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A Velantine TS For RaNtara...
On the per request of my dear SUCHI...
Happy Valentines Day To All..
Everybody wrote an OS,SS...
Sorry to make u read alot...
I Don't Know What I M Writing...
So here we go...
A black jeep came and stopped outside a primary school . Out came a young man wearing a black jean, a white shirt and a black jacket. A semi gun jacket with guns tucked in. The school was secured from all over. He roamed his eyes on the school. As he was looking and understanding the situation going on inside, the inspector came and saluted.
Inspector:- "good afternoon sir. I m sorry sir, i knew you were supposed to join from tomorrow but he constantly asking for you. I informed the comissioner when he told me that you have reached and can come here. Sir, i have heard alot about you and so with that i thought that you should come here."
RaghuNath Naik, a police cop by profession but more of a field person. He was a man with his own decision. Have solved a lot of cases and nabbed many of the theives. He was busy looking at the school.
Inspector:- "raghu sir?"
Raghu:- "hmmm... Who is he?!"
Inspector wiped his sweat off. Inspector:- "s sa satya..."
Hearing this his jaws tightened.
Satya Deshmukh, a well known criminal to the mumbai city. A merciless man who killed his own father in order to take over the power and mumbai.
Raghu:- "have you emptied the school?"
Inspector:- "yes sir but he has a hostage."
Raghu looked at him with a lifted eyebrow.
Inspector:- "she is ummm your fiancee and she works here as you know".
Raghu became more concerned. As he heard his fiance he looked toward the ring on his right finger.
Raghu:- "any back doors?"
Inspector:- "there is a back door and is used for bringing stuff to the school."
Raghu:- "well then its time to pay satya a visit."
Inspector:- "yes sir."
And they both started to approach at the back. As they reached the backside they saw a white wooden door. The guard opened it and raghu went inside. As he was inside he was lost thinking something.
** FLASH BACK**
Raghu was posted in delhi when he got a call from his home.
Raghu:- "hello ayi." Mrs sheela naik, the mother of raghu and a widow of a former inspector.
Mrs. Naik:- "raghu beta kaise ho?? " Raghu:- "ayi main theek hoon ab batao?? Rasika theek hai???"
Rasika Naik, the only sibling raghu had. Raghu and rasika were the best sister brother jodi.
Mrs. Naik:- "haan woh theek hai... Acha beta sun.. Yahan main ne aik ladki dekhi hai.. Main ne jo tome tujhay dia tha woh khatam hogaya. Aur main ne teri wahan engagement kar di hai.."
Raghu:- "lekin ayi main..."
Mrs. Naik:- "ab main main mat kar... Mujhay woh ladki bohat pasand hai.. Abhi rasika tujhay us ring ki picture bhej day gi jo main uski engagement mein pehna ai hoon."
Raghu's jaw dropped.
Raghu:- "ayi ap ne meri engagement kar di.."
Mrs. Naik:- "haan.." Raghu:- "ok ayi... Jaisa ap sahi samjho.."
Mrs. Naik:- "main janti thi.. Mera beta kabhi bhi mujhay mana nahin karay ga.. Chal ab main rakhti hoon aur tu aram kar.." Raghu:- "ji ayi apna aur rasika ka khayal rakhna.."
As the call finished, raghu was all sad. He stood up and went to the projector kept in his room. He switched off the lights and came back. He switched on the projector. A girl, a beautiful girl appeared on the walls of the room. There were several photos of her on the walls. He was lost looking at her..
Raghu:- "kahan ho tum miss antara kaul??" With that he lay back his head on the edge. He was thinking the first time he saw her at the university. He was in his second year when she came to the university. He saw her at the door. He was sitting with his friends. Machinder aka machmach, karan, tarun, manan when a group of girls enter. They were all busy looking at them except raghu. As the group passed tarun said.
Tarun:- "yaar raghu a new batch came, freshers.. In mein hi koi girlfriend dhond lay yaar..."
MachMach:- "haan yaar..."
Raghu was about to say something when he saw her entering. She was wearing a white anarkali with dark blue borders. Bangles on her hand. Hairs left loose. Simple makeup was applied but she looked elegant. Her hazels and the beautiful red curved lips. He was all lost looking at her.
