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Posted: 11 years ago
chapter 59 unred at page 97
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I m feeling relief to see raghu found antara...wo use akela chor k jata hi kyu hai...but now she is in safe hands and she is okay...hmmm...so DM arrested that's a good news...and I loved it...Wonderful updates ria...sorry for late reply...but please continue soon...
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mind blowing marvelous wonderful update
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beautiful ...beautiful ...beautiful ... every thread of ur story is perfectly entwining with the other ...hattts off to you Riiaaa... u r an awesome writer ... this story is beyond wonderful ... i am planning to send you some special gifts which u wd lik very much 😆😆😆
wait for them ...😆😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update ria...loved it...
But seems like this is goin to end soon 😭...but i never want this story to end, it should have hundreds of chapters...
Plzzz dont end this so soon...😔
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: gargi21

Awesome update ria...loved it...

But seems like this is goin to end soon 😭...but i never want this story to end, it should have hundreds of chapters...
Plzzz dont end this so soon...😔

gargi thats so sweet of you that you liked the story so much, but the thing is that i don't like to drag my stories after a certain point cause it will be boring and monotonous after that... i have started the story allready with the decssion at what point i should end that. and the story reached to that point. and i think it's time to turn the shutter down. otherwise the story would be dragged...
and also i have my other ff and ss pending... i didn't updated them for quite long. so i have to think about them to...
i hope u enjoy the last few days journey of sajda tere pyar mein... thanks for all ur replys and appreciation. it means a lot...
take care..
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Chapter 61

