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Raghu came up the stairs and opened the door.
As he entered he saw a very decent room. Walls painted all white. There was a bed in the middle. He went and gently placed her on the bed. He was about to get up when he felt a pull. As he looked he saw her hands tightly clutching his collar. He sat there and took off her hand. Her hands were cold but were as soft as a feather. A strand of hair was on her face. He gently took of that and pushed back. He saw droplets next to her lips. He was about to clean them when rasika entered the room with the first aid box.
Raghu stood up and went back. Rasika had an evil smirk on her face.
Rasika:- "bhai ap jao main kar loon gin..."
Raghu left and rasika bandaged antara. As raghu stepped down, the trio Mr. Kaul, Mrs. Kaul and Mrs. Naik stood up.
Mrs. Naik:- "raghu antara kaise hai??"
Raghu:- "han ayi woh rasika hai udhar... She is still unconcious.. I think she is tired".
Mrs. Kaul:- "toh ao na baitho..."
Raghu:- "ji..."
The four sat. The kaul's were happy to have such a son-in-law. They were talking when rasika came.
Rasika:- "ummm sorry... Magar woh antara ko hosh agaya..."
Raghu stood up and was about to go when rasika stopped him. All went leaving the brother sister behind.
Raghu:- "rasika kia kar rahi hai???"
Rasika:- "rok rahi hoon!"
Raghu:- "q??"
Rasika:- "batao kaise lagi??"
Raghu:- "kia kaise lagi??"
Rasika hit her head with her palm in disappointment.
Rasika:- "antara bhabi?"
Raghu:- "ohhh... Tu ne usko bhabi bhi kehna shuru kardia??"
Rasika:- "haan toh... Bhai waise btao na kaise lagi???@
Raghu:- "hmmm... W woh... Mujhay jana hai.."
With that he got the chance and went up to her bedroom. As he entered he saw the parents surrounding her. She was sitting with the support of the pillows. Raghu was lost looking at her. Antara saw him coming inside.
Raghu:- "ayi main w woh ja raha hoon... Kuch kam hai!!"
Saying this he left... He was all confused.
Raghu(to himself):- "what were you really thinking... Instead of asking her you told that you are leaving... You should have talked to her she is not a university girl but she is your fiancee..."
He stopped as he said this..
Raghu(to himself):- "fiancee well acha lagta hai soch kar... But yeh hua kaise??"
He was lost thinking when he bumped into rasika and tina. They forcefully took him to the garden.
Tina:- "baith jao jeju..."
Raghu was looking at both of them with a confused look. Rasika made him sit.
Rasika:- "bhai apne mujhay meray question ka answer nahin dia tha..."
Raghu was not at all able to answer.
Meanwhile Mrs. Naik and Mrs. Kaul made antara sleep. But sleep was miles away. She was very happy.
** FLASH BACK**
It was antara's first days in college when she noticed him. He was sitting studying in the library. She saw him..
"He is handsome" thought antara.
She sat and started to study but was not able to concentrate. Sh was stealing glances from time to time.
Antara(to herself):- "stop it will you!!"
As she lift her head up she saw he was gone. She use to see him theoughout the day. She felt happy everytime she saw him. Her heart use to skip long beats. But as she started his last year, he was gone. She inquired and came to know that he graduated and was going to police force.
** FLASH BACK ENDS**
She was smiling lying down looking at the ceiling.
Antara(to herself):- "so he is your fiancee"..
She felt happy... She got up and went to the balcony and saw raghu, rasika and tina sitting in yhe garden.
Antara(to herself):- "oh my god yeh pagal kar dein gin usay".
Back In The Garden
Raghu was all confuse.
Tina:- "jeju kuch toh bolo...".
Rasika:- "haan bhai daro mat we all know your love life.."
Raghu's eyes shot up.
Raghu:- "what ???"
Rasika:- "see tina i won the bet.. Kaha tha na bhai ki ankhein phati ki phati reh jayain gin..
Tina:- "okk i will take you to lunch on sunday."
Rasika started to celebrate while raghu was still looking at him.
Raghu:- "what about my love life.."
They both turn.
Rasika:- "what about it??"
Raghu:- "what you told now..."
Rasika:- "ohh that... That manan bhaiya told us.."
Raghu:- "manan... Uska mun nahin band rehta..."
