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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: pampz

ohhh dear ...don scare me ...😲 am trying to update part 6 soon ...plzzz bear with me a bit ...😆😆😆
am glad that u loved the previous update so much ...thanx dear🤗


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Posted: 12 years ago
Omgeee P-recap😳
can't wait to read more
plz continue soon

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: zzinia2411


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dear i can undrstand how much u love raghu and Antara n u wanna know more ...but the prob is me getting nervous as its being difficul to draw the logical reactions between the two after part 5...n after having a lot of brainstorm... hv just thought the precap ... so dear plzz bear wth me ...part 6 in on the way ...hv patience dear AWWW...🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
dear pampz ...
i wana appreciate ur writing style as i hv read othea articalz or stories written by otherx ba i felt inspite of soft and smooth romance they hv crossed the limits and romance had become vulgarity i mst say...so plz dnt do that wd ur story which is already loved by me and many otherz i sware u r brilliant logical writer and hope u will keep it in ur mind cx itx reader's request...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: emanali

dear pampz ...
i wana appreciate ur writing style as i hv read othea articalz or stories written by otherx ba i felt inspite of soft and smooth romance they hv crossed the limits and romance had become vulgarity i mst say...so plz dnt do that wd ur story which is already loved by me and many otherz i sware u r brilliant logical writer and hope u will keep it in ur mind cx itx reader's request...

i appreciate ur thoughts...vulgarity is something which i feel does not exist in true love ...
pervertion ...vulgarity whatever u call it does not match with the character Raghu ...Raghu is a real man ...with a bold heart ...thoda teda hai par apna hai ...so don worry dear ...chilll😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: pampz

i appreciate ur thoughts...vulgarity is something which i feel does not exist in true love ...
pervertion ...vulgarity whatever u call it does not match with the character Raghu ...Raghu is a real man ...with a bold heart ...thoda teda hai par apna hai ...so don worry dear ...chilll😛




THANKS...😛
I love the way u appreciate it nd rgtly said dat Raghu k character pe Bolay tu yeh sab lafra sout nahe karta...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aray basanti rainbow colors man likh dya ab tu reham kha day dy update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yaar update kab der rahi hoon??
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Posted: 12 years ago
guys ..i really don knw whether u wd lik or hate this update ...anyway the story goes like this ...
my crazy friends..everything is welcome from u ...jutas chappals tomatoes sara hua karela potatoes n eggs...n ofcourse ur rocking comments...

PART 6

Raghu locked the door and turned around in a calm but furious way facing Antara. Antara became conscious about the fact that she had totally failed to escape from that bunglow ...actually from Raghu...she is back to the same room again in his den. She felt she was having difficulty in breathing...she couldn't breathe normally...she couldn't even sob ...her limbs were not supporting her...she stood there in the room frozen...

Raghu's eyes were straight at her observing her top to bottom. Leisurely stepping towards her Raghu removed his jacket n threw it on the bed. He shook his head to trickle the excess water from his hair and took the final few more steps towards her. He stood just few inches apart from her n tucked his hands in his pockets. Raghu tilted his head a bit n said in a low but arrogant voice: Kaha tha na ...yehanse hilna nahi. Par tune meri baat nahin mani ..haaan??? Wapas aake abh wahin khari hai tu ...kyun??

Antara couldn't face him any more...she was so much intimidated by Raghu that she covered her face with her palms. Raghu moved n lessened the distance between them further n said in a dangerous tone : kya lagta hai ? kya kiya hai apun tere sath ?? Antara shivered hiding her face in her palms but couldn't move an inch.

Raghu held her hands strongly n removed her palms from her face and grabbed her by her arms and shook her rigorously and said : Ankhe khol ...Dekh meri taraf aur bataaa...antara struggled for her breath n opened her eyes and looked into his eyes.

Raghu : Haan ab bataa...

Antara : tum ...tumne... She lost her words n sobbed..

But Raghu didn't leave her 'he jerked her n firmly said : Antara...bath khatam kar...

Antara : ...tum ...tumne mere ...back pe chot hai to...she couldn't finish..

Raghu : ye jo tu baat khatam kar nahi pa rahi ...main khatam kar deta hun..tune socha ki tere chot ke bahane apun tereko chuya...kyun yehi sochti hai na tu ?? he jerked her again ...

To sun ...HAAAN bilkul sahi sochti hai tu ...chuya hai apun tereko ...par galat tarike se chuya nahi tha tujhe...tera zakham pe bandage karna para ...agar nahi kiya hota na to tera zakham se khun bahkar tere sharirka sara khun khatam ho jataa...ye jo tu abhi mere saamne khari hai na ..isi wajese ki sahi waqt pe tere zakham ko maine samhala...samjhiii . waise tu khud kaha tha na ki kisiki jaan bachane ke liye kuchbhi karna chahiye ...to bas apun ne wohi kiya .

Raghu and antara both were out of breath n both stared at each other's eyes. Antara tried to say something but Raghu dragged her near the bed and said in a deadly voice..:

Ulti dimag se sochti hai na tu...dimag ko sidhi karke sochti to tujhe samajh me ata ki mereko agar kuch bhi galat karneka tha na tere sath... to teri behoshi ka wait nahi karta ...kabhi bhi kisibhi time apun kar sakta tha ...aur Wo SAb kuch abhi bhi Kar Sakta Hun... ABHI ISI WAQT...Samjhiii

Saying this Raghu grabbed her dupatta n harshly threw it away from her. He picked her up in his arms and was about to throw her on the bed but didn't. Antara felt no one on this earth could save her from Raghu's deadly wrath n she reached to the end point of saturation of fear. She didn't resist Raghu a bit n she closed her eyes n just waited for that very moment when Rahgu's wrath would plunge on her n crash her to dust.

The moments took longer to pass away ...n it was a pin drop silence in the room. She felt she was not thrown on the bed ...she was still in his arms n suddenly she heard Raghu's voice ...: tujhe zarabhi bharosa nahi hai mujh pe .. kyun?

Raghu was intently looking at antara who was in his arms then. Antara couldn't believe what she heard just then ...Raghu speaking to her in a hurt tone ...the deadly rage that was there in his voice just few moments back , it was gone. Antara opened her eyes slowly n looked at raghu ...there were no traces of anger in his eyes ...she saw a deep pain in his eyes... and an extreme urge to see something in her eyes...

Haan ...hai apun Gunda ... bachpan sahi nahi tha mera ...par tu mujhe itna galat samajhti hai? ...Raghu's voice cracked a bit in frustration. He put her down softly on the bed n sat in front of her on his knees on the floor. He tucked her hair locks softly behind her ear and looked into her eyes ...n said : sapne me bhi tere sath galat karneka nahi soch sakta ...par abhi jo gusse me akar kiya... tujhe is had tak daraya...wo galat tha ...bohoot galat tha...ye meri galti hai.

Raghu put his head down on her knees n said in a broken voice: tujhe jo bhi saza dena hai de... par mujhse baat kar plzzz'.

Antara looked at him intently n didn't know why but she was in pain seeing Raghu in pain ...she disregarded the trauma she was going through because of Raghu n touched his hair with her trembling fingers .

TO be Continued'.

Edited by pampz - 12 years ago

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