rantara ff-sajda tere pyar mein(thread 2- note @ Pg123) - Page 79

what to say about ur update ria😛

Ria i just go crazy for Raghu's dialougues...they were so fantastic and hilarious ... and that seatbelt romance of Raghu was wonderful ... bohot naughty ho gaya hai ...n omg DM reached even there to be the perfect huddy bet them ...abh toh dhulai hogi ...pata nahi abh koun jitega ...

I'm highly Impressed Ria...after reading the update I was like WoW 👏
Four eyes aur Kiddy ne toh Four moon hi lagah diye is update par 🤣
Antara ka dimag toh Chacha Chowdary se bhi tez chalta hai 🤣
thats why She was the one to Crack the code instead of intelligence personnel😲
I Loved it when Raghu carried Antara in his arms and She was a bit miffed because he scolded her in front of others 😊
I loved it when he leaned down and gave a Kiss on her forehead..😳
loved their seat belt romance
And Finally the 'WITCH' has arrived,spoiling Rantara's romantic moment 😡 😡 😡
I felt like killing her there and then...hate her to the core 😡
10-12 goons along with That Witch...now I'm hell scared 😒 for Rantara...as Antara is hurt and Raghu is the only one to make Antara safe again. 🤗
On the whole...a thumbs up update for me 👍🏼
do update soon.. Can't wait more

Wonderful..

Originally posted by: Tsuchi

amazing update ria!!👏

rantara moments r..awesome and lovely...😳

yr ek baat bta..sab kuch to hamari antu ne kr dala..wo vishal uncle aur unki team ek code ki mystery solve nhi kr paye?😕

i hope ab ftafat sidddiqui aur aman ko ye blasts krwane ke pehle game over kr dein..😃

uff yr.ye last mein kya DM kidhr se a gyi😡..chalo theek hai aayegi nhi to upr jayegi kaise?..😈

tfpm

Originally posted by: pampz

Ria i just go crazy for Raghu's dialougues...they were so fantastic and hilarious ... and that seatbelt romance of Raghu was wonderful ... bohot naughty ho gaya hai ...n omg DM reached even there to be the perfect huddy bet them ...abh toh dhulai hogi ...pata nahi abh koun jitega ...

wonderful update ...abh kya batayun yaar it was sooo good ... i loved it ...

Originally posted by: PurpleSunset

I'm highly Impressed Ria...after reading the update I was like WoW 👏
Four eyes aur Kiddy ne toh Four moon hi lagah diye is update par 🤣
Antara ka dimag toh Chacha Chowdary se bhi tez chalta hai 🤣
thats why She was the one to Crack the code instead of intelligence personnel😲
I Loved it when Raghu carried Antara in his arms and She was a bit miffed because he scolded her in front of others 😊
I loved it when he leaned down and gave a Kiss on her forehead..😳
loved their seat belt romance
And Finally the 'WITCH' has arrived,spoiling Rantara's romantic moment 😡 😡 😡
I felt like killing her there and then...hate her to the core 😡
10-12 goons along with That Witch...now I'm hell scared 😒 for Rantara...as Antara is hurt and Raghu is the only one to make Antara safe again. 🤗
On the whole...a thumbs up update for me 👍🏼
do update soon.. Can't wait more

