rantara ff-sajda tere pyar mein[note at page 150] - Page 99

Originally posted by: -Raj-

u update so regularly!!
happy!

loved the precap!!

and chapter was fab!

nicely penned.

thanks for the pm.

Originally posted by: rima4ever

amazing update

Originally posted by: nazi786

Awesome update
Thank u for the pm

Originally posted by: PurpleSunset

well what can i say...hats off...such a brilliant update👏

now the story is getting pretty much exciting n i'm loving ittt😆😆😆

you are just posting killer updates now a days😉

its thrilling...its gripping...its mindblowing👏

btw where is Antara??????😆

n when r u giving us their first kiss???😆

i'm waiting

pls do continue soon

loads of love...muahhh😳😳😳

Originally posted by: ankusanu

Yar bechara raghu...feeling guilty aftr ayans call

Antu is also in love nw yipee ...😉 obviously yar..

Aur aman kamina kahi ka..😡

Hope jldi se misunderstanding doir ho jaye rantara ki..

N reception m mast rantara scene mile😳

Ria kisne kaha k update long th..

Plz itna chota update nh chalega😆

I want a longer one yaar

Anyways update soon n thanks

👏

Originally posted by: hayakhan5

Yaar jutaas nahin...
What a fascinating update...
Antara found the treasure...
Raghu misunderstanding vanished...
Ayan ne aik kaam toh acha kia!!
Loved it...
Amazing...
Wonderful...
Thanx for the pm...
Update soon and pm me...

Originally posted by: harshita1996

Hey Ria amazing update..

Antara's actions r also saying d same she is in love..

Bt she wont realise it soon..Siddiqui he is upto something..:)

Aman this guy i would kill him..:/

Raghu is shocked.. Nw bas jaldi se Antara ko manale..bs

Thanks fr pm..:) keep writing..

Update soon..:)

Nd thank u Ria ur updating regularly..:)

Originally posted by: riddzykhanmalik

You are simply great ria...you are a fabulous writer I'll see ever in this forum...I really love you dear...awesome update...

Raghu raghu hosh me aao...dekho tumhari antara kitni dukhi hai...thank god ayaan is calling usse maza aa raha hai or yaha raghu ki jaan jaa rahi hai...ohhh poor antara I can't see her like that...Please dilo ko mila de ab to N O W now now...

Originally posted by: ruhakhan

ok so aman has doubts dat she is frm kaul family
bt antara confused him with her statements
raghu got to know abt ayaan nd rachna nd nw he is on mission to apologise to antara
nd dat triangle is it some place
do update soon

Originally posted by: richurachna

wow lovely update again . and don't be sry as I m happy atleast u remembered both of us while writing rantara. it make me feel proud...that our love story come in ur mind while rantara love story...

BTW uff hope Raghu meet antu and make her happy...

