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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
Wow wow wow wow m luving dis update raghu to isme pahle se hi limitless gunda lag raha hai pata nae aage kya karega luved machmach apni behan ko rapchik item bana dia 😆 big hug from me 2 u 4 dis 😳 lovely update continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
my goddd Richu ...ye kya kar dala tune ...itna RUPCHIK update maine aajtak nahi pada ...super duper fantastic story ...hv read all the three parts in one go ...wonderfully written n the comedy is superb ...kya kya dialouge mara Raghu n MM ne ...n i loved how Raghu proposed her in train ...there were everywhere HAAAIII n WOW wala moments in your updates ...kon sa chodke konsa mention karun ...Raghu ka gunda wala image u hv drawn perfectly ... n u hv mentioned ANtara as GUNDI ...lo aaj to epi me bhi Raghu ne antu ko GUNDI I L U kah diya ...cvs ne tumhara os pada hoga ...n i bet agar ddej me yeh sab kuch hota as ur story ...to aur bhi dhamal mach jata ...
i hv never ever written such a looong looong review for any OS ...this was hilarious n mind boggling man ... hats off to you
n yesss i love you ...love ur writeups ...n u r extreamly talented ...👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 never ever stop writing ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: pampz

my goddd Richu ...ye kya kar dala tune ...itna RUPCHIK update maine aajtak nahi pada ...super duper fantastic story ...hv read all the three parts in one go ...wonderfully written n the comedy is superb ...kya kya dialouge mara Raghu n MM ne ...n i loved how Raghu proposed her in train ...there were everywhere HAAAIII n WOW wala moments in your updates ...kon sa chodke konsa mention karun ...Raghu ka gunda wala image u hv drawn perfectly ... n u hv mentioned ANtara as GUNDI ...lo aaj to epi me bhi Raghu ne antu ko GUNDI I L U kah diya ...cvs ne tumhara os pada hoga ...n i bet agar ddej me yeh sab kuch hota as ur story ...to aur bhi dhamal mach jata ...

i hv never ever written such a looong looong review for any OS ...this was hilarious n mind boggling man ... hats off to you
n yesss i love you ...love ur writeups ...n u r extreamly talented ...👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 never ever stop writing ...

