emotional Raghu in front of me.There are certain things which keep nagging my brain..Since one month when he was searching for Antara...Why didn't he set mumbai underworld on fire to depict his vengeance???
...Why was he being weak???...why not ruthless???...why not angry???
...why didn't he feel betrayed????...Why was it a weak and emotional confrontation???...why did Raghu lack intensity when they both shared their precious moments on knowing Antara's pregnancy??? ...was it easy for him to live with separation????...why did he forgive Antara so easily for the emotion turmoil he went through???...Phew!😲
...Why was he being weak???...why not ruthless???...why not angry???...why didn't he feel betrayed????...Why was it a weak and emotional confrontation???...why did Raghu lack intensity when they both shared their precious moments on knowing Antara's pregnancy??? ...was it easy for him to live with separation????...why did he forgive Antara so easily for the emotion turmoil he went through???...Phew!😲no doubt even she suffered a hell lot but here I want to focus on only Raghu.These all questions erupted in my brain when I got to see different shade of Raghu.I know he's not the same as he was previously...but betrayal does get you back into the game and revenge is a dish when served cold.😳
May be I am looking though a different POV and you are creating it differently.😆😆😆
but overall it was overwhelming👏...beautiful!⭐️
the only thing I'm missing here is...ADRENALINE!😆
Pls don't be offended but this is what I feel...
Hope to see more n more of GAG...do update asap
love you loads n loads n loads...mwah baby 🤗
P.s:- now don't kill me after reading it.😲
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