raghu antra ss** Ab Ye Pyaar Na Hoga feer Hamse / PART 11 add @page 6

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hai gis my first rantra ss raghu satya an antra s lovestory ...pyaar main itana dard ab antra se pheer pyaar na hoga...wery soon start the ss ... antara is satya s wife but see love raghu phijicali heratly satu say love mi raghu say u my jaan antra is full hart at heart...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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rantara ss** ab ye pyaar na hoga pheer hamse

satya say antara ajj hamari sadi ki khusi main main ak party dena chahata huantra say jisa tum chaho satya ne antra ko one pic dreesh diya antra say satya tum jante ho main raghu dayamai rasika are ther raghu say satya vo nahi pahenygy antra say nahi satya main pahenugy main apne pati ke liye khuch bhi kar sakti hu.antara an satya go ther room raghu say yedi ajj koi kand karke chodegy muje dikhane ke vo satya ke liye khuch bhi kar sakati hai khuch karna padega...satya :antra tum mery liye ajj ye dreesh pahenogy nannaaa...ye baat nahi hai tum ye dreesh raghu ko tadpaane pahenogy tum jo karty ho vo raghu ko dikhane hi karti ho yaha tak ke mujse sadi bhi karli..ajj tum raghu ko dikhaogy ke tum mery liye kuch bhi kar sakti ho ...tum ajj bhi use raghu se pyaar karti ho dill se jism se antara say satya satya say jaan ajj tum mery liya karogy ya use raghu ko tadpaane ke liye karogy ...ajj main raghu ko tadpata dekhana chata hu tum raghu ko dikhaogy main tumse kitna pyaar karta hu aur tum ...yaad rakhna tum raat ko yahi room main hogy mery sath main tumhara pati hu main tume itana pyaar dunga ke tume natak karne ki jarurat nahi hogi antra rone lagi satya say na jaan ye raghu ke liye chod do ya ajj raat ke liye chood do ye pahenky aa jana

yaha raghu machmach mera ak kaam karega ja machmach bahi ye tu ...raghu say ja machmach ...
dayamai say rasika dekh rahi ho ajj jordaar damaka hone vala hai...rasiska say ha mai ajj party jo hai dayamai say nahi ajj antara bhuri tarha tadpane vaali hai...

raat ko satya raghu dayamai rasika sab aa gaye satya say antra nahi ayi antra ayi antara one pic main bhot hot lahg rahi thi raghu antra ko dekhata hi rah gya antra is not camftebal in the dreesh satya muje isme bhot ajib sa lag raha hai ...jaan chlo...
ledish an jentalmen meet my jaan my life antara an now antra sing a song fo mi ...antra maine suna hai tum bahot acha gaati ho sing fo mi antra say satya...satya sayantra yaad hai na...raghu tum hi kaho sayad maan jaye..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey its very interesting...
Loved it...
But just one advice -can u plzzz clearly specify everyone's dialogs...
Actually sometimes its confusing to find whos speaking...
But seriously i like d story ...
Continue soon n plzzz pm me... :) :)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow gud yaar but one request please if possible every one dialogue should be clarify...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 2


antra say satya tum ne ye nahi kaha tha ab satya say ha jaan ab kah raha hu tum song gaogy mery liye tum janti ho ye sab raghu ko tadpane ho raha hai satya say antra tum ajj raghu ko dikaho tum mujse kitana pyaar karti ho asa pyaar asa pyaar daya mai ne satya ko bhulaya dayamai say satya ye kya kar kar raha hai

