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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks for the PM
Very nice update😉
Continue ASAP
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part-3

Antara - raghu tumne kya kaha . abhi tumne kya kiya mujhe propose
Raghu- who antara mein...
Antara- ye goat jaise mein mein koi kar rahe ho. Chalo agar propose kiye ho to mein bhi agey ka response de do

She hole his hand take her to the hall of college where her friends were sitting and practicing some music
Antara- hello all of you let me introduce Mr raghu Nath
Friend 1- hello, waise some one special antara
Antara- yes is bande se mein kal mili aur aaj usne mujhe propose bhi kar diya
Friend 2 - what... arrey yaar eh to superfast nikala
Antara- haan isne mujhse pyar kiya hai tu mere pasand ko bhi apnana parega
Raghu- antara yeh kya tamasha hai
Antara- tamsha nahi tumhe mein apne aap se milwa rahi ho . mein kaise ho kya meri pasand hai aur kya meri na pasand hai. Tumhe mere bare mein janane ki iccha nahi
Raghu- who hum akele mein bhi kar sakte hai baatein
Friend 1- koi mr. antara ko pasand karte ho uski friend ko nahi
Friend 2- aarey aise nahi hota hai chaloaao tumhe mein tumhari antara se milwati ho
Raghu follow her and come to the stage
Friend 2- yeh guitar hai isis jab antara bajati hai to bas samjho tum heaven mein punch jaoge
Yeh piono hai issey antara jab bajati hai to lagta hai saat sur apne aap uske haato se bajne ke liye ready hai.jab antara gati hia tu khud saraswati bhagwan lagta hai gaa rahi hai
Friend1- antara ka sapna hai ki uska jeevan saath bhi is tarah gaana ke liye jeeta ho. Lekin tum kya isme se kuch bhi baja sakte ho . chodo kyat um is mouth organ ko bhi baja sakte ho and she given MO to raghu.

All were supposed to leave hall but suddenly they listen one tune.
Raghu was playing tune of Mera mahi tu in MO.(sry I don't have link of MO tune pls just imagine)
Antara was stunned . she was feeling that her all stress in her mind is vanishing. She was lost in that tune.
Suddenly she heard clapped sound and come to her sense.

Friend 1- awesome yeh dhun to bahut hi pyare hai. Kahan se sikha yeh dhun
Antara- yeh to dhun who dhun hi jo mein bacpan se apne sapne mein sunti ho.
Friend 2- kya arrey haan yaad aaya tum to yeh dhun apni guitar mein bhi bajane ki khosoh kit hi lekin tum baja nahi paayi thi
Antara- raghu tumne yeh dhun kahan se suna
Raghu- pata nahi mujhe to koi instrument bajane bhi nahi aata. Lekin is MO ko haath mein aate hi apne aap mein yeh dhun bajane laga.
And raghu left the hall
Antara- raghu kuch to hamre beech mein rista hai lekin kya. Koi tum mujhe apne se lagte ho...

Raghu s place
Raghu was lying in his bed. He was restless . kabhi ek taraf ho raha tha phir kabhi dusri taraf phir bhi uski beechani kaam nahi ho rahi thi.
Raghu in his mind- yeh mujhe kya hi raha hai. Koimein itna beechain ho us dhun ko bajane ke baad. Yeh mujhe kya ho raha hai. He close his eyes .suddenly he saw one gun pointed to one girl and he was shouting nahi mai nahi... And suddenly gun fired and he see one girl felt down and trying to say some thing ..
He saw he run to that girl and take that girl on his lap. He remove her hair from his face and he was shocked to see antara .
He open his eyes and said. Yeh kya jis ladki ko goli lagte hue mein roz dekhta ho who antara hai. Kaise ho sakti hai mere sapne mein . yeh sapna to mein bacpan se daily dekta ho. Phir aaj koi mujhe antara dekhi us ladki mein. Kahin antara ko kuch hone wale to nahi. Hey bappa kya kar rahe ho mere saath jo hai who hakikat to mujhe bata do.
Suddenly his mobile rang . He pick up the phone.
Man- raghu kab tak antara ko fr=arm house le kar aaoge
Raghu- bhai kal sham tak ladki farm house pounch jayi gi and he cut the phone.

Raghu tumhe apna yeh sapna bhool kar us ladki ke kaise kal farm house le jao ge yeh socho.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
Interesting . Loved it .Thank you . 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
its too good richu... i hope the cvs would have shown something like this instead of these new leads...forget it..
ONE REQUEST.. richu try to complete ur story in 2 weeks becos once rantara die.. i wont come to this forum even to read OS/SS/FF becos any activity will count for the new comers trp which i dont want...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
lovely update richu
pls continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
Smits kta faiyda cvs ne kasam khayi th hme aur rantara ko barbad krbe ki
So kr diya
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
very nice update richu😃...i liked that part most when raghu plays that tune on mouthorgan😳 ..very lovely update😛.thanks😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
wow richu... MO scene... u made me so happy..
it's beautiful re..👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
Hey Richu
Love the update
Very beautiful
Thanks for the PM
Take care

Geet
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
Wow, what update plze continue
Thanks fr the Pm

Good work like always👏

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