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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ankusanu

fantastic update 👏...
ria mindblowinggg one... n dat dm 😡 😡 😡
hw evil n cheap shes... thank God antu ko sach
jldi pata chal gya 😃 ... n she told everything to police 😎...
bt antu decided to leave raghu 😲... dats so painful 😭...
plz hmare rantara ko zyada der dur mat rakhna ...plz jldi mila dena
dena unko... n poor raghu ab kaise dhindega antara ko 🤢...
wonderful update waiting fr nxt part 👏

thx priyu😳
yip i know DM is kamini o ki kamini...🤢
wat can she do else... it was only way for her to keep raghu safe.
don't worry rantara going to meet so soon...😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: abhiyaswaron

What an update dear 👏👏👏

Dayamayi's words reminded me of the show.
She transformed Raghu into a Katputli but Antara brought out the human out of him..
Madhavan, liking his character..
The precap seems very gripping...
You have promised that furthermore , there wouldn't be any depressing chapters. Plz keep ur promise..
-Prerna

aww thx😳
well DM's charecter is always same...😆
She transformed Raghu into a Katputli but Antara brought out the human out of him..
gosh this line from ur comment is so meaningful andd described their situation very well..😳
yup... no more depressing sad chaoter from now on... enough of rona dhona...😆
thx agaain😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
fantastic update Riyu ...i love the fact that here Antara is super brave ...perfect comination of beauty with brain ...
the way she proved her love for Raghu is so so heart melting ...the whole scenario was penned down wonderfully ...i was equally shattered with ur Antara reading ur update 😲😆
the precap made me smile at last 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Tsuchi

yr ria..it was really emotional n depressing update.bt bravo fr antara's intelligence n braveness to save raghu👏...pr ek baat to kehni padegi...agr villan strong ho to hero ki herogiri aur badh jati hai..😎 DM bhut strong negative character hai..uske bina kuch adhura lagata.haan show mein use hi hero bna dala...and that's hurts alot..😭..pr is story mein ab raghu ki asli fight shuru ho chuki hai.👍🏼.and antara yahan bhi BMB se inspired.😆..inspector madhvan has done brilliant job..hats off to him as well..👏

waiting fr next part raghu will find her soon...😳

kya baat kahin hain yaar... vilaain strong huya too kya huya... apna hero bhi too kam nahin.. sare voillains ko ura dega... in rajnikant style..😎
haan yaar antu inspired by bhag milkha bhag always...😆
haan yaar... maine socha har police officer humesha gadha aur bhondu kyun hoo...koi smart inspector bhi too kabhi kabhi chahiye.. so here comes inspector madhvan...😆
thx yaar😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: honeybees22

wow amazing chapter RI

Rantara missing each other badly
antu leaving??? now Raghu will go even mad
no more depressing chapters yipeee
pls cont asap

yup no more depressing chapter now... ab khus??😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: riddzykhanmalik

It was emotional update riaaa...

First time tumne muje rula dia iss update se...😭😒
Rantara separated...😒
Dm k arrest warrant aa gaye...but she is tun away...
Yani ue angel open hai...fir se re entry karegi...
But now raghu has challenge...find antara at any cost...
Precap was promising shivani knows where is antara...
So wait kiss ka kar rahe hai chalo sab raghu k piche piche...
Please update soon yaar...I m waiting...

Bohot naraaz lagti hai wo mujse,
Aaj to usne mujse khwaabo main bhi baat nahi kii...!!!!

thank you ridzy...
god ridzy this sayari is heart melting... u made me emo... u are an awsome sayari writer👏
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Roy.nikki143

Finally riyu you gave us update 😃

I know you are busy but still tune update di love yaa for that 🤗
Coming back to the update
Lovely yet emotional one 😳😕
Finally Antara ne sab sun liya abt DM uski itne himmat Raghu ko phasaeye 😡
Antara ne bohat samajdari dekhaeye 😉
Yar Rantara ke woh moments sab recall hogaye 😳
I just love it so much ek min key liye to emotional hogaye thy
Yeahhh Raghu jail se chot gaya
Next update tak mein nahi ruk sakty riyu ☺️
And you know the reason very well 😉
Continuee soon 😃😆

aww thank you nikki no 1...🤗
not just busy re... actually i took so long to update this... u know naa how much this update drains me emotionally... itma assan nahin hain likhna...
but thank god... no more depression and seperation at last😃...
and ur surprise is coming soon...😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: RaNtara4vr

kitna depressing and ronewaala n emotionalwaala update ria...😔...😭...

