RaNtara Valentine TS:- Sajna... COMPLETED.... - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
Simply awesome haya 😳
I am eagerly waiting for your update
How they will confess their love 😃
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
Read the two first parts in one shot
Interesting story
Wait your third part
Thanks for the PM
Update soon please


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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
haya vry nice update dear..
so simple yet beautiful..
both rantara in love with each other..
lovely waitinh fr nxt part
thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
wow lo vely update dear
tia rashika playing cupid
precap...I am waiting dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
wow haya...superb.👏 👏
loved it.⭐️ ⭐️
thanks for pm. and continue soon😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
WoW Haya...!!!
Wonderfully written 👏
This story is something different...I LOVED IT
Both the updates were BANG ON 😉
I enjoyed it thoroughly...it was just amazing for me...
Your writing fasinates me..Im Awestruck now...😳
Do update soon and thanx for the Pm 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello All...
Thank U So much For Reading...
Last update is up..

Raghu was looking at her. Her beauty was breath taking. Antara was giving the statement to inspector. She was stealing glances of raghu. Inspector was done with the statement. It was 12:30 when he finished. Raghu remebered that he had to take antara to lunch by 1 o'clock.. Raghu wanted to see whether antara remembers or not. As inspector stood up so did raghu. Antara was keep on looking at the clock then at him. She was confused.
Antara(to herself):- "i think he doesn't knows..."
Antara stood up.
Antara:- "ummm raghu ap ja rahay hain.."
He was on 9th cloud when she called him. What a sweet voice she had. Raghu turned and saw at the innocent beauty standing behind him. He felt happy that she talked to him. The way she called him gave butterflies in his stomach.
Raghu:- "haan woh mujhay kuch kaam hai..."
Antara:- "hmmm o ok..."
Raghu:- "q koi kam tha??"
Antara:- "nahin woh aunty ne mujhay kaha tha keh aj w woh humein lunch par jana hai..."
Raghu:- "hmmm toh chalo phir chaltay hain..,"
Antara:- "magar apko toh kaam par jana hai..."
Raghu:- "haan jana hai... Ummm miss antara kaul roll no 341 kay sath lunch par.."
Antara was nervously looking down.
But when he said what he had to do she felt happy.It was like she got heaven on earth.
Antara:- "umm i need two minutes..."
Raghu:- "take all your time."
They both gave a smile to each other. Antara went up while raghu sat in the hall. After a while Mrs. Kaul came where raghu was sitting and saw the clock it was 12:40 . She came to raghu and sat next to him. Raghu saw her and sat straight.
Mrs. Kaul:- "raghu aik bat pochon beta".
Raghu:- "ji aunty q nahin??"
Before she could ask antara came down. Mrs. Kaul looked towards as raghu was back was facing antara. Antara was wearing a Pink anarkali with pink bangles.Her hairs were open. She wore simple make-up. A thin line of eyeliner, kohl in her eyes. A simple light pink lipgloss.She was looking absolutely beautiful.
Mrs.Kaul:- "lo antara agayi..."
Raghu turned and was lost looking the beautiful figure infront of him. He was all froze.He Was finding it difficult to blink his eyes.Antara was searching something in her bag. She was looking very innocent.Raghu kept staring her. He was all lost.
Antara:- "Mama apne mera cell phone dekha?"
Mrs.Kaul:- "haan woh kitchen mein hai... thair main laa kar deti hoon..."
Antara nodded in yes. She closed her bag and lift her face up. She was shock to see raghu looking at her like their was no tomorrow. They had an eyelock (mahi tu moment). After a while Mrs.Kaul came back with her mobile.She was about to say something when she saw them lost in each other. Mrs.Kaul laughed and cleared her throat. They both came out of the trance.
Raghu:- "umm main w woh bahir hoon... c car mein... bye aunty.." Saying this he left.Antara was all red by now.Mrs.Kaul came to her and handed her the mobile. She was about to leave when Mrs.Kaul said.
Mrs.Kaul:- "have a nice time. aur sara time Aik dusray ko ghortay na rehna..."
With this she laughed and antara got nervous.
Antara:- "bye momma..."
As she came out, she saw him sitting in his jeep. Antara smiled and opened the first pessenger door. She sat inside and put the belt on. Raghu was looking at her and smiling. As antara was finished she sat keeping her hands up and down. Raghu was still looking at her. Antara felt his gaze and started to blush.
Antara:- "h hum chalein?"
Raghu:- "hmmm..."
With that he started the jeep.He kept stealing glances of her.She was all nervous. Raghu stopped his jeep infront of the pearl restaurent. He stepped out and went to antara's side. He opened her door. She stepped out. They went inside and had a great time at lunch. They had a great time and enjoyed. Raghu drove antara back at home. Antara was all happy. She had been to alot of lunches with family and friends but this wa different. She was happy. It was night when antara's phone rang.
Antara saw raghu's name on it. She felt excited as well as nervous.
Antara:- "hello."
Voice:-"hi bhabhi kaise ho?"
It was not raghu it was rasika.
Antara:- "ohhh Rasika main theek hoon!"
Rasika:- "acha bhabhi ap se aik bat karni thi"
Antara:- "haan q nhn"
Rasika:- "bhabhi ap next friday kia kar rahi hain?? Woh actually bhai busy hain... kia ap meray sath shopping par chalein gin... 16th ko maa ka brthday hai aur mujhay advice chahyai".
Antara:- "haan q nhn sure".
Rasika:- "thank u so much."
