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Posted: 12 years ago

#111

Hi,

Lovely FF. I feel the jungle scene is an inspiration from your FF 😳😳😳

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: neha.angel
Wooowww... I lov it I lov it I simply lov it.. antra super scared n raghu hell angry... u r a heart stealer.. man I always wait fr ur ff.. don't make me wait to long sweet coz now I can't I after reading this..I desperatly want next part ...

Thanx for loving the update ...but dear i cant update the next part soon ...as i don knw how raghu is gonna react 😳next ...gv mme some time dear 🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: sweetdesire

Hey dear

Wow just love the update

Thank god Antara is fyn

But why he is scared of Raghu

Really looking forward to read more

So plz do continue soon

Take care

Lots of Love

Geet

LOLLLz😆😆😆 why antara is scared of raghu ...cos we all love to see such scenes dear ...🤣

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: sonu-monu
What the !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Oh my God !

what is this ?? im shaking like a leaf !!

im bloody scared !!

what an update !!

im literally shivering with Raghu fear !

TAke a BOW !!!

you have nailed the story ,

your SS Is the JAAn of this forum for me now !!

seriously im shocked ,

where do u get these mindblowing ideas !

the update is just so powerful k i have a hard time explaining it !!

the writing is bang ON !

and you are aweosme !

nd today i have become ur hugest fan !!

WOwww !

Im speechless !!

so much to say but no words are forming !!

again Take a bow !!

i seriously cnat wait ,

plzzz update fast
plzzz
plzzz
zplzzz

awww u made me speechless... what a crispy n spicy comment ...am right now ...LOLLZZZ

but dear don get so scared of Raghu ...after all he is Our Raghu Yaaar...who is to save our antara always ..😳😳😳

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Posted: 12 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: --POV--
Hi,

Lovely FF. I feel the jungle scene is an inspiration from your FF 😳😳😳

REALLLYYY??????😲😲😲😲😲😲😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: ifians
it is really the best update till date.👏
just loved each and every part of it and ur description is too good that i could even imagine each and every scene happening in front of me.

last part was so gripping.antara doubted raghu's intentions again.but it is natural for a girl who experienced so much bad i n this small time.

and the way yoy described raghu's anger was fabulous.

wow..gr888..am in cloud 9 after reading ur comment 😳 ...thanx dear

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: MyAnastasia18
Oh My My...I've never read this kind of thing...I mean I never thought tht she'll take his Keys nd try to run away... ND MY GOD the way Raghu reacted gave me shivers DIDN'T saw this coming jumping out of the window, scarring her nd breaking the vase on his head with his own hands...

I DON'T HAV ANY WORDS THIS WAS UNPREDICTABLE (JST LIKE THE SHOW IS ;)

I LOVED THIS...READ THIS SURELY MORE THEN ONE MORE TIME AND STILL MY HERAT SKIPS IT BEATS...

CAN'T THANK U ENOUGH FOR THIS SPEECHLESS UPDATE

HAYYEEE I'M LIKE THIS🤪

ohhh dear thanx a lot for loving this update ...i loved the first entry of Raghu in the show where he jumps off 40 ft high a building n straight lands in front of antara n looked at her ...ufff that was too good ...too hottt..😳😳😳 but i didnt lik him flying with antara to save her (plzz don throw chappals )...that was not so real or appealing to me ...😕

i just made him jump from first floor ...ye to Raghu ka bayen haath ka khel hai na ...😳😳😳 loLLLZZZ

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