Raghu:- "beautiful."
All his friend were shock to hear and see this condition of raghu. All his friends looked at the girl he was looking at the girl. Manan:- "raghu tu theek toh hai..."
Raghu:- "h ha haan... But woh kaun hai??"
He said pointing at her.
MachMach:- "woh woh antara kaul. Mr anirudh kaul ki beti."
Raghu:- "anirudh kaul? Woh diamond walay.."
MachMach:- "haan..."
Manan:- "waise kehna paray ga.. Baap heray ka business karta hai aur beti aik dum kohinoor hai."
Raghu felt an angry.
Raghu:- "manan ankhein nechay kar... Sharam nhn ati tujhay??"
All were damned by what he said. Raghu left in anger from there. From that day onward he used to steal glances of her. From morning in her gate entry till the end going home. Her mother use to take her home. Her smile use to make him crazy. He was happy. With everyday his love for increased. It was an year raghu was mad for her but never expressed. He always thought that if he will do, maybe she will get scared. It was his birthday and MachMach was not able to understand what to gift him. Pooja who was a good friend of antara was his girlfriend. As the day ended, raghu after seeing her leaving home with her mother also left.
MachMach:- "yaar manan mujhay samajh nhn arahi raghu ko kia gift doon.."
Manan:- "main toh usay watch gift kar raha hoon rolex.."
MachMach:- "nah yaar kuch aisa keh usay yeh zindagi bhar yaad rahay.."
That's when pooja came.
Pooja:- "hello handsome.."
MachMach turned and hugged her.
Pooja:- "hi manan kaise ho???"
Manan:- "main theek hoon."
MachMach:- "chalein dear?"
Manan:- "kahan??"
MachMach:- "main pooja ko dinner lay kar ja raha hoon."
Manan:- "ok chal phir miltay hain.."
They were about to leave when pooja mobile rang.
Pooja:- "hello haan antara main tumhay woh notes ki pixs bhej doon gi".
As she said this MachMach got an idea. He turned and hugged her tightly.
Pooja:- "kia hua??"
MachMach:- "babes tumahy nhn pata tumne mujhay kia super se bhi upar wala plan dia hai."
He whispered something to pooja. First pooja denied and then agreed as he loved her.
It was raghu's birthday. Everybody came with their gifts. Raghu attended all. MachMach entered without any gift. Thats when raghu noticed.
Raghu:- "oye machmach mera gift kahan hai??"
MachMach:- "woh yaar main tujhay party kay baad room mein doon ga thora personal hai."
Raghu lifted an eyebrow and was confused looking at him. The birthday went well. But raghu was sad. He wanted to see her today also. But he wasn't able to as it was sunday and an off. As the party finished, all of them went up in raghu's room. Raghu was laying down while the boys were busy plugging something. They told raghu to keep his eyes close.
MachMach:- "chal ab ankhein khol."
Raghu opened his eyes and was suprised. Whole of his room was filled with antara.. On every wall was antara... He felt happy and hugged machmach.
Raghu:- "my best gift ever."
After that raghu graduated and decided to serve his country like his father. He was sent to delhi and was waiting ti get back antara in his life. He opened his eyes and saw his screen flashing with a message notofication. It was the ring that his mother was talking about.
** FLASH BACK ENDS**
His trance was broken when he heard voices. Voices of someone footsteps. As raghu continued he saw a man sitting on the chair. It was like he was keeping guard. Raghu waited for the oppurtunity. As he turned raghu went and took out the man that was a kind of objection. Raghu quitely went on and started to take out all the men. As he was near to terrace he heard screams. Screams of a girl. As he went up he saw satya backing him. He was talking to the inspector down on phone and was holding someone. Raghu quietly went on. But to his badluck he stepped on a broken piece of glass. Satya became concious and ended the call.
Satya:- "agaya tera hero.."
Satya:- "ao ao raghu naik... Bohat suna humne tumharay baray mein.. Aj dekh bhi letay hain."
Raghu:- "hmmm main ne bhi bohat suna teray baray mein aj dekh laite hain.."
