Hum Hai Do Dil Ek Jaan -Os last PArt @pg 17

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Part 1

Antara neche aao . college jaane ka time ho gaya hai.
Antara 18 yrs old girl sitting near dressing table and combing her straight silky hair. She says.

Antara- mummy mein aa rahi ho pls ask driver to take out the car
Mummy- antara driver is has gone with your papa . so you have to drive your car.
Antara- ok mummy.
Antara come down and hug her mummy and says bye to her.

Antara was driving the car and enjoying the music. She stopped the car as red light was there. She was continuing enjoying the music suddenly there was bump sound and she cover her face by her one hand as some one has fallen in her car bonnet and all the glass of front of car broken.
Her eyes as only seen. She saw one man was there in her car bonnet and he was also seeing her only. Slowly slowly she take her hand away from her face. That man was memorized with her beauty. Antara was scared very badly. That time some of the guys come and salute him and says. Raghu sir r u ok. Kya hua sir who admi hamare haath se nikal gaya
Raghu- haan actually mere leg slip hua is car ke uppar part mein jaane ke badle mein boonet par slip kiya aur mein slip ho gaya.

Antara was still in shocked. Raghu come and open the door of the car. He given his hand to antara to come out. Antara slowly given her hand to him but they both felt one spark and they both take away there hand back suddenly.

Antara come out the car .
Raghu- mam I am sry because of me your car has been damage no issue you come and sit in my jeep . my colleague will repair it and he will drop the car in your home.

Antara was still in shocked. Raghu notice this.
Raghu- Mam ok relax I introduce my self. I am C.I.D officer Rghu NAth
You are
Antara- antara ...
Raghu- MS. Kaul
Antara again in surprise. We met 1st time how you know my surname.
Raghu- I also don't know .tumhara naam sunte hi mere muh se nikal gaya no issuechalo.

They both were in raghu jeep.
Raghu- where I drop you
Antara- ya I was going to my college. Dayanand music college
Raghu- so you learn music
Antara - yes sir
Raghu- oh pls call me raghu ia m not so old kit um mujhe sir bolo I am only 20 urs old
Antara= 20 yrs and C.I.D officer?
Raghu- ya actually there is long story kisi aur din sunayo ga
Antara- r u sure ki aap mujhe kisi aur din sunayege. Koi ki hum dobara koi milege
Raghu- pata nahi MS. KAul lekin tumse milne ke baad lagata mein tumhe bahut pehel se janta ho
Antara- raghu line marna ka accha tarika hai don't forget mere paap yahan ke bahut bade builder hai. Tumhari naukari bhi jaa sakti ha as he know many minister here
Raghu- Ms. AKul yeh raghu nath apni marzi ka mallik hai. Yeh sab line marna meri list mein nahiaata
Antar- haan pata hai kit um limit ke gunde ho
Raghu- kya bola tumne
Antara- (suprising) pata nahi apne aap nikal gaya.
After this they both sit quietly. They reached the college.

Antara step down and thanks him for dropping the college and she left. Raghu see her continuously going suddenly he noticed that she has left her purse in jeep only. He take that purse and go back behind her.
Raghu come near to her and says MS kaul your purse.
Antara take that purse from him and start moving towards her class suddenly her sandeel broken and she was about to fall but suddenly she feel one hand around her wrist and she see it was non other raghu.
They both stay like that and see each other (MAhi Moment)
Suddenly raghu come out of sense and make her to stand.
RAghu- MS. Kaul tune aaj bhi apne saandel thik se pasand nahi karna aata. Dekh aaj phir se gir jati agar mein nahi pakrata.
Antara- accha tumhe kya lagta hai raghu mujhe chalne nahi aata. Apne suggestion apne pass rakho
Raghu- DEkh MS. KAul and he point finger to her
Antara- tum dekho raghu and she also pointed finger to him
Suddenly they both release what they are doing.
Antara- sry lekin pata nahi mujhe aise laga jaise hamne yeh moment pehle jiya hai
Raghu- mujhe bhi aise laga ki maine tumhe pehle bhi girne se baachaya hai.
They both say bye to each other and went to their direction.

Guys pls say how you like my new story. If you like then only I will continue.

pArt 2 @pg 4
Part 3- Pg 7
Part-4 @pg 9
Part 5@pg 11
Part 6@pg 13
lpart 7@pg15
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honeybees22 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i dont like it ... I LOVE IT OMG SO MUCH TASAHN PLS CONT ASAP
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Wow . I liked too much . Continue . 😊
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Awesome... Fab... do continue
waiting...waiting... yeh toh reincarnation lagta hai...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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M'ame ji Wow what beginning
OMG, It's me but i saw back some best Rantaras moments i'm wordless :
"She saw one man was there in her car bonnet and he was also seeing her only"; " limit ke gunde"; "Raghu come near to her and says MS kaul your purse"; "suddenly her sandeel broken and she was about to fall but suddenly she feel one hand around her wrist and she see it was non other raghu." Ayeee
Plze continue and update as soon as possible
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Posted: 11 years ago
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richu..lovely yr😳 first meet mein itna kuch😉..yr mujhe aisa lag raha hai ki tum reincarnation wale concept ko follow kr rahi ho...kyun hai na😆 yr raghunath CID officer😎 oyehoye..kya baat hai😆...antu is colege going girl..nice..😛
thanks😊
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Wo wooowww!!!
Just luved it!!!
Plzzz do continue ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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what a start richu i loved it, jaldi update karna
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hayeee so sweet! yaar is this reincarnation?? It is awesome update soon!
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Like it mad i love it..
Continue pata nae kab mile yeh sab wapis..
Limit ka gunda miscall.. Sandal pasand..Raghu ki entry..!! Fab yaar conti soon..

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