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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Lovely start
Please do continue soon

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

superb scketch,prologue nd even part 1

now waiting for Raghu entery.

please update soon

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: ankusanu
Sounds nice...2 enemy families 😆
Maza aayega ..plz update soon dear
Waiting ...😉

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Tsuchi
wow! thats great😛...thanks...waiting😊

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Originally posted by: rima4ever

nice banner please pm me

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Originally posted by: Smaggy
this is really a different concept...😊 liked it.😉
keep writing it...😆 😆

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: rima4ever

loved the prologue and the character sketch
is thisstory by any means similar to the niyaz story of yeh hai ashiqui ?

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: harshita1996
Hey nice concept..
Really inrlteresting..thanks fr pm..
Update soon..:) keep writing..

Originally posted by: ankusanu
Vry nicely defined characters .
Hmmm nice dear ...hoping d ss to be grt..
Plz update soon ..
Waitung dear...

Originally posted by: rima4ever
awesome start

Originally posted by: ankusanu
Aww itna chota update...anyways it ws nice..
Antu scared of her father.
N loves her mother alot...
Grt...waiting fr d update ..
Thanks dear...

Originally posted by: Tsuchi
awesome..character sketch..and update dear..👏
its really interesting yr...😛
antu's bonding is good with her dad and mom😊..bt why Mr.Kaul annoys on his wife?
precap..woww!!raghu's entry
thanks fr pm😊

Originally posted by: hayakhan5
That's a good start..
Loved it...
Amazing...
Mrs. Kaul is sweet...
Precap.. Raghu ki entry...
I m waiting...
Update asap...
Thanx for the pm...
Update soon and pm me..