As satya turned, raghu's eyes shot up. He was holding his fiance for sure but that was none other than miss antara kaul. His antara. Who he has been searching madly. She was wearing the ring that his mother gave her. Sh hasnt chnaged a bit. Raghu was angry as satya was holding her by the neck. She was scared. Tears were rolling down from her eyes.there was a small cut on her head. She was trying hard to get out of his hold. She looked towards raghu's hand and stopped for a while. She was looking at the engagement ring he was wearing. She looked back up. She Was Confused because she knew him.
Raghu:- "satya larki ki pechay kia chupta hai mujhse baat kar.."
Satya:- "Wohi toh kar raha hoon... Pehlay apni dono guns nikal aur zameen par rakh..."
Raghu was helpless. All he worried about was antara. He took out both his guns and placed them near his foot.
Satya:- "pagal samjha hai kia? idhar phaink meray pass.."
Raghu bent and threw them to him.
Satya:- "chal pehlay isko niptata hoon phir tujhse apnay dost ka badla loon ga"
Raghu:- "Dost ka badla??"
Satya:- "Aman... jisko tu ne delhi mein arrest karwaya aur woh encounter mein mara gay... encounter toh bhana tha... tu ne usko mara..."
Raghu understand what he was saying.
An year ago, he arrested a criminal who was trying to sell drugs to the college students. While on investigation he came to know that it was being provided by Aman.. He Arrested aman. As he was brought to station he tried to run in which raghu had to shoot him..
Raghu was still benting when he heard.
Satya:- "chal raghu ab toh bhi tayar reh"
With this he threw antara off. Raghu lept and caught antara's hand. She was very scared. He was all lost at her.
Antara:- "please mera hath mat choriye ga... M Main gir jaun gin..."
Raghu came back to reality and pulled her up. As he brought her up She fell on him. Her hairs covered whole face of raghu. Raghu was lost on the big hazels eyes which were looking at him. There were still tears in her eyes. He tucked her hairs behind her ear. She was still beautiful. He saw the cut on her forehead.
Satya:- "agar yeh romeo juliet ki class hogai ho toh main badla lay loon??"
Raghu stood up and looked at him. His hand turned into the fist.
Raghu:- "badla!!"
Satya came and punched raghu. Raghu bent down and punched hard on his stomach. He put a punch through his jaw. He dropped on the floor.
Raghu:- "uth... uth..."
Satya gathered courage and got up.
He again wanted to punch but raghu punched him hard on his nose.
Satya again fell down. Raghu saw he became unconcious. He went to antara who was shaking. Raghu was all nervous what to talk about.
Raghu:- "ummm i hope ap..."
Before he could complete Satya came and grab him from the neck. Antara's eyes widened.
Raghu was trying hard but satya's grip was hard. Antara took the rod which was lying on the ground. As she went to hit him. Satya grabbed it and threw raghu har. He slapped antara and she fell hitting her head with the pillar. She got unconcious.Ashe turned raghu shot him right in the heart.
Satya died at the spot. Raghu went and picked antara. Blood was coming from the side of her lips. He wiped it gently with his thumb. He stood up and signalled the the inspector to come up. He gently picked antara and took her down. He opened his jeep and placed her on the passenger seat.
Raghu:- "inspector, i m taking her home... u come afterwards to take the statement."
Inspector:- "ok sir"
He saluted raghu and left.
Raghu started the jeep and came to antara's place. He came and opened antara's door. He picked her up and went inside. Her head was on his chest. Rasika and tina saw this.
Tina kaul was the younger sister of antara. She was in school.
Rasika nd Tina both shouted.
"agayai woh log.."
With this.. Mr. Kaul, Mrs.kaul and Mrs.Naik rushed out. Raghu entered the door. They saw them and stood. The ladies were admiring the couple.
Raghu:- "Umm yeh behosh hai aur she is hurt."
All came back.
Mr.Kaul:- "haan isse iskay kamray mein lay jao..."
Raghu:- "kamra? kaunsa?"
Mrs.Kaul:- "yahan say upar first left."
Raghu nodded and left. Rasika was looking at her brother with a devilish smirk.
Well here is the half...
On the other half i m working...
Ready for all kind of chappals, tamatar...
Do Like And Comment...
Once again A very very happy Velantine day to All...
Regards,
Haya.
