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Posted: 11 years ago
thank god finally antu is safe😎
wow ishu is so intelligent the way he found antara was just too good😛
awww raghu loves antara so much 😳
finally antara was able to crack the code with the help of our genius ishu...phew
loved zara and ishu;s fight tooo cute😆😳
loved the update❤️
ur story is really brilliant😛
superb👏
awesome brilliant 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
those who write thrillers ...they ought to hv a sharp intelligence ...and Ria ...u do hv that so much in u ... uparwalenme kut kut kar bhar di hai tumme ...😃waaah Ria ..what an update ...every single line was perfect ...Raghuantara's passion ...unke pyar ...four eyes and kiddy ke ladai ...and vishal uncle ki daat ...and then finally Antara got to understand the code ...bapre mere to dimag mehi nahi aya tha ke kya hai wo ...and that triangle ...bravo RiA ...hatts off to you ...
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tere liye main shopping jarhi hun rooz ... gifts kharidne ... last chapter jisdin post karegi ..sare ke sare gifts tujhe bhejungi main ..samjhiii ...pasand ho ya naho tujhe accept karni padegi ...hhhahahhahaha
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ohhh ria...
Frst of all so sorry...
University opened..
Was messey...
Okkk read three of your updates...
Amazing...
U were so good..
Sab misunderstanding door...
Raghu ne antara ko dhond lia..
OMG what a big game siddiqui daya mai playing...
Hell...
Loved it..
Thanx for the pm's...
Update soon and pm me..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pampz

those who write thrillers ...they ought to hv a sharp intelligence ...and Ria ...u do hv that so much in u ... uparwalenme kut kut kar bhar di hai tumme ...😃waaah Ria ..what an update ...every single line was perfect ...Raghuantara's passion ...unke pyar ...four eyes and kiddy ke ladai ...and vishal uncle ki daat ...and then finally Antara got to understand the code ...bapre mere to dimag mehi nahi aya tha ke kya hai wo ...and that triangle ...bravo RiA ...hatts off to you ...

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tere liye main shopping jarhi hun rooz ... gifts kharidne ... last chapter jisdin post karegi ..sare ke sare gifts tujhe bhejungi main ..samjhiii ...pasand ho ya naho tujhe accept karni padegi ...hhhahahhahaha

yaar itni bhi tareef mat kar...😆... utna kuch khass nahi hain... bas main bahut jyada thrillers and mystery novels parti hoon... issi ka natiza hain...🤣
ab tu mere liye kya kharidne jaa rahi hain yaar...mujhe seriously dar lag raha hain...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter 62