Chapter 63

Antara looked at that woman's cunning smile with worried eyes. she didn't saw the woman before, but from her appearance she could detect that whom she actually was. "mai!!" he heard raghu's confused gasp. That gasp confirmed her doubt. So she was the one and only Daya Naik. Her appearance gave her introduction herself. "bahut hayran ho gaya naa mujhe yahan dekh kar?!!" dm chuckled. "tujhe to laga hoga ki main jail mein sar rahi hoon..." She started to walk around the jeep keeping her mocking smile intact to her face and continued her speech, "hayrani ho rahi hain na raghunath?!! Soch raha hoga ki mujhe kaise pata chala..." Her eyes hardened suddenly. "tu sayad bhool gaya ki daya mai ko kaid kare aisi koi jail aaj tak bana hi nahi... mujhe bas uss policewale ke hathon mein noto ki gaddi thamani pari aur mujhe azadi bhi mil gayi... aur sath mein ye bhi pata chal gaua ki unko mere drugs ke barein mein khabar kis ne di..." dm came at their front after a round and let out her cunning smile again. raghu's eyes hardened and he let out a smirk. "das saal se bhi jyada taime ho gaya mai tere sath rahete huye... mere ko pata tha ki tu unn policewalo ke hath se nikal jayegi... par itni jaldi ye naii socha tha..." he said in mocking tone. "kya karoon raghunath. Bahut bechaini ho rahi thi tujhse milne ke liye... akhir ek maa kitne dino tak aaone bte se door rahe sakta hain... aur tu to mera beta jaisa hain na raghunath!!" her words were sweet but there was a hidden deep poisonious glint in that. "huh!! Mai aaj achanak bari fikar ho gayi apne bte ki..." he said. "kya karein raghunath, beta jab galat raste pe chale jayein tab mujhe ho too ussey fir se sidhe raste par lana parega.." dm said with another cunning smile. her eyes moved at raghu's side. she saw a girl seating at the jeep and looking towards her with slightly worried face. Dm's eyes hardened suddenly. She saw how that girl's fingers were clutching raghu's shirt over his shoulder and how her most obedient raghunath standing at her front covering her, like an unbreakable wall. Her jaw became hard. "to yahin hain woo larki..." she said with a cunning voice, "antara naam hain na tera...!! Hmmm..." she said. Antara's caught raghu's hand tightly. She was feeling odd in front of that ladies poisonous gaze. Raghu's face was becoming hard with dm's every mocking word. "tujhse milne ki bari icha thi... ayi bahut tareef karti hain teri..." dm said with a smirk but at the next moment her expression changed. A cruel gaze appeared in her face, "par afsoos ye humari paheli aur akhri mulkat hain larki... kyunki tere upar jane ka ticket katwa ke ayi hoon main!!" she said greeting her teeth. "maii!!!..." raghu growled like mad. "chup ho ja raghunath!!... aaj iss larki do kauri kee larki ke liye tu mujhse uchi awaz mein baat kar raha hain... 12 saal ka tha tuu jab tujhe maine sarak se uthakar le aya... 10 saal bit gaye uske baad, maime tujhe pala... Apna naam diya... Aur aaj tu tere mai ke khilaaf khara hain... woo bhi ek mamuli larki ke liye... ee larki kya gul khilaya hain mere raghunath ko... kaise apne jaal mein fasaya bol?.." she said with so much poison in her voice. "mai bass abbb chup ho ja... agey ek sabd bhi mat kahena.. tere 10 saal ke iss paalne ki bajah se aaj tu jinda hain... warna iske khilap koi kuch ulti sidhi baat kare na to apun uska juwan khinch lega..." his dangerous gaze and tone made shiver Dm. she really knew well that how dangerous raghunath could be if he wanted. Raghu was still continuing his talk, "arey fasaya to tune hain mai... 10 saal se mere ko pala sirf iss liye ta ki tu apun ko apna dhal bana sake... aur uss dhal ke piche tu apna chorbajar aur kala dhanda chalu rakhe... patti bandh rakhi thi tune apun ke akhon mein jo aaj khool chukka hain... aur tu jissey do kauri ki larki bata rahi hain na... tu uski nakhoon ki bhi barabar naii hain... arey iski kya... tu too mai kahene ke bhi layak naii hain... lalat hain jo itne salon taka pun tujh jaisi aurat ko maa saman manta raha..." his eyes was madly furious. The frustration he was holding for long came out with a burst. "RAGHUNATH!!!..." Dm screamed out of her breath. "bahut bol liya tune... aukad dikha di... do din pahele ka mera paltu kutta ab astin ka saanp ban gaya hain... par ek baat yaad rakh raghunath... tera jo ye rutwa, shaan ye sab kuch na aaj meri wajah se huya hain... log raste mein tujhe salam thokte hain woo bhi iss liye kyun ki tu mera admi hain... mere sath rahega toh hi shan se jii payega..." Dm said. "arey naii chahiye teri shaan DAYA NAIK... naii chahiye tera jhootha rutwa.. apun ko jo chahiye na woo apun ke pass hain..meri zindagi...meri antara!!...aur mere ko kisi bhi cheez ki zaroorat naii.." he said in firm voice. Dm's all