thanks dear I really love ur review. its means a lot for me.
I hope my others OS like by you and in future also I try to entertain all you like this
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
omg loved it yaar wish this really happend in the show
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
Part 4 Raghu come to mami house . mami was very scared that she know Raghu is very angry from inside might nt showing from ouside.
Raghu- aunty Ms. kaul kahan hai
mami- mujhe nahi pata koi ki who abhi tak ghar nahi aayi hai
Raghu- kya arrey woh kal ki aayi akele is Mumbai sehar mein kahan chali gayi. aap bhi na mami uske peeche jaate
mami- mein did ko akele kahan chod kar jati. uske maam gaye hai uske peeche
suddenly Raghu's mobile rang
Raghu- kon hai be bol
unknown person- bolne ke liye nahi batane ke liye call kiya hai
Raghu- kya batana hai aur tu hai kon be
UP- teri Ms. kaul hamare pass hai . bada aaj dindhora peet raha tha na apne pyar ka to aa jaa apni pyar ko baacha le nahi to shetty tere ms. kaul ke saath kya kya kar sakta hai tu janta hai na
Raghu- agar ek baap ki aulad hai tu usko haath laga kar dikha. ms. kaul ke ek takleef tum log ki 100 takleef ki barabar hoga
mami- kya hua Raghu antara kahan hai
Raghu- aunty chinta na karo antara ko sahi salamat mein le kar aaoga
at shetty place
Raghu come and open the door and start shouting antara
shetty- aao Raghu tumhara intezaar tha
Raghu- antara kahan hai
Raghu show the dirction where antara was tie in chair and her mouth was closed with hankacheif. her eyes was full of tears
Raghu cant stand for long and he started fighting. one by one all shetty guys get nailed down by Raghu
suddenly shetty take out bandok and point to antara
Raghu within a sec fuse the tubelight and run away with antara . when shetty guys arrange light in room they saw no Raghu and antara in room . they go behind them
Raghu and antara was running suddenly saw one garge and they hide themselves their
Raghu- MS. kaul tu chup chap yahan baith mein bahar dekh kar aata ho
antara- aana jaroor, mujhe chod kar mat jaana and she was holding his palm very tightly
Raghu come near to antara and kiss her forehead and saya mein tujhe chod kar kahin nahi jao ga and left the room to see the situation ouside
antara was surprised that Raghu kiss her
Raghu come back and says aaj raat hame yahan par gujarna padega. shetty ke admi log bahar hi hai
antara- kya raat tumhare saath nahi yeh nahi ho sakta
Raghu- thik hai shetty ke admi ko bolta hai apun woh tere saath raat gujar lega
antara- dekho tum kya bol rahe ho
Raghu- kya hai ki tumhe kisi ek ke saath to gujarna hoga ya to mere saath ya uske saath . ab soch kar batao
antara- dekho Raghu
Raghu- kya dekho yeh to bata. kya kya dekaye gi bata de
antara- chi tum kitne gande ho aur aur tumne mujhe kiss koi kiya
Raghu come close and says- uske kiss karna kehte hai mere ko lagta hai uske santawana kehte hai. tera darr khatam kar raha tha samjhi koi niyat mein khot nahi
antara- dekho filmi dialogue bol kar apni galti chupa nahi sakte tumne mujhe kiss kiya
Raghu- filmi dialogue hmm. mein English movie dekta ho aur usme kiss kaise karte hai batao kya
antara- dur hatoo mujhse , mere pass mat aana dekho tum mere saath aise nahi kar sakta and she atarted crying badly
Raghu- shhh MS. kaul mein Mazak kar raha tha. dekh mein kuch nahi karo ga. mein u s kiss ke liye sry bolta ho pls chup ho jao
but antara was crying badly
Raghu suddenly come close to her and shut her mouth by hand and says- hey MS. kaul chup tujhe mein aise waise ldka lagta hoon, tu kya sochti hai mere tere is jism se pyar karta ho nahi mein tujhse pyar karta ho aur mere pyar tere is jism ka mohtaz nahi hai. manta ho mein gunda ho lekin limit ka gunda ho
antara start beating his chest and then hug him and says phir kabhi aisi Mazak mat karna , mein darr gayi thi
Raghu- dekh ms. kaul tune gala lagaya hai mujhe maine nahi phir mujhe mat galat samjhana
antara come back from him and sit in one corner. Raghu sit just next to him and they started talking. they share many things like , dislike, about future etc.
Raghu in his mind when he saw antara is sleeping- aaj apun se tune dosti ka shuraraat to ki accha laga ab dhere dhere pyar bhi karegi
Precap- antara leaving the basti
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
Hmmm kya kahun ab mein...
HUH? precap- ye kya?? abhi to dosti huyi ab jaa rahi hai??

soo sweet he kissed her and then she hugged him! awww
Edited by alishamerchant - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
nice update
I really loved it
made my day
happy writting
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Raghu suddenly come close to her and shut her mouth by hand and says- hey MS. kaul chup tujhe mein aise waise ldka lagta hoon, tu kya sochti hai mere tere is jism se pyar karta ho nahi mein tujhse pyar karta ho aur mere pyar tere is jism ka mohtaz nahi hai. manta ho mein gunda ho lekin limit ka gunda ho
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richu awsome lines yaar...just took away my breath...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
awww so sweet luved it garage scene hmmm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
Great update.. Haw shetty dug his own grave by kidnapping her 😆 .. Aila kiss and hug .. Awww dosti bhi chalu.. But why is she leaving? 😲 .. Koi Raghu ko bulaooo!!

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