antra ko rasika ne cold dreenk main nase ki goliya mila di rasika say antra ye le cold dreenk peely aur acha gaana ...antra ne cold dreenk piya
ra
antra khadi thi ragju ne uska hath pakda aur khich ke kone main le gaya diwaar par uske hath rakh kar uski ankho main dekahte antra antra sun antra say raghu muje choado raghu muje jane do kya kar rahe ho use thpda thoda nase ka ashar ho raha tha vo thik se boll naho pa rahi thi ...raghu mera hath chodao muje dard ho raha hai raghu say yedi mery baat sum uske hotho par hath rakh use palta diya antra say raghu raghu...raghu ne uske balo ko mahesusha karke hath ko antra par rakh ke antra ki jip band ki antra ro rahi thi raghu ko daka de kar jane lagi raghu ne uska hath khicha antra tery jip khul gayi thi apne pati ko boll ke tuje asi kapde de jise pahenky tu khush rahe nahi ke asi jisme tuje acha lage varns muje boll de vo main le aunga ...
antra say raghu tum ...raghu ne uska hath pakd ke room main le gaya sun ye sadi pahenly antra say raghu muje antra ko nasha chd raha tha vo ...raghu say antra chup pahenly...antra say vo raghu main vo tum yaha msin ye sari vo tum yaha ho main ...raghu say ha vo tu yaha sari pahenly raghu cahla gaya

raghu say satya tu asa mat kar muje dikhane antara ko...satya say acha ashiq aya hai...antra sari pahenky ayi satya say ye raghu ne sri di hai antra say satya vo meri satya say kaheny sunny ko raat padi hai .raghu say tu sach main antra ko pyaar karta to asi kapde kabhi nahi deta ...satya say raghu tu mat boll mery jaan ko kya pahenana chahie

satya say antra ab tim mery liye song ga ke sunao raghu ko ke tum mujse kitana pyaar karti ho asa pyaar
antra nase main


ye song main apne pyaar ko jatane ga rahi hu
kassm ki kassm hai kassm se hum pyaar hai sirf tum se(raghu ki ankho main dekha kar ro rahi thi)
ab ye pyaar na hoga peer hamse ( satya ki aur dekh ke angry hoke)
log kahety pagal hu main ye bhi na jani
dill lutaya hai maine
ab kisi ki na manu(dayamai ki aur dekha ke ankho main ak ajab sa dard ak kashish sab kho jane ki tadap thi )
chen de kar ky maine becheniya ye li hai
ninde uda key maine tuse wafae ki hai( raghu ko dekha ky kai vi raghu se kitana pyaar karti hai usne raghu ko sab khuch sup diya hai apna jism apna dill ab vo raghu ki hai)
kassm ki kassm hai kassm se ji rahe hai hum tery dam se
ab ye pyaar na hoga peer hamse...


antra khadi hoke raghu ky paad gayi ...satya is angry..

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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice one
but please write it in black and spell check as well and everyones dialoges should be specified
pls cont asap and PM me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice update dear...
But plzz specify d dialogs clearly...
Continue soon!!! :) :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 3