Rasika:- "aray galti uski nahin hai... Galti toh apki hai..."
Raghu:- "meri??"
Tina:- "haan jeju apki..."
Raghu:- "woh kaise ???"
Rasika:- "yaad hai bhai jab ap last time ayai thay toh ap apni woh antara photo shop ghar chor kar manan bhai kay sath pune gayai thay... Maa safai karwa rahi thi jab unka projector par hath laga aur puray room mein antara bhabi hi thin..."
Raghu:- "ohhh teri ki... Yani yeh sab jantay hain keh main antara se..
Tina:- "sirf antara didi nahin janti..."
Rasika:- "ap yeh sab choro aur yeh batao ap apni fiancee ko valentine ka kia surprise do gay ??"
Raghu:- "valentine day??"
Rasika:- "haan bhai u have a week left... "
Raghu:- "main ne kuch nahin plan kia..."
Tina:- "toh jeju karo na..."
Before he could say anything he saw her coming. Raghu lost himself in her. He was looking at her.
Antara:- "tina tu garden mein kia kar rahi hai maa tujhay dhond rahi hain..."
Tina and rasika gave an evil smirk to both.. They signalled to leave. Rasika and tina went from there. Antara was about to go.
Raghu(to himself):- "kuch toh bol... Raghu... Dont just stand there.."
Raghu:- "antara..."
Antara stopped at the velvet voice that called him. Her heart skipped a beat. She turned and saw him.
Antara:- "yesss..."
Raghu:- "ap theek toh ho?? I mean no harm done ryt??"
Antara:- "i m fine... Ummm ap theek ho??!"
Raghu:- "yes i m fine... I guesss i should leave.."
Antara nodded and raghu left.
Antara was feeling thousand butterflies in her stomach.
Antara:- "he talked to me yeass.."
She was dancing in joy, there was a big smile on her face. As she turned she saw whole of the families standing.
She composed herself. They all had a hard face. Antara thought that they are angry. But after a while all broke out laughing.. Antara also smiled. Mrs. Nail and rasika came back home when they came they saw raghu in the room sitting with a smile on his face. He was lost in his own world.
The landline rang and rasika attented the call.
Rasika:- "yes i m rasika naik..."
Voice:- "mam i m inspector vishal can i speak to mr. Raghunath naik."
Rasika:- "yea sure..."
Rasika took the phone and snapped fingers infront of him.
Raghu:- "what???"
Rasika:- "inspector vishal.."
Raghu took the phone..
Raghu:- "yes raghunath naik speaking..."
Inspector:- "i wanted u to talk about the statement... Miss antara kaul statement.."
Raghu:- "yeah about that i will inform her and you can then take the statement in the morning. Now she is not feeling well..."
Inspector:- "ok sir i can understand..."
Raghu:- "ok then good night..."
Inspector:- "good night sir.."
He came to rasika.
Raghu:- " inform antara that inspectoe vishal wants to take your statement."
Rasika:- "inform her yourself..."
Raghu:- "i cant i dont have her number".
Rasika:- "well bhai thats no issue... Check your phone..."
Raghu took out and saw a message from rasika. He opened it and saw antara's number.
Raghu:- "are you mad?!?"
Rasika:- "yes akhir behan apki hoon..."
Raghu knew she was stubborn. He look at the watch and saw it was 10 o'clock.
Raghu dialled her number. The bell rang and so was raghu's heart beating.
Antara picked up.
Antara:- "helloo..."
Hearing her voice raghu lost it...
Raghu:- "h hello... Antara.."
Antara's eyes shot up.
Antara:- "r raghu ap..."
Raghu:- "woh actually i m sorry... Its late i know... Woh kal inspector vishal will come to take your statement..."
Raghu was waiting for a response but she was lost in his voice.
Raghu:- "hello antara u there??"
Antara:- "yes me here... Ummm no problem looking forward...
Raghu:- "ummm ok then bye.."
Antara:- "yes bye!!"
Raghu was sweating. Antara was happy.. The night was sleepless for both.
The next morning raghu came out wearing a blue jeans with a maroon shirt. A watch on his hand. Mrs. Naik saw him.
Mrs. Naik:- "raghu bat sun meri..."
Raghu stopped.
Raghu:- "ji ayi..."
Mrs. Naik:- "u look good..."
