Hum Hai Do Dil Ek Jaan -Os last PArt @pg 17 - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
#61
thnk u richu di... ur ss made my day...
it's really awsome.. loving it to the core...
rantara was remembereing a it from past...
and raghu is always as usual..yera..😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62
Love the update Richu
Nice one
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63
nice update dear...jldi se rantara ko mila de bas ab toh yehi sahara h hmara
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64
Wow very good update
They feel good 2gether wid each other and don't know y

Our Raghu is a Limit ka gunda won't be able to bring Antara to Phattu, i hope?

Btw continue please update ASAP

Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
Very nice...
Ohh ab kia hoga!!
Update soon i cannot wait...
Thnx for the pm...
Update soon and pm me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
Superbbb update... raghu bhi na... 😆
Loved ua update...❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67
richu i have no words i loved it soo much yaar
pls cont asap
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
Part-5

Raghu took Antara to the Satya's Place. Raghu was not feeling gud as his heart was telling him some thing wrong is going to happen.
Antara on the other side thinking why that man need her. Why raghu played this love emotions drama. But whenever he is nearby to her why she feel secure that nothing can happen to her.why she still believe him as he will never ditch him as he is only kidnapping him.
Raghu holding Antara hand enters into the farm house. He come to the main hall. Satya looking all things from top floor. He was now coming down to hall by stairs. He was seeing Antara's Face but not able to see raghu's face as he seeing towards door.
Satya- To tumle aaye merei jaan ko mere pass
Raghu turn towards Satya and satya was shocked to see him. He want to speak but not able to speak, he want to move towards him and not able to take a single step ahead.
Raghu - Haan Saheb le aaya chalo ab mere paise mujhe do aur sambhalo apni jaan ko
Antara- Raghu nahi tum aise nahi kar sakte. Mein tum par biswas kiya aur tum phir se mere biswas ko aise nahi tod sakte.
Raghu- Phir se matlab kya , Maine to srif tumhe abhi dhoka diya
Antara- pata nahi lekin aise lagta hai ki tumne mujhe pehle bhi dhoka diya hai aur uski saaza hum dono ko mil chukka hai.
Satya- Dekho tum dono apne drama khatam karo aur tum paise le kar nikalo. Koiki raghu "Jo cheez mera hai who ab mere pass hai aur jo tumhara who ab tumhara pass hai"
Raghu feel that his heart stop for a while. He was stunned and thinking that is baat kar mere saath koi rista zaroor hai.
Raghu- thik hai sahib ab mein chalta ho.
Satya take a deep breath that now raghu will never come back in his life.
Antara in anger- raghu jo tum mere saath kar rahe ho accha nahi kar rahe ho dekna mein tumhe kabhi bhi maaf nahi karo gi.
Raghu turn towards her and says- PAta nahi Ms. Kaul lekin yaad rakna ki mujhe takleef jitna dogi tumhe bhi utna hi dard hoga. Koiki hamara dard ka hi rista hai
Satya in between- chalo tum dono ka safar yahin khatam hai .
Raghu- sahib hamara safar yahin par khatam nahi hota. Mujhe aur antara ko koi , kabhi bhi alag nahi kar sakta. Tu iske baap se paise lene ke liye iska kidnap kiya hai chupchap paise le aur ladki ko jaane de.
Satya (Laughing)- Paise kaise Paise, Mere pass itna hai kit um jaise 100 kutte pal sakta ho. Maine is ladki se shadi ke liye yahan le kar anne ko khaha
Raghu- agar shadi karni hai to uske baap se haath mang. Kidnaap koi karaya
Satya (in anger)- koi bhi cheez magne se nahi milta lekin haan jo cheez chayie usey panna chayie. Aur is baar mein antara ko kisi bhi haal mein kho ga nahi tere liye raghuuu
Raghu- Mere liye se matlab sahib apun is ladki ko janta bhi nahi phir mujhse koi darrr raha hai tu.
Satya- tujhse darta nahi bas tujhse nafrat karta ho.
Raghu- Mujhse nafrat lekin koi. Apun to pehle mile bhi nahi hai.
Satya suddenly realize that what blunder he was going to do. This raghu is not his raghu nath Naik then y he is arguing with him.
Satya- Dekho tumhe tumhare kaam ka paise mil gaya ab tum jao.
Raghu was leaving but suddenly he feel some one is hugging him from back.he turn and feel that antara was hugging hin tightly now more.
Antara- raghu tum mujhe chod kar nahii jaa sakte. Kaise tum mere saath aise kar sakte ho. Kaise tum mujhe is satyanash ke pass chod sakte ho. Raghu please mujhe baach lo. Mein phir se marne nahi chahti ho.
Raghu- shh... Ms. Kaul tumhe koi nahi mar raha hai yeh sahib tumse shadi karna chate hai. Bas aur kuch nahi.
Antar- Raghu tum apni Ms. Kaul ko kaise aise beech raste mein chod sakte ho. Raghu mein tumse pyar karti ho aur hamesha karti rahogi. Is janam men nahi har janam mein Antara srif raghu ki hai.
Now Satya Doesn't want to see more drama. He drag Antara from raghu and take her to the staircase.
Antara- Raghuuu pls mujhe baacha lo. Please mujhe mar chodo yaad karo tumne kaha tha "mere sochne se pehle mujhe tumhare zaroort ho ya na ho tum mere saath hamesha doge. Please raghu apna wada nibhao.
Raghu was leaving the room and listen this word from Antara. He was feeling restless. Maine usne kab yeh sab wada kiya lekin mujhe aise koi lag raha hai ki mein yeh wada nibhao Mein Ms. Kaul ko aise nahi chod sakta.

Raghu was sleeping but suddenly he feel that he is running fast some one is following him. He was running with one girl. He was holding the hand of that girl very tightly. Suddenly that girl fall and Raghu scream Antaraaa and saw antara lying in blood. He take antara on her lap and clear hair from his face and says Antara tum nahi mere saath nahi chod sakti .
Antara- Raghu hum is jaanam mein nahi mil sake to kya hum agle janam mein milege and she die in his arma.
Raghu wake up by screaming Antara tum mujhe chod kar nahi jaa Sakti
He was so restless . He was not able to understand that it was same dream he was seeing fron=m childhood or he dreamt today only.
He took his mobile and called Akram Seth
Raghu- Bhai yeh Sahib Antara ke saath Shadi KAhan KAr raha hai
Akram- raghu tune jo kal wahan kiya hai sab apun ko malum hai tu bhool jaa us ladki ko
Raghu- ANhi bhool Sakta apun , Akram Bhai mujhe aise lagta hai ki us ladki se apun ka peechle jaanam ka koi rista hai. Yaad hai apko apun ek sapna ke bare mein tere se boleta tha.Ajj apun ne us Ladki ka cherha Dekha bhai aur who koi aur nahi MS. Kaul thi.
Akram- Raghu apun ko kuch samaj mein nahi atta lekin thik hai tu apna baacha hai jaa us ladki ko wapas le aa apun aur baki ladka tere saath hai. Jaa "NAIK BASTI " Jaa
Raghu- NAik BAsti mein aa rahu ho Raghu aa raha hai

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Posted: 11 years ago
#69
wow richu gr8 one...
rantara having her memory back slowly...
raghu going to naik basti...
can't wait for next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#70
awesome update!!!😊
raghu to sachmein tubelight hi hai...hamesha der hojati hai is😆
nw he will go to naikwadi and will come to know evrything 😛
thanks fr pm😊

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