Index:-
Part#1:- Page#1
Part#2:- Page#2
Part#3:- Page#4
A Velantine TS For RaNtara...
On the per request of my dear SUCHI...
Happy Valentines Day To All..
Everybody wrote an OS,SS...
Sorry to make u read alot...
I Don't Know What I M Writing...
So here we go...
A black jeep came and stopped outside a primary school . Out came a young man wearing a black jean, a white shirt and a black jacket. A semi gun jacket with guns tucked in. The school was secured from all over. He roamed his eyes on the school. As he was looking and understanding the situation going on inside, the inspector came and saluted.
Inspector:- "good afternoon sir. I m sorry sir, i knew you were supposed to join from tomorrow but he constantly asking for you. I informed the comissioner when he told me that you have reached and can come here. Sir, i have heard alot about you and so with that i thought that you should come here."
RaghuNath Naik, a police cop by profession but more of a field person. He was a man with his own decision. Have solved a lot of cases and nabbed many of the theives. He was busy looking at the school.
Inspector:- "raghu sir?"
Raghu:- "hmmm... Who is he?!"
Inspector wiped his sweat off. Inspector:- "s sa satya..."
Hearing this his jaws tightened.
Satya Deshmukh, a well known criminal to the mumbai city. A merciless man who killed his own father in order to take over the power and mumbai.
Raghu:- "have you emptied the school?"
Inspector:- "yes sir but he has a hostage."
Raghu looked at him with a lifted eyebrow.
Inspector:- "she is ummm your fiancee and she works here as you know".
Raghu became more concerned. As he heard his fiance he looked toward the ring on his right finger.
Raghu:- "any back doors?"
Inspector:- "there is a back door and is used for bringing stuff to the school."
Raghu:- "well then its time to pay satya a visit."
Inspector:- "yes sir."
And they both started to approach at the back. As they reached the backside they saw a white wooden door. The guard opened it and raghu went inside. As he was inside he was lost thinking something.
Raghu was posted in delhi when he got a call from his home.
Raghu:- "hello ayi." Mrs sheela naik, the mother of raghu and a widow of a former inspector.
Mrs. Naik:- "raghu beta kaise ho?? " Raghu:- "ayi main theek hoon ab batao?? Rasika theek hai???"
Rasika Naik, the only sibling raghu had. Raghu and rasika were the best sister brother jodi.
Mrs. Naik:- "haan woh theek hai... Acha beta sun.. Yahan main ne aik ladki dekhi hai.. Main ne jo tome tujhay dia tha woh khatam hogaya. Aur main ne teri wahan engagement kar di hai.."
Raghu:- "lekin ayi main..."
Mrs. Naik:- "ab main main mat kar... Mujhay woh ladki bohat pasand hai.. Abhi rasika tujhay us ring ki picture bhej day gi jo main uski engagement mein pehna ai hoon."
Raghu's jaw dropped.
Raghu:- "ayi ap ne meri engagement kar di.."
Mrs. Naik:- "haan.." Raghu:- "ok ayi... Jaisa ap sahi samjho.."
Mrs. Naik:- "main janti thi.. Mera beta kabhi bhi mujhay mana nahin karay ga.. Chal ab main rakhti hoon aur tu aram kar.." Raghu:- "ji ayi apna aur rasika ka khayal rakhna.."
As the call finished, raghu was all sad. He stood up and went to the projector kept in his room. He switched off the lights and came back. He switched on the projector. A girl, a beautiful girl appeared on the walls of the room. There were several photos of her on the walls. He was lost looking at her..
Raghu:- "kahan ho tum miss antara kaul??" With that he lay back his head on the edge. He was thinking the first time he saw her at the university. He was in his second year when she came to the university. He saw her at the door. He was sitting with his friends. Machinder aka machmach, karan, tarun, manan when a group of girls enter. They were all busy looking at them except raghu. As the group passed tarun said.
Tarun:- "yaar raghu a new batch came, freshers.. In mein hi koi girlfriend dhond lay yaar..."
MachMach:- "haan yaar..."
Raghu was about to say something when he saw her entering. She was wearing a white anarkali with dark blue borders. Bangles on her hand. Hairs left loose. Simple makeup was applied but she looked elegant. Her hazels and the beautiful red curved lips. He was all lost looking at her.