"hey four eyes, keep ur knowledge to your head. Don't need to share it with me." Zara said. "diddu see na... ye kiddy kitna irritate karti hain." ishan said. Antara didn't rect. She was seating there like a stone statue fixing her eyes on the wall. "hey didu... what's up?!" ishan patted antara's shoulder lightly. "ISHAN!!!" antara jumped in excitement and cupped his brother's face, "YOU ARE A GENIUS!!!!" she said loudly startling everyone in the room. "ab maine kya kiya??..." ishan said in styartled voice fixing his glass. "god I am such a fool. It was so easy and I was clueless about the fact..." she blabbered in excited voice. "eee miscall?! Teri achanak se engine garam kaise ho gayi?!!" raghu asked in startled voice from side. "kuch nahi huya hain... hatho... OUCH!!!" she said chirpily and tried to get up from bed. But she forgot about the bump of her ankle and she winced in pain as it hurt her again. "arey miscall kidhar bhag rahi hain... teri tyre abhi bhi puncture hain yaar..." he said holding her shoulder. "tum chup raho aur mujhe uthne do.." she said in a quite loud voice. "arey tera dimag ka fuse ur gaya hain kya?! Pair mein chot hain tere!! Doctor ne mana kiya hain uthne ke liye... chup chap baithi rahe...nahitoo tere ko pata hain apun kya kya kar sakta hain..." he said in full warning. Antara's excitement lowered down a bit by his tone. And she quietly sat on the bed with a puppy face. "ab bol kya huya hain?!!" raghu asked. "woo codes.." she uttered slowly and turned towards ishan and said ishan wahan drawer mein meri diry rakhi huyi hain dekh too.." she said. Ishan went towards the drawer. "arey yaar tu fir se uss gyara ke bhara wale code mein aa gayi.." he said making a face. "woo 11 ka multiplication table nahin hain..." she again became a bit excited. "to kya hain meri maa?!!" he asked in same tone. "STD codes hain... india ke teen major metropolitan cities ke STD codes. Delhi, Mumbai aur Kolkata ki." She said with gleaming eyes. "hayee??!!" raghu scratched his head. "antara tum kahena kya chahte ho?!!" zoya asked from side. "bata ti hoon..." she said. Her whole feature was shaking in excitement. Ishan brought her diary and she let out the paper from it. again that jumbled code came into her view. 011.ig.20&022.cs.04&033.nsb.13. antara told zoya about the code in nutshell. "itne wakt se main bas yahin soch rahi thi ki kya matlab ho sakta hain iss code ka... aaj jab ishan ne kahan unn std codes ke barein mein tab mujhe samajh aya... yahan Delhi, Mumbai aur Kolkata ko unke Std codes se indicate kiye gaye hain... 011 means delhi, 022 means Mumbai aur 033 means Kolkata... matlab un logon ka target hain ye teeno cities. Kisi ko samajh mein na ayein issi liye std codes se define kiya gaya hain inn cities ko..." she said in single breath. "tum sure ho?!!" zoya said. "off course kyun ki dekhiye, ye teeno cities ko agar eksath zor diya zaye to ek triangle bante hain... aur yahin triangle maine siddiqui ke file mein dekha tha..." she said and showed the little map of india at the front page of diary and indicated towards Delhi, Mumbai and Kolkata. She joined those points of three cities on the map with each other and they made a perfect triangle. Exactly like the triangle she saw in siddiqui's file. Everyone was leaned towards the paper and map. "par ye baki jo hain wo.." zara indicated towards the code. "ye ig, cs, nsb aur baki ke digits..." she asked. "sayad ye sahar ke wohi jagah hain jahan pe bomb plant kiya jayega... delhi mein aisi kaunsi jagah hain jiska initials I.G se start hota hain?!" she said. All of them started to think. "koi building ya office?!!..." zoya said. "may be.. aisi koi jagah jo bahut famous ho jahan pe blast ya aisa kuch hone se bahut deep effect aa jayein" antara said. "arey hain na..." raghu said from side. all face snapped to him. "kya?!!..." she asked with confused face. "arey woo delhi ke kurukhsetra mein hain na hakim sahab Iqbaal Ghafari ka jaribooti dukan...Iqbaal Ghafri dabakhana... arey bole too bahut famous dukan hain... door door tak unka naam hain... ajji bhi wohich se unki woo jaribboti lati hain... apun kaheta hain...sau taka issi dukan ke barein mein kahan hoga..." he said. All of them continued to look at him with confused eyes. "raghu please!!..." antara suddenly joined her hand and said in irritated voice. "please apne ideas apne pass hi rakho... tumhe aur koi nahi mila... Hakim ka dukan.." she stroke her head. "haan haan... tujhe to mere sare idea bekaar hicch lagta hain... tereko pata hain ikbaal kitna famous hain.. arey president bhi uske dukan se zaribooti leta hain.." raghu said in loud voice. "thik hain... par ek zaribooti ki dukan ko woo log target kyun karengey? Ye baat socha hain tumney...!!" she said rising her voice. "kyun un logon ne kya sapno mein aa ke tujhe bata diya hain ki kidhar target kiya hain aur kidhar naii?!!" he started his usual blabber again. "tum please chup raho aur mujhe sochne do..." she said. "arey apun kidhar mana kiya... sochna..." he