Gun and Guitar-a RANTARA ff(3rd thread)(last chapter @pg66) - Page 26

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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved it 😊
atlast do dilon ka Milan Ho hi gaya.
Waise bhi antara aur Raghu kabhi alag nahi Ho sakte.
Really rantara rocks.
Dear, thanks for such a wonderful update.
Love you.
👏
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ankusanu thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
thanks ria fr dat bridge hug scene 👏 👏...
jst loved dat...awww finally raghu ko mil gy antara 😳...
so happy dat dey r together again 😃...
cldnt see dem separated 😔...
cld feel d pain of separation 😔 😭...
bt in between all dis loved mm n shivanis fight 😆...
hey ria i cld guess antara ko kya hua hai 😉 😆...
hmmm so easy na 😉... 👍🏼...
wonderful update ria as usual ... ..

ps ... plz take care..u met with accident 😲... theek ha na zyada toh nh hua na kuch???? stay blessed

🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
beautiful update ria...u r amazing writer...all emotions n feelings were expressed so nicely that can make anyone cry...rantara met after 1 month..jo ek dusre se ek minute ki duri bhi nhi seh sakte the...wo pure ek mahine baad mile...thanks fr including bridge scene its was so perfect...raghu will come to know some good news...hehehe..just a thought..anyways...rantara's reunion happened...the happiest thing fr us!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Riya ...this update of urs hv soothed my heart enormously ...😃

falling in love is an amazing feeling😳...loving someone with ur life is such a wonderful experience ...and then being loved eqally by that special person is one of the most precious blessings of God 😃...and when seperation happens it feels like life is being sucked out from one 🤢 ...and then again whn u r reunited u feel heaven on earth ⭐️
Riya u hv penned down all these crucial stuffs in a beautiful subtle way touching the reader's hearts ...melting them exciting them and soothing them eventually ...😃
awesomely written👏👏👏 ...affecting us to love this story head over heels😃
am now waiting for Raghu's expressions hearing the goodnews from Antara...😃😃😃
and yess the heavenly hug on the bridge was out of the world ...it wdnt got better than this one whch u hv created ...hatts off to you Ria ... i just L-O-V-E-D it 😃 and got facsinated by the scene ...
thank you for gifting us this soul touching scene .😃
luv u Ria ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely .
Loved it .
Thank you .
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow...mindblowing chapter ria...👏
feels like a "fresh droplet formed on a flower"...after d chaotic storm...😊
so soothing n heart -rendering...😳
d chapter's beautifully described...from inspector madhavan's help... to kitkit of MM n Shivani...😉
as alwayz u hav given focus to all d factors...👍🏼...u r a ⭐️...⭐️...⭐️...

ahhh...Raghu n inspector's convo...😊...
rightly said...👍🏼...wen Antu does Yedipanthi only Raghu can handle her...😃...
oye-hoye inspector Madhavan ne toh pahle se hi pata laga liya auto... aur uske owner ke baare mein...Raghu ke liye...woh bana cupid (inspector se match-maker/finder)...😆...😳...(sorry..samaj ne aaya ke inspector ko kaise describe karoon...apt words nahi mile...😃...😆...)

Raghu n Pantarlog on mission dhundo Antara...
(ria ji dont mind abt dis...😊...u alwayz confuse us wid ur gender reference..u kno...his ka her ho jaata hai n etc...ab car n jeep mein bhi confusion...Raghu nikla police station se leke car n reached railway station in Jeep...i understand u write it in super speed...aur story itni intense n gripping hoti hai...ki yeh saari baatein unimportant lagti hai aur hum overlook bhi kar dete hain...lekin phir bhi padthe waqt confusion toh ho hi jata hai...😃...😆...yedi behna...😉...)...

Haila...one month leap...😲..
Raghu still clueless about Antara...n on d other side madhavan about DM......
Raghu challenged even Bappa......👍🏼...haiye (mera) ❤️Raghu❤️...😳...
Akhir Antara ki khabar mil gayi......👏...Antara bani school (music) teacher...

i was re-reading paras to not miss anything...😊...
d description of Antu's state...😔...😭...ria...👍🏼...👏...
Antara dizzy...kahin khush khabri toh nahin...???...😃...😳...😉..
(Kotagiri mein bhi log hindi bolte hai kya among localites...???...😆...)...

Raghu going towards kotagiri...👍🏼...
waah waah ria ji...kya connection joda Shivani se school ka...hats off...👏...

yay......finally hero-heroine ka Milan ho gaya...👏...aur Raghu ko milne wali hai Khush Khabri bhi...😃......"Party toh banti hai"...🥳...apun sab log aur Raghu ke bhidulog milkar manayeinge...😃...mujhe lagta hai ki agar Raghu ka bas chale toh akkhe(whole) world ko party de...😳...😃......🥳...

n ria ji jitna aap mindblowing likthi ho...utna hi apna mindblowin khayal bhi rakhiye...😃...specially ur thumbelina...😆...😉...sorry lagta hai comments mein yedipanti ka overdose hogaya...😃...