With that she hung the phone.
The next week she didnt heard or see raghu. It was Friday. Antara was all unhappy as it was valentine day. She knew raghu was busy as rasika mentioned.They shopped and had lunch outside. As they took the cab to drive back home rasika remebered something and stroke her head.
Rasika:- "Bhool gai"
antara:- "kia??"
Rasika:- "meri parlour ki appointment hai.."
Antara:- "haan>??"
Rasika:- "chaliye na bhabhi.. mujhay bari mushkil say mili thi.."
Antara:- "ok theek hai".
Antara told the cab driver to take it to some XYZ parlor.
Rasika went inside and gave money to the receptionist.
The assistant came and took antara inside.
Antara:- "rasika yeh sab.."
Rasika:- "ohh i saw u need some things to be done so i thought of it.."
Rasika gave a bag to antara.
Rasika:- "yeh dress ap finish kay baad pehnna..."
before antara could ask or do she was taken..
Rasika called someone.
Rasika:- "my part is done.."
and hung up.
After 3 hours, antara stepped out. It was like a new world to her. She was dressed in a red anarkali with silver work. She wore a matching pair of earings. Bangles on right hand and a big red and white ring on left hand. she had her hairs open and a light make up but stunning she looked.
As she came out she saw rasika gone. She was nervous when the receptionist called her.
Receptionist:- "miss antara kaul?"
Antara:- "yes thats me..."
Receptionist:- "this way mam..."
Antara followed her. She came out of the parlor. A black limousine was parked outide the parlor. A man dressed in white uniform opened the door. And gestured his hand as to sit.
Antara sat inside with a whole of nervous look.
As the limousine left rasika stepped out of the pillar. she again called someone.
Rasika:- "we are clear, she is yours."
and hung up again.
Antara was all confused as it was not her brthday or she was going to clebrate valentines day. Beacuse raghu was busy and she knew as a serious man.
She was Lost when the limo stopped. The driver came and antara steeped out. The driver sat back and drove off. Antara saw lights glittering. She slowly took steps towards them.
Antara saw a sign board that says "hi miss antara kaul..."
Antara was more confuse. she took another step and saw another board that said "confuse.."
antara became nervous. she took another step and sawanother board "follow the rose path and find all your answers.
The rose path started. It was like a carpet.Antara was going on when she saw the path going under a door. As she opened the door she saw the path but as she lift her head up she saw herself on all the walls. Herself in yellow anrkali.. smiling,gesturing,working.
She was astonished.
"Happy Valentines day... Do U like it??"
A voice came from behind.
Antara felt a shiver. She knew the voice. It was raghu's. She felt butterflies in her tummy. She clenched her anarkali corner and turned.
He stood there wearing a white pant with red shirt. He was looking handsome. He approached towards antara..
Antara:- "umm yeh s sabb.."
Before she could complete she saw him coming.
Raghu:- " kitne sawal pochti ho..."
Antara:- "yeh sab apne kia"
At this raghu was standing near to her.
Raghu:- "haan... q pasand nhn aya..."
Antara:- "lekin is sab kia zarorat thi"
Raghu:-"thi zarorat... aik baat thi jo kehna chahta tha bus mauka nhn mil raha tha.."
raghu took a breath. Antara was standing fixing her eyes on him.
Raghu took her hand and pushed her into him.
Raghu:- "antara i love u... bohat time say balkeh jab say tumhay university dekha tha i was in love with u bus mauka nhn mila.. i love u... roz tumhay atay phir classes laite canteeen mein parhtay aur wapis jatay dekhta tha..."
Antara had tears in her eyes. Before raghu could say anything further antara hugged him tightly. Raghu was amazed by this action.
Raghu hugged her back and was happy. After a while he broke the hug and looked at antara who was all blushing.
Raghu:- "antara say something.."
Antara:- "umm w woh i love u tooo.."
Raghu felt happy. He went near her and kissed her on her cheecks. A shiver ran down her spine.
Raghu:- "are u hungry..."
Antara:- "i m famished"
Raghu took her hand went to the dinner table. The table was decorated perfectly with red white sheets. All fav dishes of antarawere present. Both enjoyed the dinner. After that raghu gave a box to antara.. It was gold chain. The pendant said "RANTARA".
Antara was happy. Raghu was looking at her. She was happy. They both had a great time and a great life.

Ok People...
I m Real late...
but ending this romantic month with a romantic update...
Andas, chappals, sab welcomed...
thank u so much...
Do Like Andcomment...
Regards,
Haya.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Omg! Omg! Omg!
It's jst MAGICAL
Raghu is sooo Romantic...
Loved d way he planned their V day.
Rasika is too gud, hw sweet of her
Loved this update.
Edited by niki28 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: niki28

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Omg! Omg! Omg!
It's jst MAGICAL
Raghu is sooo Romantic...
Loved d way he planned their V day.
Rasika is too gud, hw sweet of her
Loved this update.


thanx aot...
i was hell nervous...
ur comments relieved me...
thank u soo much for reading...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
haya loved it yaar...
yup it was late...
but better late than never,
glad that you updated it...
loved it so so much.
it is such a sweet story.
rasika is so good here.
omg raghu arranged surprises for antu in v day...
what a lovely surprise he gave...
at last both of them confessed...
aperfect ending of a perfect story..
cudoes to you.

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