"antara!!..." a very warm voice entered into her ear. Antara felt like she was drowning in deep water and the voice called her. at that moment she saw a bright light in darkness. She slowly felt a hand on her head caressing her hairs. She saw a man's face near his head. "pappa!!" she said in a very joyful voice. yes his pappa was seating near her head. "so hows my little girl?!" pappa asked with that same affectionate voice and warm smile. "pappaa!!!..." her voice chocked. Tears streamed down her chicks. "now what happened my dear. As much I remember my antara, she never used to cry at every word. Where is that sunshine smile which brightened up my morning?!" dr kaul asked. "pappa, where have you gone pappa?!! I miss you very much." Antara asked like a small girl who is craving so long for her father's love. "I never left antara. I was always near you, like tour shadow. I am inside you antara, in your heart and now I see the world through your eyes." he smiled and said. "pappa!!.." antara's sorrow turned into amusement. "so you don't have to die to reach me dr. cause it will hurt me more if you sacrifice your own life to reach me." He paused for a while and caressed her hairs lovingly. "There are so many people who need you antara. your mother, ishan everyone. Just think how will they feel if something happens to you? no antara, you have to live for them. cause they will also get hurt along with you." he said. "I am sorry pappa. I know I was being reckless all the time. I am sorry." Again a lone tera escaped from her eyes. "you don't have to be. you know I never said that before, but I am proud to be your father." He said. "pappa!!..." she smiled. "your happiness is just around you antara. Invite them with open arm and live your life fully. You don't have to be sad for any reason. Always remember that I don't like to c tears on my princess's eyes." he said, antara nodded innocently. "always keep smiling okk?! Now I have to go. But remember this, I am always with you and will always be." he said and suddenly antara's vision got blurred. "pappa... pappa wait!!! Please don't go!!!... PAPPAAA!!!" she screamed in her sleep. Raghu who was seating near her suddenly saw antara's restless ness and became worried. And suddenly she screamed calling her father. "miscall!! Ee miscall!!!" he cupped her face worriedly and called her. she was sweating allover and panting heavily. "miscall kya huya tujhe?! miscall.. ee miscall..." he said caressing her chick. Antara heard his voice and it seemed like it was coming from so far. She slowly got back her consciousness and shot her eyes open. First thing she saw after getting clear of her blur eyesight, were two familiar coal black deep eyes leaning close to her and watching over her worriedly. Her eyes widened in sudden fear. "raghu!!... raghu tum yahan kya kar rahe ho?!!" she asked in weak, stumbled voice. "miscall kya huya tujhee chilla kyun rahi thi?!!" he asked in worried voice. but antara didn't seemed to listen to his words. "tum wapas kyun ayein?! Tumhe yahan nahin ana chahiye tha... kyun ayein tum yahan?!.." she asked in fearful voice. "misscal shant ho ja... pahele meri baat to sun..." he tried to say. "nahi raghu... tum yahan nahi rahe sakte... woo maar degi tumhe... woo mujhe marne aa rahi hain... agar usne tumhe mere sath dekh liya to tumhe nhi... Nahi tum jaon yahan se... jaon..." she almost pushed him. tears were streaming up from her innocent hazel. It was enough for raghu. he hold her hand tightly and pinned them to the bed sheet. "chup!! Uth te hi bakbak suru kar di apni... ab chupchap meri baat sun." he said in firm voice. she broke out in crying. "tum kyun itna zid karte ho?! Kyun meri baat nahi samajhte?! Tumhe kuch ho jayein to..." she couldn't say further as her chocked voice didn't allow her. "antara!!" he cupped her face slowly and said, "aur tere ko kuch ho gaya to apun ka kya haan?! Kitni baar kahoon apun tere bina zinda naii rahe sakta... kyun bhool jati hain ye baat?!" his eyes became emotional and so much intense. Antara's frustration slowed down a bit and she tried to get up. Her whole feature atched and she made a painful whisper. Raghu caught her shoulder and helped her to seat. She was getting back her senses slowly. She remembered that she was in siddiqui's house and then that secret passage and tunnels. She fell down there. her head was so heavy. She caught her temple and rubbed them. "kya huya?! Dard ho raha hain?!" he asked in worried voice. "nahi main thik hoon..." she said in weak voice. "ye kya halat bana diya tune apna?! Haan? Metre ko jana hi naii chahiye tha tere ko idhar chorke.. apun kaise bhool gaya kit u jidhar jata hain afat tere piche bhagta hain..." he said in frustration. She didn't answered and just let out a sad mild smile. "has mat!! Pata hain kya halat ho gaya tha apun ka.." he said in sad voice and then his frustration increased again. "tune mere ko bataya kyun naii haan?! Tere ko to sab pata tha.." he asked demanding an answer. "kis ki baat kar rahe ho tum?!" she became a slight confused. "daya mai ke barein mein... kyun naii kaha ki woo bhi siddiqui se mili huyi hain.." he asked in firm voice. she became a slightly amused. "tumhe kaise pata chala?!" she asked in confusion. "sukar kar ki sahi time mein pata chal gaya... Jammu station mein beera se samna ho gaya tha apun ka..." he said. "so tumhe sab pata chal gaya..." she sighed. "haan!!! Par tune mere ko bataya kyun naii haan?! Tujhe kuch toh zarror pata tha... Apun hamusha se dekhta tha jab bhi mai ki batein ati thi tu taal