sorry yaar... but i wanna finish these in thsi single update... eveen i can't take this seperation track anymore.. so finished eveything within it...
Antu in naik basti...😲...remmbrng past moments wid Raghu...😔...
no guards on d gate...🤔...Antu came to take marriage certificate...???...😕...
Antu will find d evidence...(no idea 4 nw...)...
ohhh...😡...DM telling her plan to destroy RaNtara...😡...🤢...🤬...
Antu did right by following Jagga listening to her instincts...
...dreadful events coming ahead...😒...
yup so true... this DM won't leave our rantara till she had breath in her lungs... i know it's disgussting but thats how she is...🤢
ohhh...i so hate dat Daayan...😡...😡...🤬...🤢...y doesn't she die...???......😡...😡...🤬...🤢...
shaitaan ki maut itni jaaldi nahin atti naa...😡
Antu's going to leave him...😔...for his safety...😒...😭...
she had no other options left yaar.. how could she stay back knowing that her company will put raghi in danger... she loves raghu so much and for him she can go to any extent... even she is ready to give her life... ye too bahut choti si cheez hain.. but yes it was so painful for her...😭
ahhh...the myriad ways of DESTINY...
don't forget that destiny is always the game changer in the story... antu thinks her destiny is against her.. but actually it is the only this which always brought them together as raghu said once.. so just wait and watch😉
Antara recollecting their memories...😭...😭...😭...
again separation continues...😔😭...
don't worry it won't last long now...😊
inspector got d evidence of Raghu's innocence...👍🏼...
Antu going away...😭...😭...💔...🥺...
Raghu's escape plan...he cud feel her presence as always...
true love naa...😳
Antu left d city...Raghu's release orders...DM again alerted.....
Gosh ria u give equal importance to all...
thx yaa😆
Antu in kotagiri...Nilgiri...Kashmir se seedhe south... Tamil Nadu...😉...
ha ha... kashmir main tu kanyakumari...😆 .. rantara ka pyar too kashmir se kanyakumari tak famous hain...😉

ria yaar...just mind blowin...👏...kya likha hai aapne...👍🏼...
...my eyes r moist now...bowing down 4 ur writing...
humaara yeh haal hai...😭...toh aapka kya huwa hoga...yeh sab likthe waqt...😔...
just don;t ask me dude... thats why i took so long to write this UP.. it really drains u emotionally...
n e ways...humein toh pata hai...all will be well, in d end......waiting for it......
...all d best yaara...👍🏼...yedi behena...🤗...
aww thank you to u too... yedi behena 🤗

sorry yaar...i can't give proper formed comments after dis update...
heart-broken 💔 🥺 update ke liye broken comments...😭...😭...😭...
it was so wonderful comment yar i loved it😳❤️

love yaa dude😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: PurpleSunset

first of all...


I'm so happy that GAG completed its one year and its still going stronger day by day...🥳
wish to have many many many more Anniversaries for GAG with Seasons like 1...2...3...4...5... and so on...!!!!😃
arey baap re purple.. abhi story bahut jaldi end hine wali hain... so sorry😆

I'm so overwhelmed with the way story is turning...with every update there is something new...something unexpected...something unbelievable!😉
yaar chal ab itni bhi tareef mat kar... 😆
I never thought that Madhvan would be able to capture Raghu...😲
what's going on in your mind???😆...By reading all of it I can only conclude one thing...You are penning it down in a way which is going to be symbolic in GAG's history..these conditions are awakening a Knight inside Raghu who is valorous/valiant...mettlesome...lionhearted...and audacious!
well!...he has started preparing for the toughest battle of his life against his own god mother to seek revenge for separating him from his only love.."Antara"...his only hope to live!😊
so true😳
My heart leaped in joy when Raghu got to know that Antara is at her mamma's house...but the way his grip hardened on the phone on knowing that antara looked upset depicted many emotions flowing through him at that moment.😳
yeah thats true... seeing ur loved once in pain is th emost painful thing in this world... and also a rage.. a rage which wants to burn those people who caused her that immense pain...

So our Feisty Antara is back...loved it when she defended Raghu in front of her own Mamma-mammi 😃
yes at last...😆
It couldn't have been any better than these lines...