mask fell down from her face and the cruel, merciless killer hiding behind that came out. "BASSS!!!! ab pani sar ke upar se jar aha hain... dekh raghunath mere ko iss larki ka supari mila hain siddiqui sahab se... issey too main aaj zinda jane nahin doongi... sidhe sidhe kahe rahi hoon raste se hath jaa aur antara ko mere hawale kar de..." dm said in her dangerous cold tone. "tere ko uss siddiqui ne supari di hain issey maar ne ki na... to mere ko bappa ne supari di hain isseey bacha ne ki... aur sun daya naik... iske taraf ane wale har hath ko apun kaat dega.. chahein woo tera hath hi kyun na hoo..." he said in cold dangerous tone. "tab to afsoos ki mujhe tujhe bhi maar na hoga raghunath.." dm put out her gun and pointed to raghu. raghu stood there with hard eyes looking to that gun point without a blink. "nahi!!..." suddenly a feeble female voice came from raghu's side. rghu got a bit startled and looked towards antara. she was silent all the moment, observing raghu and dm's verbal fight with wide eyes. but when dm ointed her gun to raghu she couldn't hold herself. "nahin!! Aap aisa kuch nahi karengey..." antara said with a feeble but determined voice looking towards Dm. her eyes again got that strong determined look. "ee miscall tu chup baith.." raghu said in a slight scold. But she didn't cared and came down from jeep. She was about to lost balance for her wounded feet. Raghu caught her shoulder and supported her. Holding raghu's hand she stood up and looked at Dm. DM suddenly became startled looking at the hidden fire in the eyes of that girl. She wasn't even shaking a bit or seemed afraid in spite of surrounded by a whole group of goons. Siddiqui was right. The girl was not so easy thing as she looked. "aap raghu ko kuch nahi karengey..." antara said looking straightly in dm's eyes. "miscall tu chup ho ja yaar teri tabiyat thik nahi hain..." raghu tried to shut her up but she didn't "nahi main chup nahi rahungi.." she looked at raghu. "tumhe kya lagta hain.. koi tumhe aa kar goli maar ne ki dhamki de aur main chup chap piche baithi rahungi... no way raghu!! NEVER!!" her determined voice increased dm's amusement. She again looked back to dm and there was a hidden fire in her eyes. "aap ki dushmani mujhse hain... job hi karna hain mere sath kijiye... par ragu se to aap ki koi dushmani nahi hain... main jaisa manta hain woo aap ko..aap ko mujhe maar na hain to mariye... main khud razi hoon aap ke banduk ke samne khare hone ke liye... par aap raghu ko jane dengey... Usey kuch nahi hona chahiye..." her voice didn't shake a single bit while saying those words. But her firm direct answer shook dm overall. She never confronted a girl like her, brave, fearless. Even her determined words were enough to shake the feet of Dm. antara felt a bit dizzy due to health. She took a deep breath to compose herself and looked back to raghu. he was looking towards her with amused eyes. she always made him startled, amused altogether. The depth of her feelings for him, he never experienced like that before. Even she was careless about her own life when it came to him. Suddenly raghu felt his determination to save her increased more. He looked back to Dm's startled face with a broad smirk. "ab samajh mein aya Daya Naik ki apun kyun iske sath hain aur tere sath naii?! Arey tu too apne aap ke liye jeeti hain... apne swarth ke liye... par ye... ye khud se pahele dusro ke bareinmein sochti hain... tu toh bas logo jaan leta hain... par ye apun ke liye apni jaan de sakta hain... ye mereko Mumbai jane se roka bhi naii kyun ki woo mere ko tere se door rakhna chahti thi... taki uski wajah se mere ko chot na ayein.. areey tu issey kya maregi... jiski atma khud mari huyi hain woo dusre ko kya maregi?!!" raghu said with firm voice holding antara's feeble body strongly to his chest. it seemed like evem if god came down to take antara, he wouldn't let him do that. "HO GAYA TUM DONO KA FALTU KA BAKWAS??!! Raghunath ek akhri mauka diya tha tujhe bach ne ke liye... par abtoo tum dono ko koi nahi bacha sakta... pahele too socha tha ki eek goli se ura doongi... par itni assan maut tere jaise kire ko nahi milne wale... apne charon taraf aankh utha ke dekh... ye sab log aaj tum dono ko maut dengey.. itna dardnaak maut ki tum dono kabhi soch bhi nahi sakte.." dm said with murderer's gaze in her eyes. raghu just smirked. "arey daya naik teri yadast bahut kamzor ho gaya hain... yaad kar... itne salon se shetty, anna... tere ilake ke sare gundo ko akele samhalte aya hoon... bhool gaya... bhej tere inn pillo ko.. misscall ka ek bhi baal baka kar ke dikhaye to apun apna naam badal dega..." his loud voice was full of warning which made shiver in everyone's eyes. They all knew raghubhai very well. They knew