chalte chalte- last part@pg 13 OS

Sushmitha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

Mujhe yeh lines bahut pasand aaya...

antara don't believe two days before he don't want to talk to Raghu and now she is MRs. Raghu nath naik. she was thinking . kaise chalte chalte ek anjaan inshaan ajj achank se uska sab kuch hogaya. she was thinking koi yeh is kahini ka hissa hai . kya jo kuch bhi hua uske saath sab acche ke liye hua ya phir ...

Yu hav written it so well... Luved it...❤️

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pampz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#102

kya ending tha ...man khush aur shant ho gaya ...kash hamare khud ke zindegime bhi aisehi good things jaldi jaldi ho jaye ...ur story has such a positive vibe that makes one instantly happy ...aisi Rantara story aur likho ...more n more ... to make us happy n am sure u too becme happy writting this...😃

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Geeta singh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#103

Really loved it

beautiful written

u r too good yaar

do write more stories

Thanks for the PM

Take care

Geet

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Nisha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#104

At basti

antara was surprised that whole basti was decorated. Few hours before all that basti wale was passing comment onher and now they only doing haldi rasam and other things. within 3 hrs all ritual done of marriage.

antara don't believe two days before he don't want to talk to Raghu and now she is MRs. Raghu nath naik. she was thinking . kaise chalte chalte ek anjaan inshaan ajj achank se uska sab kuch hogaya. she was thinking koi yeh is kahini ka hissa hai . kya jo kuch bhi hua uske saath sab acche ke liye hua ya phir ...

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2 days before met in train... and today marriage

all rituals one day...

raghu n basti people are so fast...

richu nice os...

enjoyed reading it a lot

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sonal

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