and please make my reception party grand with dance sequence of rantara

Originally posted by: Smaggy

nice update... u described so intense feeling of antara very well...👏 👏

raghu ko ayan ka sach pata gya...😉 bach gya bechara ayan😆 😆

thanks for pm and keep writing..😊

Chapter 36

"kahan ja rahe ho?" the guard at the front gate of siddiqui mansion stopped raghu showing his ak47. "oye chunnu!! Tere ko zoya bhabi ne bataya nai kya ki apun ko andar jane ka ticket mill gaya hain?! ab ye banduk hata aur mere ko jane de..." raghu said with utterly irritated face. He was hurrying to meet antara but again that guard was being obstacle in his way. "mera naam chunnu nahi jagdish hain..." the guard said in a bit loud voice. "arey job hi ho yaar... dekh mere ko jaldi hain... hata ye bandook..." raghu pushed the rifle and was about to go inside but that jagdish was also tough guy. "haan mujhe pata hain ki zoya madam ne tumhe andar jane ki permission de di hain par andar jane se pehele tumhari tallasi leni paregi..." he informed. "eee apun ke pass ye sab tallasi wallasi ka taime naiii hain. aur tere ko kya lagta hain ki mere pet mein aisa itna bara bomb lagaya huya hain jo andar jate hi phut jayega,... S**a subha se pet mein ek piyali chai bhi nahi pari hain... waisey hibomb ki tarah foot raha hain aur tu kaheta hain..." raghu continued his blabber. "wo tum jo bhi kaho main bina tallasi liye tumhe andar jane nahi de sakta..." jagdish said with that steal voice. "arey tu bhi na..." raghu said making a face. their blabber would continue further but to god's grace zoya came outside. She was going to market to buy some accessories. At first she was amused to find raghu there and then automatically started to laugh silently seeing jagdish and raghu's verbal fight. "arey raghu bhaijaan, good morning. Aap aaj bhi yahan?!" zoya asked interrupting their verbal fight. "arey bhabiji... Wo misscal andar hain kya?!!" raghu asked. "misscal?!!" zoya was confused. "arey mera matlab ki wo..." Raghu couldn't finish his sentence as zoya started. "antara right?!" she said with a smile. "haan wohich..." raghu scratched his head in a bit ashamed face. "bhaijaan!! Antara to aaj jaldi nikal gayi yahan se... wo zara ka school picnic tha... kyun wo abhi ghar nahi pauchi?!" zoya asked. raghu couldn't give a single answer. He felt his worry rising. "wo apun... Bhabi wo kab nikli yahan se?!" raghu asked. "yahin kahi aat ya sare aat baje nikli hogi..." zoya said. "KYA???!" he felt the ground slipping under his feet. He looked at his watch. It was almost 11:00 pm and she left siddiqui mansion almost 3 hours ago. Still she didn't reach home?! He quickly took out his mobile to call her. but her phone was out of network range. Raghu kicked his feet impatiently and ran his fingers through his hairs in frustration. He felt the feeling of fear coming back to him. he knew how much reckless she could be at a time and she was also mad for his harsh words to her. He moved towards the guard. "ee chunnu..." he called. "jagdish..." He answered roughly. "abey idhar apun ki watt lag rahi hain aur tere ko tere naam ki pari hain..." raghu said in irritating voice. "tune antara ko dekha tha?! Kidhar gayi hain wo?" he asked. "nahi dekha..." he answered back harshly. Raghu grabbed his collar startling him. "arey bhai ye kya hain?!!" jagdish asked in worried voice. Raghu looked at him with hard eyes and stated in a cold dangerous voice, "sach sach bata... misscal kidhar gaya hain... naii to tera aisa halat kar dunga ki na tu jagdish rahega... na chunnu...". The guard understood at last that what a tough thing he is. "arey kya zabardasti hain bhai..." he said in a bit shaky voice. "kaha na mujhe nahi pata antara ji kaha gayi hain... main to uss time yahan tha hi nahi..." jagdish said. "haan raghu bhaijaan ye sach kahe raha hain... aaj ye duty pe 9 baje aya tha... tabtak to antara chali gayi thi..." zoya said. Raghu left his collar with a jerk and looked towards zoya with bewildered eyes. Zoya could understand his worries. Without saying a single thing he just moved his feet towards the house in vague hope that she could be back at home. "God! What a man... almost broke my neck!!" jagdish said fixing his collar. "You don't know jagdish how it feels when you lose someone who is very important to you life. I just hope raghu bhaijaan finds antara soon." Zoya looked at raghu's fig going further.

"misscal?!!" raghu screamed loudly as he entered inside the kaul house. He almost rushed all the way to reach there. his scream reflected on the walls and came back to him making jokes on him. he was feeling mad. She was not in the house. Perhaps she was hiding at a corner and didn't want to face him. She was the crazy girl at last. And she was mad also after last night. So in vague hope he started to search each and every corner of house thoroughly. But soon she realized she couldn't be found there. whenever antara was near him, he could feel the presence but in that whole house he didn't felt any presence of her. The glint of fear became vivid in his eyes. Where the hell was she?! Did siddiqui and aman...?! No way... If it happened... He again tried her phone but no network coverage. Why?!! Where was the place?!! He was feeling like mad. In his whole life he never felt so much worried. Not even at the time when he came to know about antara's secret mission. That dream again flashed in his mind where Antara, wearing a white salwar, slowly approaching towards funeral pyre. His whole feature became numb in tremendous fear. NO WAY!!! "s**a!! idhar khare khare sochke kuch fayda nahin... soch raghunath soch... Kidhar ja sakti hain yeri?!!" raghu ran down his hand through his hairs in frustration. His brain was not working. At last he remembered that once ishan said that antara liked to visit in dal lake. On that day, he also found her in that daal lake. Almost like god granted wish, she bumped him all of a sudden. He didn't wait for long and again went outside to reach at that shore of daal lake.