that he was equal to ten men alone and at that moment he looked really dangerous. "raghu!! mat karo aisa.." antara said in a fearful voice from his chest, "wo log itne sare hain aur tum akele.." her eyes were worriedly fixed to his face. "arey tu tension mat le miscall... Aaj bahut dino ka bharas nikalna hain.." he said in such a normal voice keeping his eyes on them. He seemed so relax, surrounded by those goons. "arey khare khare mera mooh kya dekh rahe ho... maar dalo unhe..." daya mai ordered. They slowly headed towards the jeep at the center of their man made circle reducing the diameter. Raghu's eyes became alert and he covered antara behind her coming at front. Antara was hell worried for raghu. she knew that he was strong but they were so many. He was still holding her hand in his grip. The man who was at their front coming towards them bouncing the hockey stick in his hand came forward at first, running and screaming madly. He was waving hockey stick in air. Raghu just smirked and stood there relax. And when the man came forward, raghu left antara's hand and forwarded a bit towards the goon. Antara bounced on the door of jeep and supported herself. The goon was just an inch near raghu when raghu jerked his body and kicked his leg on the air aiming that goon's face. the goon felt like his all teeth were cracked down. Like a huge stone had hit on his face. his body jerked backward due to the push and bouncing a bit he hit the ground at last. The goon fell on his mouth and blood came out from his face. The goon became senseless at the spot. All other goons froze for a moment and their leg shook heavily seeing the condition of one of their companion. They looked at raghu with a bit worried face. Raghu showed his irritating grin to them and called them to him indicating with finger. All of their jaw hardened by the challenge and that time more than one people came forward. All of them came to him at unison. The two goons with chains in their hand jumped on raghu. Raghu easily swept away at a side and in a very artificial way he grabbed the chains in the hands of those goons. He pulled those chains so hardly that those goons coulddn't hold their balance and rolled. Soon their throats were caged in the hold of raghu's storm arms and they were found suffocating to take breath. With another huge push of hand they heard the sound of bone cracking and soon they collapsed on ground suffering for their breath. Everything happened within 2 to three minute. Another goon came and held raghu from back. the goon tried to press his throat to resist his breathing but at the next moment raghu hold the right hand of the goon and pulled it frontward with a huge jerk. The goon felt a huge pain spreading throughout her right arms joint to fingertip. That goons hand was totally broken. He swept away from raghu's side with a huge scream and collapsed. Another goon with open dagger in his hand he waved his dagger pointing raghu's chest. raghu swept at side in a blink and the dagger swept in the air. The goon again tried and that time raghu got a small cut on his left arm as the dagger touched it slightly. A small blood stream came down through his yellowish jacket. The goon threw the dagger abruptly and a small cut appeared near raghu's jaw. Raghu bent down and brushed his thumb on his chin to wipe out the blood. The goon became excited and again attack on him but that time raghu quickly moved and caught the wrist of that man which was holding the dagger. "mendak ki tarah bahut uchal liya tune... chal tere ko kachwa banate hain.." he said in cold tone. The dangerous look in his eyes shook the goon allover and no sooner he was found in the ground holding his head. Three to four goons attacked them from all side with hockey stick, chains and daggers. But even they altogether coulkdn't handle him. raghu was easily handling them one after another and true to say those goons were in crisis more than him. antara was standing near the jeep and looking towards them with worried fesarful eyes. she was hell worried as he was surrounded by four to five goons. Although it didn't seemed that he was bothered but she was worried that if he got hurt somehow. After all how many times he could defend them all alone. Damnit!! She didn't even have the phone. How could she call for help. Antara's concentration was o raghu so he didn't noticed that a goon was approaching to her. she suddenly caught her hand and dragged her. "ouch!!..." antara screamed as she got hurt on her leg. The goon dragged antara harshly and she tried to shove away her hand. Before he could move even a single inch, he got a huge punch on his face. The goon fell on the road immediately and antara found herself secured in raghu's