deta tha..." he said. He did observe her every time thoroughly. She smiled a bit looking at him, "agar main kaheta to kyat um yakeen karte?!" she asked quietly. He didn't answered and became silent for a while. "mujhe pata hain kit um mai ki bahut respect karte the... Agar main uss wakt bata deti too sayad bahut bari problem ho jati... kyun ki mujhe unpe bas doubt tha...unke against koi proof nahi tha mere pass jis se main tumhe yakeen dila sakoon... Main bas sahi wakt ka intezaar kar rahi thi... aur beach mein ye sab ho gaya.." she said. "wohich to yaar.. agar bata deti to kam se kam ye sab too nahi hota..." he said with a bit sad voice. "aur main bata deti toh tum maan jatein?... khare ho pate day amai ke khilap?! main jaan ti thi ki wo tumhare liye bhagwan hain..." she said quietly. He looked back to her again with that new developed intensity, "tub hi na yeri hain..." he said with tender voice and took her feeble wrist in his hold. "tere liye to apun kisi se bhi panga le lega... bhagwan se bhi... to mai kya cheez hain..." he said. Again the intensity of his feeling washed over her. she remembered his pappa's word. Her happiness was all around her and who knows he might be indicating towards raghu. she leaned and rested her temple on his chest. He encircled his strong hands around her closing their distance. "sorry!!.." she said. "Mention not!!.." he said. She giggled in his chest and said, "kya baat hain.. paheli baar correct English word...". He was so relieved to hear the sound of her smile. so soothing, like a casual stream's sound. He closed his eyes and held her firmly to him. she also became silent and closed her eyes. the place where she felt most secure, his arms! After some silent moment antara said, "ab choro mujhe aur jao... I know ki mujhe fever hain... jyada der tak pass rahoge to tumhe bhi lag jayega.." she said in concerned voice. "ti achi baaat hain na... apun bhi idhar tere pass let jayega.." he chuckled. "chup raho.." she hit him lightly in shoulder with her hand. "kyun?! kaal raat ko to bare maze se let gayi thi apun ke sath. Abb kya huya?!.." he said with a chuckle. She remembered their moment together in last night. She flushed again. he lifted her hand caressing her back and snuggled through her hairs. She closed her eyes and became quite feeling his gentle but love filled caress. Soon his lips started to roam on her skin gently. Their contact was enough to raise the heat. Soon his gentle kisses became deep and her hand which was lightly resting over his strong shoulder clutched his shirt tightly. His hold got tighter tucking her feature more to his body and his lips roamed down her neck. Her lips parted and slow gasps came out from them. They again started to lose themselves to each other. But that time his caresses were gentle than before. He knew she was weak and stressed out. Although it was hard but he controlled his increasing desires which might hurt her. he cupped her face and looked at her deeply. Her eyes were close and slow pants were coming from them. He gently pushed his lips against her carefully. His kiss was light but full of emotion. She could felt his undefined love through his every touch. After some moment they parted. He touched her forehead with him and looked at her face with pleasant eyes. her leads were lowered and her chicks were also flushed slightly. His eyes got warmer. He didn't know if something really happened to her while he was away from her then how would he survive?! He thanked god for sending him back to her at time and he was not going to leave her alone for a single second. "antara..." he called her. his voice was so loving. She lifted her eyes and looked at him with a gentle smile. a smile on which anyone would be ready to die. God knows how long they would continue to gaze on each other's eyes but at that moment they heard someone's sound. They broke apart quickly. Zoya entered inside the room talking in her mobile. "yes she is fine!! Don't worry..." she said and her eyes fell on antara. "hey antara you woke up at last?! How are you feeling?!" she asked. "zoya di you here?!" antara was slightly amused. "yeah I will explain you everything but first talk to your vishal uncle. He is so much worried I think," zoya said coming close to her. "vishal uncle?!" antara said. "yes, he took my no from army general as your ph was unreachable." Zoya said handling over the phone. "hello uncle.." she said. At first she had to hear a big doze of lecture from uncle. After some moment when he slowed down a bit antara said at last, "I am sorry uncle. But I didn't know that it would come out like that." She said. "antara I always told you do everything keeping yourself safe. But you never listened." He said. "sorry uncle. But if I didn't take the risk I would never come to know about the secret passage throughout siddiqui's room." She said. "what?! Passage?!!" he was startled. Antara then informed her about the secret tunnel through siddiqui's window and the underground chamber. "gr8!!! Did you informed armies about that.. ok ok I will inform them. now you should take rest." He said. "uncle what about that secret code?!" she asked. "nothing yet... we are trying hard... but still we couldn't detect the pattern.." he said. "ohh.." she became a bit worried. After some other talks they disconnected the phone. "antara took a deep sigh. "so antara, tumhare uncle ki lecture kaisa laga?!" she giggled. "don't ask me, he was just... " she almost crashed her head on her chest. "sach mein antara bahut dara diya tha tumne... Tumhari