chalte chalte- last part@pg 13 OS

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Train was about to leave from Srinagar station . antara , mama ,mami , geeta, noor appa, ishu all were set to their seat. suddenly antara stand and move towards the door
noor- antara kahan jaa rahi hai. dekh train khulne wali hai
antara- aapa mujhe mat rook mein ek baar is sehar ko phir se dekna chahti ho pata nahi phir kab dekh pao
mamai- noor jaane do , uska maan halka ho jaye ga
noor an d appa exchange their yes note by eyes
antara was at door and train slowly slowly leaving th platform and suddenly one guy enter the door where antara was standing and he collide with antara.
guy- train nahi chuta Raghu nath naik nahi tu pura loocha ho jata
antara- hey tumhe dekta nahi hai kya mein yaah khadit hi aur tum...
Raghu- hey chup, bilkul chup kya mein doorte doorte dekhta ki tum yahan kadi ho waise tum yahan koi kadi ho khudne ke liye ms... waise tumhara naamm kya hai
antara- tumse matlab and she left from there and going towards her seat
Raghu- waise ms tum Kashmir ki ho ya gumne aayi thi
antara- tumse matlab
Raghu- waise tumhe iske ilabha bhi kuch aata hai bolne
antara- tum apne seat par jaa kar baith jao ya phir ticket nahi hai
Raghu- mein kya karo tum mere seat ke samne kadi ho
antara- dekho yeh seat mere hai tum kahin aur baitho
Raghu- hey miss sarkar ne train mein 6 seat banaye hai ek side par aur usme se mere ek seat hai. dekh mera ticket. jab se mili hai mirchi khayi jasie chilla rahi hai. chal baju hat mere ko baithne hai seat par
noor- ajja antara tu mere bagal baith ja
Raghu- hey chota master jara sarak mere ko baithna hai.
ishaan- mein kya khirki ke bagal baith sakta ho kya. mujhe pata hai neeche wali seat apki hai
Raghu- baith ja kya faraq parta hai koi kahin baithe train to Mumbai jaye ge
ishaan- dekha didi bh kitne accha hai ab tum us khirki par baith jao
Raghu- hey chota master teri did aisi hai ya phir hansti bhi hai
ishaan- nahi didi to bahut masti karti hai lekin kya kare jab se papa kahin chale gaye hai didi hansti hi nahi. papa ki ladli thi na
Raghu- kaha gaya tera papa
ishaan- pata nahi us din ghar mein bomb phata, papa ko dr ke pass le gaye, phir pata nahi didi se dr ne kya kaha ki didi rone lagi . phir mujhse aur mummy se kaha ki papa iilaz karne bahar chale gaye hai. isliye hum mama mami ke saath Mumbai jaa rahe hai. arrey mama mami kahan gaye. mein dekh kar aata ho bh
Raghu see antara. her face was very innocent with eyes full of tears which she want to hide.
Raghu see Mrs geeta . he found something wired about her. but his eyes always stick on antara whenever he see here and there
ishu- bh dekho yeh mere mama mami hai
govind- Raghu tum yahan par
Raghu- govind ji aap yahan mein to yahan gumne aya tha lekin aap log accha is chote master ke tum log mama mami hai
saroj- haan Raghu
geeta- mujhe neend aa rahi hai mujhe sona hai
ishu- haan muhe bhi,
noor- chalo mein seat mein bed sheet bicha deti ho
ishu tum govind bhia ke saath so jana uppar, mein bhi upaar so jao gi is side, saroj bhabhi aap beech mein so jaan aur bhabhi aap neeche so jaan aur antara tum is side neeche so jana
Raghu- to tumhara naam antara hai.
antara give him very angry luk
all went to sleep their seat
Raghu- mein yeh seat utta do tumhe bhi sona hoga
antara- ab mujhe neend nahi aati tumhe sona hai to utta do nahi to mein kuch der baithna chahti ho
Raghu- haan aa baith jaa neend to apun ko bhi nahiaati chalo gappe marte hai
antara- kya tum chup chap nahi baith sakte. hum baat karege to sab ki neend kharab ho jayi gi
Raghu- aise kya , thik hai chal chup baith jata ho waise tere pura namm kya hai
antara- antara kaul, waise koi
Raghu- kya hai na maine socha hai ki mein pura naam srif apni biwi ka loga nahi to sabko puchale se pukaro ga
antara- kya kis se pukaro ge
Raghu- puchale jo terenaam ke peeche laga hai
antara- tum mujhe bhulaye ge koi
Raghu- ab kya hai ki tum meri basti mein rahogi to hum milte rahege hai na
antara- tum to peeche par gaye ho
Raghu- peeche areey aey MS. kaul mere bare mein ulta seedha mat bol apun ka gussa aa jaoga. tu kya sochti hai apun tere ko line maar raha ho
antara- pls chup ho jao nahi to mein ...
Raghu- mein kya chal chup ho jata ho
antara was seeing outside the window. wind was touching her face and making her hair tangled which she was trying to untangled in pause of some time.
Raghu was thinking himself
she want to pretend herself very strict par yeh ahi nahi aisi. something is there jo usko pareshan kar raha hai. pata nahi koi mein usko yes halat mein nahi dekh paa raha ho. he see each and every member of family. sabke face par ek udasi thi lekin kya pata nahi.
Raghu see antara again she was trying herself to control her need par this time she was falling towards the seat and raghu exact on time keep his shoulder towards her head. now he can see antara was sleeping but tear was on her eyes. he wipe her tear by finger.he wan tto wake up her to send her to seat to have proper sleep but he know that after so many days she is sleeping and he don't want disturb her .
next part will be updated tom
precap - train jouney and reaching Mumbai
Part 2 @ pg 3
part 3 @pg 6
paet 4@pg 8
part- 5 @ pg 10
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Great start.. Interesting concept.. They met on the train.. Argued already.. Hope they don't argue in basti now 😆 .. Continue soon 😃
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so nice richu!! tum kitna achcha likhti ho... oh gosh!! i really enjoy every time ur every os/ss ...thanks and update soon😊
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rally nice start
waiting to read more
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very nice train journey nice thought update soon :) thankx fr the pm par mje ss jada pasnd hai tmhara :p
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PLEASE PM ME THE NEXT PARTS
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BTW VERY GD START KEEP UPDATING 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey grt start keep writing.. update soon..:)
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thank you aal of u for liking my OS/FF
I espicallt thanks ria and nichus.
they help mem lot for this os
given idea for os and title.
thanks both of you
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Originally posted by: ifians

wow awsome first chapter..👏

thanks ria I thought u will nt like it as it was actually introduction of all character.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: richurachna

thanks ria I thought u will nt like it as it was actually introduction of all character.

no yaar...bahut acha hain...infact mujhe bahut pasand aya concept..👏

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