Raghu:- "thanks maa..."
Mrs. Naik:- "acha suno i have reserved a table for u and antara at the pearl restaurent for lunch."
Raghu:- "what ayi why???"
Mrs. Naik:- "look she is stressed and i want you to know her... Afterall you people are going to get married."
Raghu was looking at her.
Mrs. Naik:- "what?? It was rasika and tina's idea".
Raghu:- "ab samjha..."
Raghu looked at the clock..
Raghu:- "its 8 i m leaving..."
Mrs. Naik:- "ok beta pick antara up by 1".
Raghu left. When he reached office it was 8:45.
He went inside and sat there.
Raghu:- "yeh ayi bhi na pochti toh mujhse... Kia baat karoon ga us say..."
He was thinking when his phone rang. It was antara.
Raghu's heart started to beat first.
He picked up.
Raghu:- "hello.."
Antara:- "hi.. Woh i wanted to know matlab mama wanted to know what time inspector vishal will come??"
Raghu:- "he will there by 12."
Antara:- "ok... Then bye.."
Raghu:- "antara listen i will also come along.."
Antara felt happy..
Antara:- "ok i will tell mama about it..."
They hung up..
It was 11:30, raghu called inspector vishal in.
Raghu:-"shall we g0??"
Inspector:- "yes sir.. Are you coming along..."
Raghu:- "yes actually i have some work over there so..."
Inspector:- "ohhh kk..."
They both left... By 12 they reach at antara's place.
Mrs. Kaul opened the door and welcomed them. Raghu's eyes were roaming and searching her when she came out of the kitchen.
Raghu:- "there she is.."
Antara came and greeted them. She was looking beautiful..
Raghu's breath got hitched for a while.
Raghu was lost looking at her.
Raghu:- "shall we start??"
Antara:- "yes sure..."
She took them to the living room. She was busy giving statement to the inspector.
While raghu was looking at her.
It made him happy whenever he sees her.
Precap:-
The perfect valentine...
Ok i m making it a Three Short...
I have to give a valentine day for RaNtara and will need another update...
Tamatar, chappal all are welcome...
I m sorry for a long crap update...
Regards,
Haya.
I Didn't Expect The Turn Out To Be So Well...
The Update Is here...
Raghu came up the stairs and opened the door.
As he entered he saw a very decent room. Walls painted all white. There was a bed in the middle. He went and gently placed her on the bed. He was about to get up when he felt a pull. As he looked he saw her hands tightly clutching his collar. He sat there and took off her hand. Her hands were cold but were as soft as a feather. A strand of hair was on her face. He gently took of that and pushed back. He saw droplets next to her lips. He was about to clean them when rasika entered the room with the first aid box.
Raghu stood up and went back. Rasika had an evil smirk on her face.
Rasika:- "bhai ap jao main kar loon gin..."
Raghu left and rasika bandaged antara. As raghu stepped down, the trio Mr. Kaul, Mrs. Kaul and Mrs. Naik stood up.
Mrs. Naik:- "raghu antara kaise hai??"
Raghu:- "han ayi woh rasika hai udhar... She is still unconcious.. I think she is tired".
Mrs. Kaul:- "toh ao na baitho..."
Raghu:- "ji..."
The four sat. The kaul's were happy to have such a son-in-law. They were talking when rasika came.
Rasika:- "ummm sorry... Magar woh antara ko hosh agaya..."
Raghu stood up and was about to go when rasika stopped him. All went leaving the brother sister behind.
Raghu:- "rasika kia kar rahi hai???"
Rasika:- "rok rahi hoon!"
Raghu:- "q??"
Rasika:- "batao kaise lagi??"
Raghu:- "kia kaise lagi??"
Rasika hit her head with her palm in disappointment.
Rasika:- "antara bhabi?"
Raghu:- "ohhh... Tu ne usko bhabi bhi kehna shuru kardia??"
Rasika:- "haan toh... Bhai waise btao na kaise lagi???@
Raghu:- "hmmm... W woh... Mujhay jana hai.."
With that he got the chance and went up to her bedroom. As he entered he saw the parents surrounding her. She was sitting with the support of the pillows. Raghu was lost looking at her. Antara saw him coming inside.
Raghu:- "ayi main w woh ja raha hoon... Kuch kam hai!!"
Saying this he left... He was all confused.