Antara was really enjoying with zara and other kids in the school picnic. Her all gloominess seemed gone while playing with those cheerful kids. She remembered about her childhood days. Also the teachers of that school were known to her as she was also student of that same school. And she was quite popular and meritorious. The old teachers were so happy to get back their one of the favorite student. So she easily got mixed with all of them and also joined their hand in works. In the excitement she forgot about the time. She forgot that she was away from home for such a long hours. The weather became cloudy and strong wind started to flow. In anticipation of storm, they all got inside the resort room nearby which was hired from the school to perform their cocking and other stuffs. The girls became a bit sad as the approaching storm resisted their ground plays. But soon antara's song made them cheerful.

When raghu reached at the shore of daal lake he heard a big chaos nearby. A big crowd was gatherd at a spot and discussing very loudly. Raghu's heart thudded loudly in unknown fear. he moved inside the chaos and caught the first man he got. "eee suno bhai... kya chal raha hain idhar?!" he asked the man standing at his side. "mat pucchiye bhaijaan, ek jawan larki, sayad 20 ya 21 years ki hogi, daal lake ke pani mein kood ke suiside kar liya..." He informed. Raghu's breath got hitched. He felt like someone had suked his life from him. The young girl of 20-21 years, antara was also of that age!! "KYA?!!" he asked in low tone. His voice almost dried in his lips. He uttered that one word with so much force. "haan bhaijaan! Pata nahi kis ki bati thi... Kis dukh mein na jane khud ko maar diya..." his voice was resisted when the chaos became louder. "arey lagta hain uski body ko pani ke upar leke ayaa hain..." he said. Raghu looked at the chaos with blank eyes. And suddenly he started to run through them. "arey bhaijaan kidhar bhag rahe ho..." the man's voice floated in his ears but he cared a damn. Pushing so many peoples, even two police sergeants he approached at the center. With wide bewildered eyes he saw the female fig lied on the pavement. She was wearing a green salwar. His heart thudded loudly as he saw a same design salwar of antara which she wore yesterday. And also the height was quite same. Only her long hairs fallen on her face making an obstacle to her feature. Raghu stood there, lifeless and frozen like a statue. Was that the end of everything?! Suddenly someone bend down and removed the hairs from her face. raghu felt like his life came back to him. The girl was not antara. Though their height was same, but it was not her. with a sigh of relief he heard the voice of that man, "arey bhaijaan... aap yahan pauch gaye?! Aise jhamele mein mat fasiye... Chaliye yahan se..." he dragged raghu outside from the chaos and came out from the boundary of people. "ho kya gaya tha bhaijaan aap ko?! Aisa lag raha tha ki wo mari huyi larki aap ki koi lagti hain?!..." he asked with questioning eyes. "naiii... ye wo naiii hain!!..." raghu said in low voice, "par bilkul uske jaisi hain... kahin ghum ho gayi hain... pata naii kidhar... kab se dhundre la hain apun ussey..." his voice chocked. His blank eyes were fixed to the road in vague hope that antara again com out from somewhere and bang on him as usual. "ohhh... khuda kare ki wo sahi salamat ho aur aap ko wo jald hi mil jayein..kahena to nahi chahiye bhaisahab... pata nahi aaj kaal logo ko kya ho gaya hain..choti se choti baat par marne chale ate hain...mar ne ke kya kya tarike nikalte rehete hain...iss larki ko hi dekh lijiye.. wahan door lake ke beach mein jo purana darwaja dikh raha hain aapko... wahan lake ka pani bahut jyada deep hain...akele jaa ke uss darwaje ke upar se pani mein kud para... agar koi wahan se pani mein kud pare to usey ek khuda ki sibaye aur koi nahin bacha sakta..." the man blabbered looking at the far in daal lake. Raghu moved his eyes following his gaze. At a very far distant, in the middle of lake, he saw a very old gate like structure. Suddenly he saw a fig standing on the top of that old gate. She seemed like wearing a blue churidar and her long hairs seemed waving in air. Her back was facing him so her face was not visible to him. But the posture, height everything looked like her! ANTARA!!! his eyes got widened. What's she doing there?! was she going to do the same like that girl?!! He quickly looked at the man at side, "bhai udhar... uss purane gate gate ke pass kaise jaya ja sakta hain?!" he asked in frustrated voice. "Wahan to bahut kam log jate hain. shikare walon ko double paise dene parte hain wahan jane ke liye..." The guy said. "mere ko udhar jane ka hain abhi!!!..." he said impatiently. "kya?!! Par kyun?!!" the man was so startled. "arey tu andha hain kya?! Tujhe dikhayi nahi deta wo udhar