satya bhot gusse main tha...antra nahse main thi
main pyaar main apna sab kuch sup diya meri jindagi kery ashqi ...pyaar ak baar hi hota ak baar mahobate ..uska nasha uske liye sarmana use sab sup dena aur uska dard uski tadap...uska vo chuna uska rona sab pheer hamse saha nahi jaega ab ye pyaar hamse pheer nahi ho paega ...antra rone lagi thi dard main tadpate ...ragju ne apne hatho main kanxh ka glaash tod diya khun baheny laga ...vo rone laga tha ...satya gusse main antra chloo tum thak tjak gayi ho ...room main cahlo party is over gais ...vo antra ka hathbgusse maun pakd ke room main le gaya.. ragju rone laga tha antra tu muje tadpane itna tdparhi hai ajj tume daru pily ya kise ne satya satya tune uske dreenk main khuch mila diya ...antra hose.main nahi hai aur vo satya bhot gusse mai hai vo khuch bhi kar sakta hai muje antra ko sambhalna hoga...
satya room main antra tum ne raghu ki sari paheny aur apne pati ke samne raghu ke liye song gaya...antra nashe main thi ..vo apne aap ko sambhal nahi pa rahi thi satya say antra ajj tumne daru...ragju ne ...
antra : satya vo mery dreeah ki jip khul gayi thi vo raghu vo satya...antra nashe main thi satya say jaan maine kya kaha tha ke tum mery sath kitani khush ho ...aisa lagana cahiye ya ajj raat main tume itna pyaar karunga ke tum bhot khush ho jaogy ...satya antra ke paas jane laga antra sahemi si khud ko sambhal nahi paabrahi thi satya bhot gusse main tha antra: satya tum muje jana hai satya vo main satya...satya...satya: jaan tum ajj khuch mat kaho satya pyaar se jaan main tume...
antra diwar ke paas gayi satya vo ...
antra nashe main thi vo rone laghi thi vo hose main nahi thi satya ne uska hath apne par rakha antra hasne lagi satya ke kandhe pe sir rakh antra: main janti hu tum mujse bhot pyaar karte ho mery liye tadapte ho par ye pal hamara nahi hai ye lamha hamara nahi hai vo lamha ayega jab hamari saans tadpegy aur ye duriya mahesus karegy hamare tadap ko vo lamaha hamara hoga ...antra rone laghi thi use dhekh ke satya bhi ronelaga satya ne antra ko utha ke bad pe litaya aur jane laga antra ne satya ko colar pakd ke use apne par ...antra: muje chod ke mat jao yahi rook jao vo raghu ragju main tume...satya: antra tum muje raghu samjke...vo chala gaya ...antra say raghu tum raghu ...raghu antra ke room main aa raha tha vo satya se takraya raghu: satya ajj tune antra ko dreesh di tu janta tha antra vo pahwnky khush nahi hai uski jip khul gayi thi tu use pyaar karta to kabhi ase kapde phenne ko nahi kaheta...satya gusee main chala gya...
antra ayi ...vo pheesali raghu ne use sambhala...
antra : raghu tum vo satya ...raghu say chup hoja yedi antra rone laghi tji bahot jyaada rone lagi thi...

baaeish hone laghi ...raghu: antra tu chup ho jamain tery liye hu tumse hi hu tu ...tum chup ho jao vo aa jaega ...raghu ne antra ko gale laga liya ...

antra: muje ishq se rahena tha door
ishqe bade gam hai mashur
pheer bho ye dill hai mana nahi
muje kheech ke hai laya vahi
jaha ishq hai jaha ishq hai jaha ishq hai
( antra tadapte dard ke sath raghu ko dekha kar)
iss darde dill ki sifarish ab karde koi yaha
ke mil jaye ise vo barish jo bhiga de poori tarha
( raghu ne antra ko gale lagaya)
tujo mila to jidgi hai main puri nayi ho gayi
raghu:

hai be ashar duniya ki bate ab teey sunu main sada
milane ko tujse bahane karu
tu muskurae vaja main bahu
roz bhitana sath maun tery sara din mera
iss darde dill ki sifarish ab karde koi yaha
mill jae ise vo barish jo bhigade poori taha

pricap...

noor: raghu ise to tahdi lag gayi hai ise to ise to garmi ki jarurat hai varna thand ise.
raghu: muje antra ke sath...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow soo good pls cont soon
but pls mark the dialouges
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 4