hand again. "tu thik hain na?!!" he asked her worriedly cupping her face. she nodded in yes. Suddenly her eyes fell on raghu's back where a goon was coming to hit him with hockey stick. "raghu!!" she screamed. Raghu quickly moved back and grabbed the hockey stick. With a small pressure in his hand the hockey stick was broken in two pieces. The goon became afraid and ran away from the place. After that the remaining three to four goons didn't dared to mess with raghu and they quickly ran off the place. Raghu caught antara's hand and was about to get on the jeep when they suddenly stopped. At some feet distance they saw daya mai standing there, pointing her gun to them. both of them became startled. Evilness was oozing from dm's eyes. "maaf karna raghunath!! Tujhe khoneka afsoos to hoga mujhe... par kya karoon... tune mujhe mazboor kar diya.." dm said. "raghu hatho mere saamne se..." antara said with poor voice. "kabhi naiii.." raghu turned back and hugged her tightly so that even if she wanted he couldn't push him away. "raghu aisa mat karo... goli maar dengey woo tumhe..." antara's voie chocked as tears welding up from her eyes. "maar ne de... waisey bhi tere wagar to apun zinda naii rahega... issey acha dono sath mein mar jayein..." Raghu said in firm voice. Antara was crying her heart out. "ro mat miscall!!..sayad yahich humari kismet hain.. apun logo ne wadha kiya tha ki ek dusre ka sath kabhi naii chor ne ka.. too aaj kaise chor de.." he said. "Raghu!!.." she tightly hugged him back. "maine tumse kahan nahi naa..." She saw daya mai keeping her other hand on the trigger fixing the aim. "I LOVE YOU!! YOU ARE THE BEST MAN I CAN EVER GET!!!" she said and closed her eyes with a smile. raghu also smiled widely. They hugged each other with their life waiting for their death to approach. A death so beautiful, in his hand!! "BOOMMM!!!" the sound of gunshot spread on the air. Both of them waited to feel the endless pain burning their feature. But surprisingly they didn't feel anything. And they became startled when the painful scream came from daya mai's side. They shot their eyes open and looked at Dm. she was seating on the floor and screaming in pain. She was holding her left shoulder tightly with her right hand's palm. Blood was oozing through her hand. Within three min the numerous numbers of militaries came out from darkness and covered the area. Some of them stood surrounding daya mai pointing their rifle to her. Dm looked at them with disgusted face. she was cleane bold that time and no way to escape. The militaries also arrested the other goons scattered on the area. Raghu and antara were still standing near the jeep with startled face. at that moment zoya came there rushing with an army officer. "raghu bhaijaan!! Antara aap dono thik to hain na?!!" Zoya asked worriedly. Both of them just nodded their head as they were still startled. "allah ka lakh lakh sukra hain... ki ye zanab wakt rahete dekh liya uss aurat ko aap dono ko shoot karte huye..." Zoya showed towards DM and the army officer standing near them who shot Dm. "par aap idhar kaise?!!" raghu at last be able ti talk. "arey tum dono ane mein der kar rahe the to mujhe fikar ho rahi thi... dil baar baar kahe raha tha kit um dono kisi bari musibat mein ho... to maine general se kahan ye baat... unko bhi fikar hone lagi... Inse miliye... ye cornel singh hain.,. general ne inko humare sath bheja aur sathe mein kuch forces bhi de diye ta ki musibat parne par action le sake..." zoya said. "thank u zoya di... and cornel, I don't know how to thank you... you both saved our life..." antara said in a great full voice. "That's our duty madam... and also you are the one who should be thanked. For you, we are in verge to destroy a dangerous terrorist gr." Cornel said, "And I think we should go now... it's not safe in outside for you people as long as we didn't catch siddiqui and aman." He proposed. All of them moved wwith cornel. Raghu hold antara for support and she slowly walked with his help. At some distant, daya mai looked at them with disgusted eyes. They were moving together with their new life and she was all surrounded by those army peoples getting towards the prison.

ps: guyss i really don't know what i have written actually.. for the past 4 hours befor starting to type, i was literally pulling my hairs out... cause i really really sucks at action sequence🤢... so i generally try to avoid those kinds of dhisyu dhusyu scenes... i didn't know what to write, how to define... and at last after cracking my head i came up with these four page long update which will surely make all of your bheja roast...

don't worry i am all ready to face your, rotten egg, tomatoes, joota, chappal everything you have for me...