spat back. "arey chup ho jaon tum dono..."zoya said. Both of them sighed. "hum asli baat to bhool gaye... akhir ye IG hain kya?!!" zoya asked. "arey momma aap log bhi na..." zoya took the mobile and opened internet. "internet mein search karo naaa... 5 min mein pata chal jayega..." zara said. She searched for a moment and then handed over the mobile to antara. "ye dekho appa mil gaya delhi ke sare places jo IG se start hote hain.." she said. Antara took the phone and saw the first name on the list. That was none other than, Indira Gandhi international airport. "airport!!!!" she blurted out. Everyone became startled. "airport?!!" zoya asked. "yes... Indira Gandhi airport. Wo bhi too I.G se start hote hain.." she said... "matlaab c.s hain..." zoya said. "Chatrapati Shivaji... Mumbai airpot ka too yahin naam hain..." antara said in excitement. "aur Kolkata airport ka naam hain Netaji Subhaschandra Bose... mujhe pata hain..." zara said. "chalo kiddy ko kuch toh pata hain..." ishan said. "shut up.." zara said angrily. "to matlab... i.g, c.s aur n.s.b actual mein Delhi, Mumbai aur Kolkata airport ke initials hain...matlab ye teeno airports hain unlogon ke target mein... aur ye baki rahe gaya 27.04.13..." antara said. "ye to koi date kagta hain... jo ki kaal hain hain... 27 april 2013...kahin kaal hi too..." zoya said with a gasp. both antara and zoya looked at each other with wide eyes. antara quickly took zara's mobile and called vishal uncle. She informed him about the code, Vishal uncle listenened everything carefully. "gr8!! Thank you antara... you reduced our more than half job... We all experts were knocking our head on the code but no one could detect the simple thing. you don't know what great service you people have provided to us." He said happily. "it's okk uncle. But from now on... you have to stop them.. I can't do anything... now the life of those people depends on only you..." she said with worried voice. "don't worry. If we can't do anything after knowing each and every point then it will be shame for us. And yes, I think leaving in kaul house wouldn't be safe for you anymore. I think you should move to army head quarter. I had already talked with general. He told you to shift immediately. He would arrange for your safety." He said. "okk uncle..." antara said. They disconnected the phone. "kya kaha uncle ne?!!" zoya asked. "they told us to move to army headquarter. Antara said. "he is right antara... ye jagah safe nahin hain abb..." zoya said. Antara looked at the house with sad eyes. "I know zoya di... par yahan se jane ka mann nahi kar raha hain.. kitne yadein juri hain iss ghar se.." she said in low voice. "eee miscall... ab emotional queen mat ban..." raghu he was listening to their convo silently and taking yanks as that code thing was so bore to him, finally opened his mouth at last. "sahi kaheta hain tera uncle... abhi idhar se chalne ka time aa gaya hain..." he finished. "tum humesha aise kyun kahete ho..." antara became a slight irritated. "arey zinda rahe payegi naa... tab dubara idhar aa payegi... aur idhar rahegi too sidhe upar chali jayegi... tab tpooo idhar kabhi naii aa payegi.." he made a face. antara sighed. He was never gonna change afterall. But he was right. It would be silly to live here. "haan sahi kahe raha hain raghu... chalo abhi chale jate hain ham.." zoya said. "okk!!..." antara got agreed. Zoya stood up from bed with ishan and zara. Antara tried to stand up but again she felt a sharp pain in her ankle and lower back. "ouch!!!..." automatically another wince escaped her mouth. "ohh god I forget!! Antara tum chalogi kaise?!! Tumhare to pair mein chot hain..." zoya said. "naii zoya di main chal paungi... aap..." but before she could finish her words, two strong arm got around her back and knee and lifted her easily. Antara's eyes widened and her lips made a perfect O as raghu lifted her feature so easily in his arms and held her near his strong chest. her wide hazels met his eyes oozed with mischief glint and a hidden smirk in his face. "apna mooh bandh kar... machchar ghus jayega..." raghu said in low mischievous voice. "mujhe niche utarooo.." she said angrily out of her breath. ishan and zara were looking at them with O face and zoya was smiling slightly keeping her fingers on her lips. "wooo zoya bhabi aap log iss chota packet aur nachchari ko leke bus se nikal jaon... apun piche piche ate hain..." raghu said with a huge grin. "thik hain raghu bhaijaan... humlog ate hain.." zoya said and get outside with ishan and zara. Raghu again looked back to antara who was lowering her gaze with a flashed face. "tu baat baat pe tomato banti kyun reheti hain?!" he asked with a chuckle. "chup raho... sab ke saam ne utha liya...tumhe saram nahi ati kya?" she said a bit angrily. "naiii...!!" he chuckled and started to walk taking her along with him... "naii utha ta too... tu khud khare hone ki try maarta... chot naii lagti tere ko?!" he said with a concerned voice. "Main tumhe samajh