raghu ne antra ka hath pakda raghu: antra kya hua antra antra...
noor apa ayi
raghu: antra ko kya hua...gar pe koi nahi hai.
raghu antra ko utha ke room main le gya.
raghu: ise thand lag rahi hai
raghu ne noor apa ne bahot kosish ki antra ko hose main lane ki..
noor apa: raghu antra ko bahot tandi lag rahi hai ab kuch karna hoga varna
raghu : ise hose main lane kya karna hoga...
noor apa say raghu ise garmi deny padegy...tum sanj rahe ho satya ko phone karo vo kaha hai abhi aa jaye...
raghu dekta raha vo satya ko kise bulaye antra ke saath ...vo tadap raha tha
raghu : aap kya kah rahi hai ..
noor ne phone lagya satya ne dekha antra ka phone usne nahi uthaya
raghu: vo ussd nafrat karti hai
noor: raghu ab antra ke liye ye tumhe karna hoga ..raghu antra ko garmi ki jarurat hai aur ab tumhe
raghu kaise antra ko..par antra ke liye use karna hoga..noor bahar gayi...raghu ne antra ko uthya aur gale laghaya vo rone laga tha vo dard vo tadap uske sanso nain thi raghu ne antra ke gile kapde ...antra thodi hose main thi vo mahsush kar rahi thi par khyxh kah nahi pa rahi thi raghu ne apnw siet ke batan khole antra ki doori kholi vo antra ke liye kar raha tha..raghu ne antra ko bed par sulaya aur...raghu antra s romince ..
...
raghu ne antra ko banho main kiya.he hold antra in her arms he tach antra ..he feel antra full moon night was a proof her love the mument..vo pyaar pyaar pyaar pyaar pyaar pyaar pyaar. .antra ki chudiya tut rahi thi antra ki payal chank rahi thi..

satya : muje antra ko nahi kahena chahiye tha ajj uski dreenk main kise ne vonhose main bhi nahi thi muje uske paas jana hahiye...
antra ko hose aya...
raghu kada tha
antra: mera sir muje..raghu tum yaha antra ne dekha uski chudiya uske kapde
antra : ye sab kya hai apa raghu tumne kal raat
raghu: vo tuje tand lag rahi thi tery sanse tahdi pad rahi thi kal raat muje ...vo tuje garmi ...
antra rone lagi thi
antra: apa ap bhi main ...satya kaha hai ..raghu ka coller pakd ke raghu tumne tumhari himat kose..
antra rote rote sidiya utri satya se takrayi...usne satya ko gale laga liya satya ko laga jse antra ne use ...
satya: antra kya hua ...kahi is raghu ne to ..
antra: nahi vo muje satya i m sorry ..
satya ko laga kal raat ke liye sorry kaha rahi hai..
satya: nahi antra i m sorry muje tume ..
raghu aya
satya say antra room main chalo
raat ko chat par antra ayi
antra'raghu vo kal raat muje hose nahi tha maine tumhe .
raghu say nahi antra main hi .hamre pyaar ne aag main pani thundne ki kosis ki barf main garmi pida karne ki kosish ki ye sanase ajj bhi use ahesas main dubi hai jab paheli baar isne mohabat ko mahesush kiya tha ye hoth ajj bhi ush labj ke pyaase hai ab pahely baar us ka naam liya tha ab do jindgi do dill ak jaan bani tab tu door rahke bhi paas mili..main kuch dino ke liye aji ke paas ja raha hu kal lori hai main lori main vahi jata hu...
antra raghu ke labjo ko mahesus kar rahi thi rone lahe the...
antra raghu ko dekhati rahi
raghu: ab ye pyaar na hoga pheer hamse ...kasm ki kasam hai hai kasam se hamko pyaar hai sirf tumse..
antra : ab ye pyaar na hoga pheer hamse
raghu : tu khuch bhi kah le tu mujse pyaar karti hai en khuch dino main mera kayal bhi mat lana to man lunga ..

raghu ja raha tha antra chat pe khadi thi use dekha rahi thi ...satya aya satya uska hath pakd ke le ja raha tha vo raghu ko dekha rahi thi ...

pricap
antra ko raghu dikha raha tha raghu aya antra ko kiss ki antra ki doori kholi

janam dekhalo mit gayi dooriya
main yaha hu yaha hu yaha hu yaha

raghu antra ko mahesus kar raha tha ...
raghu ne antra sari pahena raja tha use utha ke bed pe sulaya
tum bhula na sakogy main vo raaj hu
tum chupa na sakogy vo andaj hu
gunjta hu jo dill main to hera ho kyu
main tumhare hi dill ki to avaj hu ...

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