~~SS-DESTINY~~PART 9 UPDATED PAGE 20 - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
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when r u updating
cant wait for raghus entry btw pls update ur other ones as well
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: honeybees22

when r u updating

cant wait for raghus entry btw pls update ur other ones as well

will update the rest tomorrow dear😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww nice start dear, continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amfi,

Nice prologue and first part
Too short LOL
Please update ASAP
Thanks for the PM

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Capucine

Amfi,

Nice prologue and first part
Too short LOL
Please update ASAP
Thanks for the PM

thanks for liking and will update soon
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Originally posted by: Roy.nikki143

Awww nice start dear, continue soon

thank u dear
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Part 2

Some where in the same city

A boy is jogging while continuously is on a call through blue tooth...

Boy:- tu kabhi nahe sudhrega...

Rohit naik:- chill bro its cool aur phir jo maza jeetne mein hai, in sab k baad uska koi comparison nahe..

Boy (raghu):- rohit tu kab samjhega????? Mein thak gaya hu ghar pe bahane banate banate k tu wahan kitna mann laga k parh raha hai...aur bachu ye tou already decided hai ka ye tera last year hai new york mein...phir dad tujhe yahan bula lenge and tu yahen se apna mba complete karega and then dad ka hath bataega...he really needs rest yaar...

Rohit:- uska kya hai bro aap bhi tou help kar sakte ho naa????

Raghu:- in case you forgot am going to be a doctor naa k business school me study ki hai mene... Agar doctor na hota tou zarror dad ki help karta...

Rohit:- haan wo tou aap abhi bhi karty ho naa baad me bhi kar lena..

Raghu (smiles):- aur phir institution tu sambhalna thek hai?????

Rohit:- ohoo bro plzz ye blackmailing deal yaheen rokiye...(sad tone)...bro plzz dad ko convince kijeye naa india se ny kitna beneficial hai...plzzz

Raghu:- wo mujhe pata hai but mom bhi yehi chahti hein k tu wapas aja...she too misses you a lot yaar...aurrr

Rohit (sadly) :- ok bro, ok...thek hai bro i will enjoy my few months here then i will be back... Thek hai naa ab tou?????

Raghu:- hmm... Chal apna khayal rakhna am going now...college bhi jana hai.

Rohit:- ok bro love you all bye

Raghu:- we love you too take care..bye

And they cut the phone...

This was raghu and rohit's routine to talk in the morning ...raghu on jog and rohit in some bar or cafe with his new date every day...

Raghu comes home and informs dadi and mom about his talks with rohit (its raghu's routine to inform that he talked with his bro and he is doing well)

Antara came down wearing pink salwar suit with dupatta on her shoulders and sat with family and starts shouting :-

Maa mera breakfastde do am getting late sapna will be waiting for me.

Mrs. Kaul (comes with bowl of noodles which antara made earlier)... Ye lo khao apna noodle...

Aman:- i really don't understand mom ye noodles bhi koi naashta hua bhala...??????????

antara (while eating noodles with fork and spoon) :- plzz bhai ...aap roz shru ho jate ho ...mujhe yehi acha lagta hai subah subah with a glass of milk

Mrs. Kaul:- najaane kab bari hogi, ye bachpana chor de antara...

suddenly a voice came and every one gets sacred

Voice:- kyon chor de??? Abhi tou ye mera pyaala sa bacha hai..

Antara smiles nervously to her dad ...

Yes that was Mr.Kaul... He is very angry and has his own way to show love towards his kids..

On the other side,

Raghu comes home after jog and talk with rohit and after informing dadi and or mom about rohit's well beings (he never discusses this infront of sapna as she wud start weeping )

Raghu comes and greets everyone on breakfast table ...

Raghu:- good morning every one...mom i will come after having a shower

Pamela (smiles at raghu):- thek hai beta come soon

Sapna:- hey bro aapse kuch kaam hai

Raghu goes to her and gives side hug while hugging he gives his credit card to her secretly...well pamela notices that and says

Pamela:- raghu you have spoiled her ...every week you give her money ..that's not fair...najaane ye larki har week itne paise kahan urati rehti hai.

Raghu:- relax mom, akhir meri ek he to sis hai...use bhi haq nahe kya mere paison per...meri pocket money mere bhai behan nhe lenge tou aur kon le ga...(and smiles at his mom)

Sapna too smiles at her mom and says

Sapna:-that's like my kind bro ...love you bro

Raghu:- love you too...(and kisses her head)

Sapna smiles but somewhere is scared that what will be raghu's reaction when she will tell him that she still loves her love and still meeting him secretly (little did she know that raghu already knows that and seeing the limits which sapna created for both her and love of her life , raghu is little bit approving her lover but still not fully convinced)

After break fast sapna asks raghu to give her lift to the college (as they both are in same college )...raghu agrees and moves towards his car

antara too gets ready to go to college after break fast and leaves with driver towards college.

Raghu drops sapna and sees, she is hugging some girl (that is of course antara)...but raghu couldn't get to see her face coz she is having her back towards raghu ...and 3 of them proceeded towards their classes...

Precap:- how about Raghu Antara meeting ????????

Edited by amfi123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
Oh so finally cums raghu..😉
Hes so loving n caring awww😳
Gd...so dying fr rantara first meeting...
Hope it wld be awesome one.. 😆
Waiting fr nxt part..
Update soon dear..
Thanks amfi 😊
Edited by ankusanu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow awesome update yaar. really now looing for rantara meeting
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing update
Can't wait for them to meet now
Please do update soon

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