Raghu:- "beautiful."
All his friend were shock to hear and see this condition of raghu. All his friends looked at the girl he was looking at the girl. Manan:- "raghu tu theek toh hai..."
Raghu:- "h ha haan... But woh kaun hai??"
He said pointing at her.
MachMach:- "woh woh antara kaul. Mr anirudh kaul ki beti."
Raghu:- "anirudh kaul? Woh diamond walay.."
MachMach:- "haan..."
Manan:- "waise kehna paray ga.. Baap heray ka business karta hai aur beti aik dum kohinoor hai."
Raghu felt an angry.
Raghu:- "manan ankhein nechay kar... Sharam nhn ati tujhay??"
All were damned by what he said. Raghu left in anger from there. From that day onward he used to steal glances of her. From morning in her gate entry till the end going home. Her mother use to take her home. Her smile use to make him crazy. He was happy. With everyday his love for increased. It was an year raghu was mad for her but never expressed. He always thought that if he will do, maybe she will get scared. It was his birthday and MachMach was not able to understand what to gift him. Pooja who was a good friend of antara was his girlfriend. As the day ended, raghu after seeing her leaving home with her mother also left.
MachMach:- "yaar manan mujhay samajh nhn arahi raghu ko kia gift doon.."
Manan:- "main toh usay watch gift kar raha hoon rolex.."
MachMach:- "nah yaar kuch aisa keh usay yeh zindagi bhar yaad rahay.."
That's when pooja came.
Pooja:- "hello handsome.."
MachMach turned and hugged her.
Pooja:- "hi manan kaise ho???"
Manan:- "main theek hoon."
MachMach:- "chalein dear?"
Manan:- "kahan??"
MachMach:- "main pooja ko dinner lay kar ja raha hoon."
Manan:- "ok chal phir miltay hain.."
They were about to leave when pooja mobile rang.
Pooja:- "hello haan antara main tumhay woh notes ki pixs bhej doon gi".
As she said this MachMach got an idea. He turned and hugged her tightly.
Pooja:- "kia hua??"
MachMach:- "babes tumahy nhn pata tumne mujhay kia super se bhi upar wala plan dia hai."
He whispered something to pooja. First pooja denied and then agreed as he loved her.
It was raghu's birthday. Everybody came with their gifts. Raghu attended all. MachMach entered without any gift. Thats when raghu noticed.
Raghu:- "oye machmach mera gift kahan hai??"
MachMach:- "woh yaar main tujhay party kay baad room mein doon ga thora personal hai."
Raghu lifted an eyebrow and was confused looking at him. The birthday went well. But raghu was sad. He wanted to see her today also. But he wasn't able to as it was sunday and an off. As the party finished, all of them went up in raghu's room. Raghu was laying down while the boys were busy plugging something. They told raghu to keep his eyes close.
MachMach:- "chal ab ankhein khol."
Raghu opened his eyes and was suprised. Whole of his room was filled with antara.. On every wall was antara... He felt happy and hugged machmach.
Raghu:- "my best gift ever."
After that raghu graduated and decided to serve his country like his father. He was sent to delhi and was waiting ti get back antara in his life. He opened his eyes and saw his screen flashing with a message notofication. It was the ring that his mother was talking about.
His trance was broken when he heard voices. Voices of someone footsteps. As raghu continued he saw a man sitting on the chair. It was like he was keeping guard. Raghu waited for the oppurtunity. As he turned raghu went and took out the man that was a kind of objection. Raghu quitely went on and started to take out all the men. As he was near to terrace he heard screams. Screams of a girl. As he went up he saw satya backing him. He was talking to the inspector down on phone and was holding someone. Raghu quietly went on. But to his badluck he stepped on a broken piece of glass. Satya became concious and ended the call.
Satya:- "agaya tera hero.."
Satya:- "ao ao raghu naik... Bohat suna humne tumharay baray mein.. Aj dekh bhi letay hain."
Raghu:- "hmmm main ne bhi bohat suna teray baray mein aj dekh laite hain.."