"HAAAN!!!! RAAT BITAYA HAIN MAINE USKE SATH.. TOO?!!!"

"Kya jaan na chahte hain aap?!! Yahin ki raaghu ne mujhe chua hain ki nahin?!! Yes!! He touched me and I let him!!! why shouldn't I? He is my husband...fully, legally!!She has right on me... and you know what I am not ashamed off saying this to the hold world that I love him and will always love only him!!

"aur sun na hain aap ko... too suniye... woo chahta tha too mujhe zaabardasti apna bana ssakta tha... uske pass pura mauka tha... par usney kaabhi bhi aisa nahin kiya... kissi bhi tarah ki zabar dasti naahin ki usss ney mujhe... kyun pata hain mama ji... kyun ki mujhe hasil nahin karna chahta thaw woo... pyaar karta tha mujhse.. aur bas itna chahta tha ki main bhi uss sey pyar karoon..."

"Pahele main bhi ussey wohi samajhti thi... janwar, gunda!!... kya kuch nahin kaheti thi main usssey.. kitni chot pauchayi maine ussey meri baton se.. fir bhi uss ney kuch nahin kahan... uss ney too mujhe chuya tak nahin... jab tak maine khud ussey izazat nahin di... Akhir mujhe sach nazar ayaa.. Ek gangstar jo ki police ke top list mein hain.. uska asli chehera nazar ayya mujhe... dekha ki kitne sare jakham apne andar chupayein fir raha hain woo... bahut akela hain woo.. andar se bilkul khokla aur toota huya ek inshan joo pyar ke liye taras raha hain..."

"Bataiyen maine kya gakat kiya joo maine uske jakhmon ko bharna chaha... usskey akelepan koo door karna chaha... ussey apna dil de diya... Haan main raghu se pyar karti hoon... apna sab kuch de chuki hoon ussey!! Chahein duniya mujhe galat mane par main jaanti hoon maine koi galti nahin ki.. hum log galat nahin hain... humara pyar galat nahin hain!!"
ayla tune too sare ke sare dialouges hi likh diya😲😆
totally understood Mamma ji's pov as he was trying to protect Antara...
yup thats true... he was all trying to save antara anyhow.. cause to him raghu was still a criminal... he didn;t knew about the change in him cause by antara...but as he knew everything he understood that he was hurting her for her sake.. andd also it got clear ti him that her happiness was with raghu,,, so he let her go😳

Marvelous update!

It was Bang On baby! 👏


So Antara has finally decided to come back where Raghu is ...in order to save him...

"If Raghu is the valorous Knight...Antara is his shinning armour"

Its their Love... Its their Battle...Its GAG!!!!
Oye hoye... it's an awsome explanation of this story in a single line purply🤗
do update soon baby!
love ya...mwah 🤗



love u too... muahhh🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pampz

fantastic update Riyu ...i love the fact that here Antara is super brave ...perfect comination of beauty with brain ...

the way she proved her love for Raghu is so so heart melting ...the whole scenario was penned down wonderfully ...i was equally shattered with ur Antara reading ur update 😲😆
the precap made me smile at last 😃

antu was always brave and cool headed from starting... thats how i portrayed her. remember how she helped to catch aman and to defuse the bomb which was planted in her collage function, also how she managed to escape from adi and her nasty plans and also last but not the least how she escaped from kalavati when DM sold her to that wretched woman... she was always like that and at least i tried to portray her like thats... diff from others and thats why our raghu goes lattu on antu seeing those rare qualities in such a vulnerable girl like her... though she acted a bit insane at forst when it ccomes to raghu...😆..(well not her fault actually... raghu's charm is enough to affect on anyone's mind that the person became insane in front of him🤣) ... but though she was the girl with guts...😳
yup i know it was sad and depressing one... sorry to make u all cry... but i wanna finish this all in this chapter cause i can't keep up with this kinds of depressing tracck anymore yaar... it drains u emotinally when u are penning down such kinds of scene... thats why i take long time to update this parts... it was really hard to picture this kind of scenes and u know why...😭
but now i am happy a bit now... at least i got over the depressing phase of this story and it's heading towards climax now...😳
and last but not the least... thank you vampy ji...😆... for ur wonderful cpmments and listening to my bakbak...🤣...,love u..🤗🤗

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