Raghu(to himself):- "what were you really thinking... Instead of asking her you told that you are leaving... You should have talked to her she is not a university girl but she is your fiancee..."
He stopped as he said this..
Raghu(to himself):- "fiancee well acha lagta hai soch kar... But yeh hua kaise??"
He was lost thinking when he bumped into rasika and tina. They forcefully took him to the garden.
Tina:- "baith jao jeju..."
Raghu was looking at both of them with a confused look. Rasika made him sit.
Rasika:- "bhai apne mujhay meray question ka answer nahin dia tha..."
Raghu was not at all able to answer.
Meanwhile Mrs. Naik and Mrs. Kaul made antara sleep. But sleep was miles away. She was very happy.
It was antara's first days in college when she noticed him. He was sitting studying in the library. She saw him..
"He is handsome" thought antara.
She sat and started to study but was not able to concentrate. Sh was stealing glances from time to time.
Antara(to herself):- "stop it will you!!"
As she lift her head up she saw he was gone. She use to see him theoughout the day. She felt happy everytime she saw him. Her heart use to skip long beats. But as she started his last year, he was gone. She inquired and came to know that he graduated and was going to police force.
She was smiling lying down looking at the ceiling.
Antara(to herself):- "so he is your fiancee"..
She felt happy... She got up and went to the balcony and saw raghu, rasika and tina sitting in yhe garden.
Antara(to herself):- "oh my god yeh pagal kar dein gin usay".
Back In The Garden
Raghu was all confuse.
Tina:- "jeju kuch toh bolo...".
Rasika:- "haan bhai daro mat we all know your love life.."
Raghu's eyes shot up.
Raghu:- "what ???"
Rasika:- "see tina i won the bet.. Kaha tha na bhai ki ankhein phati ki phati reh jayain gin..
Tina:- "okk i will take you to lunch on sunday."
Rasika started to celebrate while raghu was still looking at him.
Raghu:- "what about my love life.."
They both turn.
Rasika:- "what about it??"
Raghu:- "what you told now..."
Rasika:- "ohh that... That manan bhaiya told us.."
Raghu:- "manan... Uska mun nahin band rehta..."
Rasika:- "aray galti uski nahin hai... Galti toh apki hai..."
Raghu:- "meri??"
Tina:- "haan jeju apki..."
Raghu:- "woh kaise ???"
Rasika:- "yaad hai bhai jab ap last time ayai thay toh ap apni woh antara photo shop ghar chor kar manan bhai kay sath pune gayai thay... Maa safai karwa rahi thi jab unka projector par hath laga aur puray room mein antara bhabi hi thin..."
Raghu:- "ohhh teri ki... Yani yeh sab jantay hain keh main antara se..
Tina:- "sirf antara didi nahin janti..."
Rasika:- "ap yeh sab choro aur yeh batao ap apni fiancee ko valentine ka kia surprise do gay ??"
Raghu:- "valentine day??"
Rasika:- "haan bhai u have a week left... "
Raghu:- "main ne kuch nahin plan kia..."
Tina:- "toh jeju karo na..."
Before he could say anything he saw her coming. Raghu lost himself in her. He was looking at her.
Antara:- "tina tu garden mein kia kar rahi hai maa tujhay dhond rahi hain..."
Tina and rasika gave an evil smirk to both.. They signalled to leave. Rasika and tina went from there. Antara was about to go.
Raghu(to himself):- "kuch toh bol... Raghu... Dont just stand there.."
Raghu:- "antara..."
Antara stopped at the velvet voice that called him. Her heart skipped a beat. She turned and saw him.
Antara:- "yesss..."
Raghu:- "ap theek toh ho?? I mean no harm done ryt??"
Antara:- "i m fine... Ummm ap theek ho??!"
Raghu:- "yes i m fine... I guesss i should leave.."
Antara nodded and raghu left.
Antara was feeling thousand butterflies in her stomach.
Antara:- "he talked to me yeass.."
She was dancing in joy, there was a big smile on her face. As she turned she saw whole of the families standing.
She composed herself. They all had a hard face. Antara thought that they are angry. But after a while all broke out laughing.. Antara also smiled. Mrs. Nail and rasika came back home when they came they saw raghu in the room sitting with a smile on his face. He was lost in his own world.
The landline rang and rasika attented the call.