Waiting for more......haaye-aaye RaNtara...😳...

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update 👏
loved each nd everthing 😃
raghu released
inspector madhvn is really nice
he informef raghu abt antu nd evn tried helping him find her 😊
Omg 1 full month 😭 seperation 😭
nobody knew wer she went 😭
raghu nd antara poor souls 😭
shivani finally got some info abt her 😛
raghu soo happy 😳 mee too
d way u described abt antu's condition 😭 i was jus crying
nancy aunty is soo sweet.antu as a music teacher
felt soo bad.Antu ill is there some news 😉 😃
finally d moment wen raghu saw her 😃 was soo happpy
antu was running away he tried to.stop her.
Nd finally d "BRIDGE SCENE" 😳 superb 👏
d hug aftr soo long they finally met
Continue soon.thnx for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
"There is that hole that never heals and it tells me its pain through images and words. I am always chasing it. Running barefoot in the night"



Yayyy!!!...got to read two updates 🥳...its awesome


okay...okay...I'm controlling my emotions now...!
phew*
it was just a big WOW! for me.👏
now coming to both the updates:-
Well it was a kind of payback by Antara ...!😳
as Raghu always protected her...kept her safe from evil...did everything to ensure her safety even at the stake of his own life.It isn't wrong in anyway if love is termed to be a selfless emotion and you depicted it in a true way here.I seriously want to applaud Antara's character for being so strong ,while hearing all the naked truth through Daya mai's mouth.
such conditions can lead a person to do terrible emotional things but the way Antara kept holding on as she knew what it would cost her if she gets caught.It was unbearable to hear all the revelations again.Its good that Antara got to know where the true evidence was.
What an emotional inner turmoil she went through while knowing the facts and deciding on Raghu's safe future.It was a battle in every way."saala...apun ko bhi bahut rona aa gaya!" 😭
You showed different shades of Antara when she met Madhvan to testify.She was an individual...a girl...a lover...a true responsible citizen...and a true wife to her husband.
the separation part always remains painful.it creates an ache in your heart.😭😭😭
It was totally devastating to see Raghu in that condition on knowing that Antara had left him for his benefit without caring for her life.
well as they say-
" Memories are fragile. They bleed. Sometimes the slightest touch can rip open old wounds. And remind us all over again. That some pain lasts."
now this is what I got to see in your latest update...They both have drowned themselves in each other's memories...
Somewhere Raghu feels betrayed by his own love as one month has passed but still he can't find about her whereabouts.
btw loved this lines-
"Yeri hain woo... Achanak se dimag ulta daurne lagta hain uska... tab ussey koi samhal naii sakta ek apun ke siwahh..."
"Mere dushman meri jaaan kya legi misscall?! Tu bhool gayi... apun ki jaan tu hain yaar... tujhse door rahoon to aise hii jaan nikal jata hain apun kaa..."
After so many painful and depressing moments...outta blue something happened like Boom😆 and Raghu came to know about Antara ...and all credit goes to shivani for making worthy use of her eyes 😆
Finally Raghu arrived in Kohagiri to take his Antara back.😳😳😳The way they came face to face was like Bang on!...the facial expressions of Raghu were mind blowing which were narrating their own story of being in pain from getting separated from his only love...being betrayed by his very own god mother.
and the best part was the bridge scene...Totally Sensational!
a bleeding heart in search of its soul...!!!
It was BEAUTIFUL...BEAUTIFUL...BEAUTIFUL in every sense..I loved it.👏
last but not the least...I think the most important moment in the upcoming update...As its past one month so I'm expecting a good news 😆 I hope her UPT{urine pregnancy test} is positive 😆..now this part was scandalizing 😆agli baar do come with sweets along with an update.😉
Loved the way she collapsed in his arms...😳
I'm mesmerized by the way you are penning down this story..breathtakingly beautiful.
The moment passed as if it meant nothing.Yet, all my life had led to it.
Please do update soon...
love ya.😳

P.s:- so sorry to hear about your accident...I hope you get well soon enough 😳...regarding your hurt thumb...put on thumb spica but don't forget to give an update😃😃😃...I know I'm being selfish 😆 but yeh sab GAG ka asar hai 😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank god riaaa no more separation track...
Antara and raghu ek dusre ko bohot miss kar rahe hai...
Shivani ne kammal kar dia...rantara ka milna mujw ddej k video ki yaad dilata hai...lovely written ria...tooo good...
Amazing update dear...love you...

Teri mehfil se nikale kisi ko khabar tak na hui,
Tera mud mud ke dekhna humein badnaam kar gaya...!!!!!!


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Posted: 11 years ago
i forgot to especially mention d Bridge Scene...😃...but its obvious na...n nikki has also put up in her comment...😊...

...Mindblowing...Extraordinary...Out-of d-world waali Bridge Hug scene...

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