Thread 1 Rantara SS JAAN (UPDATE part 23 pg148)

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madhutanu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#151

Wow just loved it... lekin bahuth chota update tha..., ithna conjucy kyoon karthi hai re... ab next update badawala chahiye... waiting

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neha.angel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#152

Nycc yaa such a beautiful full updated kash jese hum ff os n ss read karte haii wasa kuch cb dekhaye. Vry nyc sweet n touchy..

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pampz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#153

Originally posted by: KreyaArshiLover
Wow that was deep and Touchy and beatiful, please please make the chapters a bit longer!! Please??

Loved it

wll try next time to gv u a long update ...but actually ye mere hath me nah hai ..lollzzz

but thanx dear for loving my small update ...😊

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pampz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#154

Originally posted by: madhutanu
Wow just loved it... lekin bahuth chota update tha..., ithna conjucy kyoon karthi hai re... ab next update badawala chahiye... waiting

i become nervous before every update ...n it takes really a lot of time just to imagine how wd characters like Raghu n antara behave in my story ... but am so glad that u loved it ...

n offcourse i wll try to gv u a longer update ...next ...😆😆😆

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pampz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#155

well thats called a masterpiece👏

how to describe this in a words.raghu's every word made shiver in my spine.u have written them brilliantly.and the last part made me cry.

such an wonderfull update and u are a brilliant writer.👍🏼

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A big teddy hug to u dear for loving my story n inspiring me for the next update ...thanx 🤗

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Princy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#156

Yaar pin point pe laake rokh Di...aage Likho na jaldi...

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pampz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#157

Originally posted by: Shimolina
Nice updat...
But raghu is sad...i cnt see him being sad yaar... 😔
anywayz luved ur updat...as usual it ws awsum...
But it ws small...u wr8 so wel dat yeh updat bhi mujhe chota lagta hai...
n ya...plzplz updt soon...

Raghu is sad but he has a superb characteristics that he does not stay wth his sadness...

ur comment mks me really happy dear...

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pampz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#158

Originally posted by: MyAnastasia18
WOOW awesome ;)

she was really scared of him...man u described her nd his situation soo well...bt felt sad for Raghu...hope Antara will say something sweet to him nd tht he'll clean her wounds😳

Awww ...i think u guessed it right dear ...

😆😉