Rasika:- "yes i m rasika naik..."
Voice:- "mam i m inspector vishal can i speak to mr. Raghunath naik."
Rasika:- "yea sure..."
Rasika took the phone and snapped fingers infront of him.
Raghu:- "what???"
Rasika:- "inspector vishal.."
Raghu took the phone..
Raghu:- "yes raghunath naik speaking..."
Inspector:- "i wanted u to talk about the statement... Miss antara kaul statement.."
Raghu:- "yeah about that i will inform her and you can then take the statement in the morning. Now she is not feeling well..."
Inspector:- "ok sir i can understand..."
Raghu:- "ok then good night..."
Inspector:- "good night sir.."
He came to rasika.
Raghu:- " inform antara that inspectoe vishal wants to take your statement."
Rasika:- "inform her yourself..."
Raghu:- "i cant i dont have her number".
Rasika:- "well bhai thats no issue... Check your phone..."
Raghu took out and saw a message from rasika. He opened it and saw antara's number.
Raghu:- "are you mad?!?"
Rasika:- "yes akhir behan apki hoon..."
Raghu knew she was stubborn. He look at the watch and saw it was 10 o'clock.
Raghu dialled her number. The bell rang and so was raghu's heart beating.
Antara picked up.
Antara:- "helloo..."
Hearing her voice raghu lost it...
Raghu:- "h hello... Antara.."
Antara's eyes shot up.
Antara:- "r raghu ap..."
Raghu:- "woh actually i m sorry... Its late i know... Woh kal inspector vishal will come to take your statement..."
Raghu was waiting for a response but she was lost in his voice.
Raghu:- "hello antara u there??"
Antara:- "yes me here... Ummm no problem looking forward...
Raghu:- "ummm ok then bye.."
Antara:- "yes bye!!"
Raghu was sweating. Antara was happy.. The night was sleepless for both.
The next morning raghu came out wearing a blue jeans with a maroon shirt. A watch on his hand. Mrs. Naik saw him.
Mrs. Naik:- "raghu bat sun meri..."
Raghu stopped.
Raghu:- "ji ayi..."
Mrs. Naik:- "u look good..."
Raghu:- "thanks maa..."
Mrs. Naik:- "acha suno i have reserved a table for u and antara at the pearl restaurent for lunch."
Raghu:- "what ayi why???"
Mrs. Naik:- "look she is stressed and i want you to know her... Afterall you people are going to get married."
Raghu was looking at her.
Mrs. Naik:- "what?? It was rasika and tina's idea".
Raghu:- "ab samjha..."
Raghu looked at the clock..
Raghu:- "its 8 i m leaving..."
Mrs. Naik:- "ok beta pick antara up by 1".
Raghu left. When he reached office it was 8:45.
He went inside and sat there.
Raghu:- "yeh ayi bhi na pochti toh mujhse... Kia baat karoon ga us say..."
He was thinking when his phone rang. It was antara.
Raghu's heart started to beat first.
He picked up.
Raghu:- "hello.."
Antara:- "hi.. Woh i wanted to know matlab mama wanted to know what time inspector vishal will come??"
Raghu:- "he will there by 12."
Antara:- "ok... Then bye.."
Raghu:- "antara listen i will also come along.."
Antara felt happy..
Antara:- "ok i will tell mama about it..."
They hung up..
It was 11:30, raghu called inspector vishal in.
Raghu:-"shall we g0??"
Inspector:- "yes sir.. Are you coming along..."
Raghu:- "yes actually i have some work over there so..."
Inspector:- "ohhh kk..."
They both left... By 12 they reach at antara's place.
Mrs. Kaul opened the door and welcomed them. Raghu's eyes were roaming and searching her when she came out of the kitchen.
Raghu:- "there she is.."
Antara came and greeted them. She was looking beautiful..
Raghu's breath got hitched for a while.
Raghu was lost looking at her.
Raghu:- "shall we start??"
Antara:- "yes sure..."
She took them to the living room. She was busy giving statement to the inspector.
While raghu was looking at her.
It made him happy whenever he sees her.
Precap:-
The perfect valentine...
Ok i m making it a Three Short...
I have to give a valentine day for RaNtara and will need another update...
Tamatar, chappal all are welcome...
I m sorry for a long crap update...
Regards,
Haya.
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