uncle ki galti nahin hain!!" zoya said. "arey galti iski naii hain... iske khopri ka accelater hameesha galat raste par le jata hain issey .." raghu said from side. "uff tum chup rahoge..." antara said in irritation. "kyun?!! Sach baat hajam naii hoti na?!!... arey zoya bhabi aap jaan te naii.." he turned towards zoya. "arey jidhar baki log danger sign dekh ke ulti taraf bhagta hain aur ye miscall ulta danger sign ke taraf bhagta hain.." he said. "main jaan bojh ke thori na musibat mein parti hoon.." she said. "aut naii to kya?!! Siddiqui ke ghar mein kaun sa woo... khufiya rasta dikha,... toh tujhe kya zarurat thi andar jane ki... tere pair mein khujli ho rahi thi kya andar jane ke liye..." he said in his usual irritating tone. Zoya was silently admiring their cute conflict with a pleasant smile. "raghu!!" her voice raised a bit. And she jerked up. In that process her left ankle got jerked. "ouch!!..." she whimpered in pain. "arey antara.. samhalke.. chot hain tumhare pair mein.." zoya said. "haan dekha... jyada uchal kud karne ka natiza..." raghu said again. antara took a deep breath to compose herself. At that moment another quarrel of two small voice could be heard. "ishan... don't pull my hairs..." the little girly voice said. "and you shouldn't play with my fav ink pain you kiddy." Ishan pouted. "shut up you four eyes..." the girly voice said. "ohh god they started again... jab se mile hain tab see bas lare ja rahe hain..." zoya stroke her head. Ishan and zara came near the door of their room in a very odd way. ishan was pulling zara's one pigtail and zara was pulling ishan's hairs. "zara... stop it!!" zoya said rolling her eyes. Their eyes fell inside the room. "didu..." ishan screamed. "appa!!..." zara's eyes became happy. Both of them rushed inside the room and hugged antara tightly. "hey watchout!!! Antara is not well." Zoya said. "it's okk!!..." antara said and gave both of them a tight hug. "didu dekho na.. isne meri fav pen le li..." Ishan said. "apa main to bas dekh rahi thi.." zara said. "kahi tumhare hath se gir jati toh?!! Toot jati toh?" ishan said. "tum aisa kar rahe ho jaise hath laga ne se hi toot jayega ..." zara said angrily. "arey chup raho tum dono..." zoya said from side. "zara tum delhi mein apne uncle ko phone lagao.. unhe kahe do ki hum kaal hi aa rahe hain..." zoya said. "kya aap kaal hi ja rahe hain?!!" antara became a bit startled. "haan..!!" zoya said with a big sigh. "aur waisey bhi iss sahar mein mere liye ab hain hi kya?! delhi mein rehan ka ek dost hain... wahan chali jaungi too rahena ka kuch na kuch intezaam bhi ho jayega..." she said. "ye zoya bhabi.. bole too tum bhi apun logo ke sath Mumbai chalo na.. wahan aone basti mein mast jagah hain... koi problem naii hogi.." raghu said from side. "haan zoya di... aap humare sath chaliye... aur waisey bhi delhi mein aap rahegi kahan?!" antara said. "that's so kind of you two... par iski koi zarurat nahi..." zoya sighed. "par didi.." antara said. "it's okk... zara phone lagana unhe.." zoya handed over the phone to zara. zara called her uncle.. "momma... isme toh kahe raha hain ki no doesn't exist..." zara said. "ohh.. lagta hain unhone phone change kar liya... tum landline pe try karo.. main no bata ti hoon.." zoya said the no and zara typed that and called again. "momma firse kahe rahi hain.. check ur no..." zara said. "par no to thik hain..." zoya became confused. "iss kiddy ne hi kuch garbar ki hogi.." ishan made a face. "shut up four eyes.." zara said. "ishan chup raho..." antara said rolling her eyes and took the mob from zara's hand. "arey zara ye toh landline no hain na.. isme STD codes daalne parte hain..." antara said and gave back the phone to zara. "ohh haan.. main bata na bhool gayi.." zoya said. "ohh delhi ka std code kya hain momma?!!" zara asked. "lo tumhe itna bhi nahi pata 011 hain buddhuuu..." ishan said from the side. antara suddenly froze at the spot. O11?!!! The no ticked in her mind. "haan tumhe bahut pata hain.." zara pouted. "haan isme kaun si bari baat hain... india ke teen metro cities ke std codes sabko pata hota hain.,... delhi ka 011, Mumbai ka 022 and Kolkata ka 033... samjhe kiddy..." ishan said. Antara was not at all listening to their convo. 011 , 022 and 033... these all were same from the code. And these all were the STD codes of India's three main metro cities. Delhi, Mumbai and kolkata!!! And these three cities make a triangle with each other if they were joined on the map of india. The same type of triangle which she saw in siddiqui's file!! So that means those three no were indicating the three bog metro cities of India. God!! Dod they planned for a huge blast in those three metro cities?!!

ps: now i am sure ki iss chapter ko parne ke baad sab ka dimag halwa ban gaya hain...god kya kya likhti raheti hoon main.🤢... abtoh defo mujhe anda, tomator chappal sab parne wale hain...

Edited by ifians - 11 years ago
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Awesome update finally antar is better and taghu is by her side
Thank god no dm. Finally thanks to ishu she has cracked the code
Thank u for the rantara moments u gave we're lovely
Thanks for updating. Thanks for the pm
Edited by nazi786 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ria ! Love you for this update !! I just love the way Raghu always reaches in time...😊
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dear Raghu ne antara ko khoj kar bacha liye...
ab to bas DM ki band bajne baki hai...
lovely update

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