As satya turned, raghu's eyes shot up. He was holding his fiance for sure but that was none other than miss antara kaul. His antara. Who he has been searching madly. She was wearing the ring that his mother gave her. Sh hasnt chnaged a bit. Raghu was angry as satya was holding her by the neck. She was scared. Tears were rolling down from her eyes.there was a small cut on her head. She was trying hard to get out of his hold. She looked towards raghu's hand and stopped for a while. She was looking at the engagement ring he was wearing. She looked back up. She Was Confused because she knew him.
Raghu:- "satya larki ki pechay kia chupta hai mujhse baat kar.."
Satya:- "Wohi toh kar raha hoon... Pehlay apni dono guns nikal aur zameen par rakh..."
Raghu was helpless. All he worried about was antara. He took out both his guns and placed them near his foot.
Satya:- "pagal samjha hai kia? idhar phaink meray pass.."
Raghu bent and threw them to him.
Satya:- "chal pehlay isko niptata hoon phir tujhse apnay dost ka badla loon ga"
Raghu:- "Dost ka badla??"
Satya:- "Aman... jisko tu ne delhi mein arrest karwaya aur woh encounter mein mara gay... encounter toh bhana tha... tu ne usko mara..."
Raghu understand what he was saying.
An year ago, he arrested a criminal who was trying to sell drugs to the college students. While on investigation he came to know that it was being provided by Aman.. He Arrested aman. As he was brought to station he tried to run in which raghu had to shoot him..
Raghu was still benting when he heard.
Satya:- "chal raghu ab toh bhi tayar reh"
With this he threw antara off. Raghu lept and caught antara's hand. She was very scared. He was all lost at her.
Antara:- "please mera hath mat choriye ga... M Main gir jaun gin..."
Raghu came back to reality and pulled her up. As he brought her up She fell on him. Her hairs covered whole face of raghu. Raghu was lost on the big hazels eyes which were looking at him. There were still tears in her eyes. He tucked her hairs behind her ear. She was still beautiful. He saw the cut on her forehead.
Satya:- "agar yeh romeo juliet ki class hogai ho toh main badla lay loon??"
Raghu stood up and looked at him. His hand turned into the fist.
Raghu:- "badla!!"
Satya came and punched raghu. Raghu bent down and punched hard on his stomach. He put a punch through his jaw. He dropped on the floor.
Raghu:- "uth... uth..."
Satya gathered courage and got up.
He again wanted to punch but raghu punched him hard on his nose.
Satya again fell down. Raghu saw he became unconcious. He went to antara who was shaking. Raghu was all nervous what to talk about.
Raghu:- "ummm i hope ap..."
Before he could complete Satya came and grab him from the neck. Antara's eyes widened.
Raghu was trying hard but satya's grip was hard. Antara took the rod which was lying on the ground. As she went to hit him. Satya grabbed it and threw raghu har. He slapped antara and she fell hitting her head with the pillar. She got unconcious.Ashe turned raghu shot him right in the heart.
Satya died at the spot. Raghu went and picked antara. Blood was coming from the side of her lips. He wiped it gently with his thumb. He stood up and signalled the the inspector to come up. He gently picked antara and took her down. He opened his jeep and placed her on the passenger seat.
Raghu:- "inspector, i m taking her home... u come afterwards to take the statement."
Inspector:- "ok sir"
He saluted raghu and left.
Raghu started the jeep and came to antara's place. He came and opened antara's door. He picked her up and went inside. Her head was on his chest. Rasika and tina saw this.
Tina kaul was the younger sister of antara. She was in school.
Rasika nd Tina both shouted.
"agayai woh log.."
With this.. Mr. Kaul, Mrs.kaul and Mrs.Naik rushed out. Raghu entered the door. They saw them and stood. The ladies were admiring the couple.
Raghu:- "Umm yeh behosh hai aur she is hurt."
All came back.
Mr.Kaul:- "haan isse iskay kamray mein lay jao..."
Raghu:- "kamra? kaunsa?"
Mrs.Kaul:- "yahan say upar first left."
Raghu nodded and left. Rasika was looking at her brother with a devilish smirk.
Well here is the half...
On the other half i m working...
Ready for all kind of chappals, tamatar...
Do Like And Comment...
Once again A very very happy Velantine day to All...
Regards,
Haya.
Index:-
Part#1:- Page#1
Part#2:- Page#2
Part#3:- Page#4
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