nahi pata hoon..." she looked towards him with confused gaze. They came near the stairs. He didn't seemed having a slightest problem carrying her weight all over the house. "meri itni parwah hain to mujhse jhagra kyun karte ho?!.. kuch der pahele to aise jhagar rahe the jaise meri sakal se hi chir jate ho... pata hain kitna bura lag raha tha mujhe." she said in a bit sad voice. raghu came down the stairs and stood a bit. He leaned his face to her and gently placed a kiss on her forehead. She closed her eyes with a pleasant smile. "tera chehera dekhne ke liye to s**a akhein taras jati thi har roj..." he chuckled. Her chicks again caught a faint pink glow. "aur waisey bhi aaj pura din tere se door raha... to jhagra kiye bina mere zuban mein dard ho raha tha..." he said with a naughty smile. "ab chalo bhi..." she rolled her eyes, "aur mujhe niche utaroo... tum aise hi pure raste mujhe utha ke le joge kya?!" she asked. "iradha to wohich hain..." he chuckled. " no way!!..." she gasped. Raghu started to walk again. antara gave up and clutched his yellowish jacket with her hand and hid her embaraced face in his chest. but true to say, she was feeling so happy while he was caring for her like that. He always made her feel so special. "abto apun tere ko ek pal ke liye bhi apne se door naii karega..." He said while walking. "ekbaar galti kar di... ab aur naii... aur tune mere ko wapas bulaya kyun naii jab tujhe mai ke barein mein pata chala... haan?!" he asked with a slight frown. "main tumhe jaan boojh ke musibat mein kaise daal sakti thi... tumhe hamesha ye fikar raheti hain na ki mujhe kuch ho na jaye... main bhi to tumhe musibat mein nahin dekh sakti thi... tumhe musibat se bachane ke liye hi toh main tumhe shrunagar se, mujhse door rakhna chahti thi..." She said with so much concern. "miscall!! Tu kahe ya na kahe par tu jab bhi musibaat mein hota hain na... bappa humesha mere ko signal bhej deta hain... to ab se chupane ki try mat karna samjhi?!!" he said with a frown and added, "aur waisey bhi... film mein naii dekhi tu?!!... arey hero humesha heroine ko bachata hain... herine hero ko naii..." he said with a naughty gaze. "filmy dialogue maarna bandh karo aur chalon... humein jald hi koi sawari dhoondni paregi..." she said rolling her eyes. they both came out of kaul house. It was dark outside. Zoya and kids had already gone further. Not a single sight of them. after walking through the dark path for a while raghu found a closed garage and a jeep standing at outside. He came near it and placed antara on the seat beside driver. "raghu tum fir se bina pooche jeep le rahe ho..." antatra rolled her eyes. "miscall yaar.. ye akhribaar le lene de fir akha life mein bina pooche kisi ka jeep le kar naii satkega apun..prommise" he said innocently. She smiled at his innocence and moved her hand to tie her seatbelt. But before she took the seatbelt on her hand raghi had already took that and started to lock the seatbelt around her feature. He started to put the lock and antara felt how he purposely brushing his fingers purposely in the side of her waist while doing that. She couldn't say anything, just flushed and looked away. He was having that irresistible smirk on his face and her naughty but intense eyes were fixed on her face which was turned slightly to other side. he seemed having fun feeling her shyness. He came a bit closer to her and the strong muscles of his arms touched her bosoms. He felt that how her breath stopped for a while and her feature jerked a bit as if she got some electric current. A deep sigh escaped from her lips. He came another bit closer and his hot breath brushed her hairs. She closed her eyes shut. He could feel her heavy breaths making ups and downs on her bosoms and her violent heartbeat. "raghu please... Yahan nahin..." she said in feeble shaking voice. but raghu as usual, never listened to her. He snuggled in her shoulder placing a deep kiss on her. a smile escaped from her lips. He closed the lock of seat belt while kissing her and she breathed heavily in goose bump as his fingers almost squeezed her waist and that kiss on her shoulder was maddening. He slowly left her and she looked back to her pleasant face with a shy smile. After that raghu smiled and turned back to reach at driving seat but when he turned back he became startled. Some ten to twelve peoples were surrounding the jeep and looking towards them with dangerous gaze. They all were carrying chain, hockey sticks, daggers etc in their hands. Antara also saw them and her eyes widened. As those goons proceed towards them, raghu quickly covered antara and antara clutched his shirt with wide eyes. "arey ruko... itni jaldi bhi nahi..." a very sharp female voice came outside from the dark. Raghu's all nerve got froze listening to that voice. He knew that voice very well. "pahele mujhe mere raghunath se baat to karne do..." the woman come in front of them getting inside the circle and looked at raghu's startled face with cruel smile.

