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Posted: 11 years ago
#81
Very nice update! 😊
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PART-6

Raghu enter the "Naik Basti". He can sense the same smell of air. He was looking each and every thing very seriously. He snese that he know the each and every corner of the Basti. He was moving slowly slowly on the road. Suddenly one old drunken man get collide with him.

Raghu- Baba zara dekh kar chalo
Drunken man get up slowly slowly and see towards raghu and he was surprised to see him..
Drunken Man- raghu tum aa gaya mere baache Tum aagaye. Jahan chale gaye the Bolo...aise jate hai kya hum log ko chod kar...arrey basti walo dekho apna raghu aa gaya...
Raghu was very much in shocked. What the hell yeh Buddha mujhe jante hai .. yeh to aise basti walo ko bula raha hai ki jaise yeh basti meri hai..lekin sach much aise kyo lag raha ki mein is basti ko jante hai..

Raghu was standing and whole basti people were surrounding him... one by one any one come and touch him, then hug him and cry in front of him that why he left them... raghu was not knowing that what happening but he can feel that each person is his own.
Suddenly one jeep stop and and one man come out from the jeep. All basti People side themselves. Raghu was seeing all this and he was eagerly to know who is that man. The way that man was coming near to him he feel that he know the men very properly. He can feel that he is part of him. But who is he. He close his eyes to remember but he cannot see the vision proplerly. But he see the same man in bubbly type. He can see that he is playing with him cricket, hugging him, even once he has slapped him. But he cannot see the image properly .Suddenly he feel that some one is touching his face. He open his eyes and see that man in front of him. He was having tear in his eyes. He was touching his face, eyes nose, han and saying only one thing bhai,,,bhai tum...bhai...

Raghu- Kya mein tumhe zanta ho.
Man- haan bhai ,kya bhai tum mujhe nahi jante,, hum bacpan se saath khele kude , arrey hamne apne zindagi ke sab cheez saath iya, arrey tu bhool gaya bhai mujhe ...mein tere Mach Mach
Raghu- MAchmach...(something strike in his mind) again he close his eyes and now he can see same vision properly. He can see he is playing criket with him. He can see he is doing fun with him even he can see he has slap him once . he can see they both had drunk drink . even he can see that he is asking him to kill him and saying maine tere behen ke papa ko maara phir bhai hone ka farz nibha..mujhe maar...
Suddenly raghu open his eyes...
Raghu- MM mujhe nahi pata mein kaun ho lekin mein tumhe zanta ho mujhe aise lag raha hai and he said all thing whatever he see
MM- haan bhai job hi tumne dekha sab sach hai. Humne sab samay saath ithaya hai lekin maine hi tumhe or Antara ke body ko zalaya tha phir tum yahan...
Raghu- kya kaha mere aur antara ke body ko... iska matlab tum antara ko zante ho...kya tumne antara ko dekha h who kisi satya ke sath yahan is basti mein aayi hai...kyat um mujhe antara ke pass le chalo ge bolo Machmach mujhe le kar chalo na meri MS. Kaul ke pass.
MM- kya bola tumn Ms. Kaul...arrey yahi to tum s yedi ko bolate the...
Raghu- kya bola tumne kya mein antara ko janta ho dekho mujhe nahii pata mein antara ko kaise zanta ho lekin...(he marrate all story how he been given money to bring antara to satya but how he feel for antara and all his dream everything he narrate him)
MM- bhai mein samajh gaya ,aaj tak maine suna tha ki saacha pyar kabhi nahi marta lekin aaj dekh liya tumhara aor antara ka pyar tum logo ko dobara janam lene ke liye majboor kiya aur us rakhshak satya ka vinash karne ke liye tum dono wapas aaye ho apne maut ka badla lene ke liye...
Raghu- dosara zanam...pyar...maut ka badla...mein kuch samjha nahi MM
MM- he narrates him how antara come to Mumbai after his father death and how they both were fighting wi each other then how they become friend after spending time in jungle. He also tell him about his confession of his love then how dya mai get agree and at the day of marriage hw antara came to know the truth of his father death that how raghu is involve in his father death...
Raghu- ruk bhai ab mujhe sab yaad aa gaya yehisa b to mein roz sapne mein dekta tha. He again close his eyes and start telling that how antara married satya to take revenge with him but his love for her never allow antara to hurt him..the day when they know the truth of Antara pregnancy satya ask antara to abort but how antara revolt it.then how they run away ... but their bad luck mai's people find them and how satya kill antara first when they were running . he shoot her. And then he shoot raghu...
MM_ haan bhai and he bought your dead body to basti and tied to pillar. Bhai I take out your both bodies and cremated.
Raghu- aur dekho bappa ka kaamal ki mujhe aur antara ko dobara milaya .lekin maine ussey phit us kamine ke haato usey soap diya lekin s bar satya ka satyanash hoga.
Whole basti- bhai hum tumhare saath hai. Is baar tumhe apne pyar ko wpas panna hoga .hum basti walo ko us zalim mai aur uske bte satya se hame azad karna hoga .eechle zanam humne tumhe paal a tha bte ab apna bte hone ka farz nibhao.
Raghu- haan ab unlogo ko apna karma ka faal bhugatna hoga...antara mein tumhe len aagya. Ms.kaul tumhara raghu aa gay

Sry guys is bar no antara and raghu scene as I have to bring raghu memory back.but next part it will be fullon Rantara scene.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
it was amazing!😛
raghu came to know all truth..fantastic..👏
thanks to mm as always a story teller of each incident..😆
ab sattu gaya!😈
thanks fr pm🤣
Edited by Tsuchi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
cmnt tu kar gi who bhi res 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
awesome update yr..👍🏼.
glad that raghu remembered his past life...😳
now end is near for sattu n dm...😡😆
thanks for the pm 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
very nice update rachna
please continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
ok no probs ...waiting for the next part ...but this part was awesome ...u described the memory back very nicely ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
Great update but can u please please pleaseee updater faster, i need rantara moments 😳 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89
Richu dear u made my friday...
2 dhamal upates...
Ab raghu ko yaad ayai ga...
satya ki pitai hheh...
Loved it...
Thanx for the pm...
Update soon and pm me.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90
wow raghu got his memory back.. awsome... sattu ka ab khair nahin...👏

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