khari hain..." he screamed indicating towards the old gate. "kaun khara hain bhaijaan... mujhe to koi dikhayi nahi de raha hain... aap ko zarror waham huya hoga..." he said in confusion. But raghu didn't listen to him. antara's fig was so clear even from that distance. He rushed towards the water where the shikara's were standing at row. "arey bhaijaan suniye toh..." the man came and stood in front of him blocking his way. "aaap maan te kyun nahi mere baat?! Wahan koi nahin hain... aur waisey bhi tufan ane wala hain. iss wakt daal lake meein koi bhi sikara nahin jayega..." he informed. Raghu glared at the sky. The black clods had started to cover the horizon. he stood silent for a while and the person thought that he had left his stubbornness. But proving him wrong, raghu rushed bypassing him towards the shore. A small shikara was still standing there. a young boy was seating on the boat. Raghu just went near him and grabbed his collar. The boy was frozed looking at his fiery gaze. "sun ek hi baar puchunga... mere ko udhar uss purane gate ke pass le ke jayega ki nahin?!!" he asked in a low dangerous tone. "wo... wo... Bhaijaan.. abhi to tufaan ane wala hain... too..." He said in stumbled voice. "to futt idhar se..." raghu threw him on the shore and jumped on the boat. "arey kahan ja rahe ho?!!" the boy screamed looking at him but raghu had already gone far with the boat. He was moving straightly towards the gate with frustrated, widened eyes. The waves had become high and the wind also became fast due to the approaching storm. He was feeling difficulties while rowing the little boat but he was going there as fast as he could, ignoring all the dangeeours. He could clearly see the fig of antara standing motionlessly on the top. He just wished that antara diddn't ddo any reckless thing before he approached. The fog became clearer as he approached and he increased his speed. He didn't know how but fighting with that huge wave and winds, he at last approached to the beneath of that gate. He approached to the peak of that gate like a maniac. "misscal!! Aisa mat kar,.." he screamed after reaching there but he became startled as he approached there. no one was there!! "misscal!!..." he said in confusion. "misscal tu kidhar gayi?!!" je screamed looking everywhere. But no one answered back. He got afraid thinking that, she had jumped inside the water. But at that moment his sense was coming back slowly. If antara would jump inside the water then there would be surely the sound of water splashing. But there was no sound like that. At last he understood that the man was right. It was really his illusion. He crushed on the place with exhausted face. his painfull blank eyes were shifted towards the shore so far. Why?!! Why did he say those words to antara? Where would he find her? ANTARA!! the girl who had came in his life just some three months ago and shook his whole world. How could he go away from him like that?! Leaving him all alone all empty?! "kidhar hain tu yeri?! Kyun sata ti hain mere ko itna har baar?!!" he said in broken voice. He felt something moist in his eyes. Was he crying?!! He didn't even care!! "arey bhaijaan!!..." someone's scream approached to his ears. Jerking his feature, he looked at the lake and saw a shikara standing at the base of the gate and that same man whom he met at the shore was standing at that shikara. The man was so worried for him so he ccouldn't afford to come searching for him. Silently, raghu went in that boat. "maine kaha to tha bhaijaan, koi nahi hain yahan... acha huya ki tufan aya nahi... bas zor se hawa chal rahi thi..." He said. The sum had already started to shower his rays on the valley coming out from the cloud. Raghu didn't gave a single answer. "waisey bhaijaan... kissey dhoond rahe hain aap?!!" he asked curiously. "antara!" he said slowly in chocked voice. "achaa!! Kaun hain wo?! Aap ki koi ristedaar hain?! ya..." He asked. raghu looked at him with a tender eyes. After some silent moment he slowly said, "pahele to kuch bhi naiii lagti thi... par abto lagta hain ki wo..." he looked at the shore approaching and finished his sentence, "sabkuch!!... meri zindagi hain wo..."

Precap: Beyond the flame of those fires, a heavenly smile flashed in his eyes. The flames were creating some heavenly aura to that scene. Just some mere distance from him, she was there, smiling cheerfully among those little girls. Like an angel fallen from sky. His eyes got stuck with that scene. He couldn't say a single word and his eyes got the most pleasant expression he ever had. He found his life at last. But still he couldn't make a single sound. He just sat there, frozen, looking at that beautiful angel. His antara!!

ps: i know iss update ko par ke sab mujhpe juta aur chappal marega..🤢..god kya likhne gayi thi aur kya likh diya maine...... sorry yaar,,,