ps: sorry guyzz... came up with the crapest chapter ever...🤢... sorry for making your bheja roast......now where is my reward chappal..

Edited by ifians - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ria... thank u so much for pyaar bhara and thrilling wala update... And also for making the memories of Rantara more special for me...

Everything is speechless...!
I once again fell in love with Raghu-Antara because u portray them so beautifully... Their innocence has touched my heart. Your updates spread light, and divinity everywhere... Stay Blessed dear... Waiting for next part.
Edited by nbw16 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ohh...I'm late again😲
so sorry baby...got stuck with some stupid exam😕
Btw I loved all your updates..😃
I literally held my breath when Antara entered that secret passage...got hurt and finally gone missing too...
Got thrilled when Raghu and Beera confronted Bhuajang and the train scene...omg...it was like wow😊 and then DM got arrested😆
Oh...yeah! How can I forget Its always Raghu who finds his love 'Antara' when no one else can 😉
I felt bad about Antara's condition but Caring Raghu made things comphensate for me😳
Four eyes 😆
Ishan pulling Zara's Ponytail and their fight was quite adoring and amusing too🥱
Loved Rantara's passionate Kiss after their Reunion.😳
I loved it 😊
I loved it 😊
I loved it 😊
I loved it 😊
It was outta world updates and I'm speechless 👏
From now on...you are my Thrilly Rockstar😉
would love to read more and more..do update soon...chao.
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Posted: 11 years ago

wow this update was osam yaar

loved it soo much
rantara moments wow so cute
dnt u dare call it crap m loving this story
dm Is back omg
pls cont asap cant wait
Edited by honeybees22 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
RIAAA I just hope Raghu does something terrible with that kamini DM urghhh saare romance ka kachra kardiys uss kalmuhi ne! 😡😡😡

the update was fantastic until she came! I loved the nok jhok and romance to uff 😳😳😳

Woh DM ko kamini...urghh usse kya pata uski maut bahot paas hai uske! 😎
Edited by Rantaraolic - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Ria amazing Update..Really loved d way the codes were out..
Rantara nok-jok always enjoy it..
Fab update..Rantara Romance was beautifully described..
Nd ishan n Zara lovely kiddies..their fites r so cute..
So DM it is i m so sure..How will dey escape now oh god..
Interesting part u left us to think..
Thanks fr pm..keep writing..update soon..

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