Thread 1 Rantara SS JAAN (UPDATE part 23 pg148)

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Guys am not a writer...but rantara fever (Raghu n Antara Aka Ayaz n Nikita) has left some effects on me ...I hv started writing😆😆 ...i have completed 29 chapters n still planning to continue it because of ur (crazy Rantarians)) endless love ...true inspiration ...n huge appreciation... love u a lot😊

THREAD 2 LINK :
INDEX :
part 1: pg1
part2: pg4
part3: pg7
part4: pg11
part5: pg16
part6: pg22
part7: pg28
part8: pg35
part9: pg43
part10: pg51
part11:pg 57
part12:pg 65
part 13:pg 72
part 14:pg 80
part 15:pg 88
part 16:pg 95
part17:pg102
part18:pg107
part19:pg115
part20:pg123
part21:pg132
part22:pg140
part23: pag148
PART 1

It was dark n nothing cd be seen beyond two feets ...but raghu cdnt stop searching antara ...he shouted calling her name numerous times but all in vain ...not a single hope or trace was there to raghu to get antara back to him ..very close ..just near to his heart within his arms ...raghu culdnt understand why he wants to hold antara this way ...it was lik he was gonna be mad by the passing time with this stress.

Raghu was thinking where that girl cld go in this dense forest ...the girl who fears to death when sees a rat, just cant get eloped by herself here ...raghu was immensely worried for Antara n he wanted to get her in front of him n scold her a lot even more than usual for behaving lik this .
he felt an irresistible urge to crash her soft body against his n wd never evr let her go away from him ..the urge to get her n holding her in arms was increasing with his worry with every passing moment .This feeling was new to him'raghu was totally unaware of this ..n somewhat he was not being able to handle it.

Raghu collapsed down under a tree due to utter frustration. There was only sounds of the small river that was flowing nearby n some unknown creatures n animals made some noise which were enough to make anyone lose their sense due to fear'but raghu was not afraid for himself ..he was fearing for antara...In what condition the girl might be . He blamed himself for fighting wth her n leaving her alone in his jeep on the lonely highway beside this forest.though he was back within 10 min but by that time there were no traces of antara anywhere.

the sound of water somewhat gave some energy to raghu n he stood up n walked following the sound...chaal chaal ..the river was flowing ...suddenly raghu sensed that even in this dark night in the dense forest someone is keeping an eye on him ...raghu a black belt holder of martial arts knew very well that in critical situations it is more needful to concentrate on his target'.he quickly made himself vanish in the dark ..he creeped down behind a big stone with a small bush within seconds.

Raghu was looking dangerously handsome in a black jeans , a black tee with a black jacket..the color helped him more to blend wth the darkness ..the only thing that was shining on him was his sword tabiz that always dangles near his heart ...he became ultra cautious n prepared himself to attack his target ...he looked lik a black panther ready to attack his shikaar'.he had his gun n knives wth him ..but decided not to attack immediately but wait n watch the moves of the mysterious sound ...soon he realised that d mysterious sound creator was not an animal ...it was a man...

The man suddenly lost raghu n started to search for him here n there ...raghu took just 20 secs to get hold on that man in such a position that any moment he could end that man's life ...raghu sensed that this man is the missing link to antara''. Raghu was behind the man holding his neck with his bare iron hands said in a dangerously low husky voice "I wll take only two secs to break ur neck...if u love ur life thn tell me ..wheres the girl? Wheres Antara??"

the sudden dreadful attack made that man drowned into fear n he started struggling ..raghu held his grip tight on his neck n put some extra pressure . Raghu is knwn to be an unbeatable fighter n super intelligent mind game player in the underworld 'each n everyone who knew him only a bit ... dared to take any punga with him '.. this man surrendered to raghu immediately n blabbered that he was just a slave n did what he was ordered to do '..he didn't know the name of his master '..he was asked to keep a watch on raghu as their boss doubted that without the girl Raghu might not leave the forest'.so the man was for providing the informations n whereabouts of each sec regarding raghu .

Raghu tied his mouth n hands with tearing the shirt of that man n then asked him to take Raghu where they kept antara...they walked for more half an hour keeping the river at their right ..n reached to a place where the forest was not so dense ...n the moonlight was entering more at this area ''..

Raghu tied the man with a tree with a creeper plant n put dried leaves on him so that no one can see that a man was tied there'.he saw a hut nearby n heard a faint sound of conversation ''..he came in right side of the hut and through the window he saw 3 men were sitting on the ground ..playing cards n drinking local liquire''but no trace of antara. Slowly n quietly he came towards the other side of hut n there he found a door with a crack .he tried to look inside the hut by the crack 'n he saw a piece of pink n ash color cloth lying on the floor ''raghu's heart just jumped in joy because he recognized it was antara's dupatta 'but still he cdnt see antara there . raghu broke the cracked old door very cautiously with two or three twists '.. creeek creek 'creek..n the door finally opened '''.raghu enetered the hut without making any noise and saw heap of straws gathered at a side '.the men were in front of the hut in another room and did not hear anything and they continued chatting'..Raghu listened to them and understood that by the end of this night they will shift antara from here '.. BUT where is Anatara???

to be continued ''.

If u like it guys I will continue it on our boring weekends '.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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plzzz don throw chappals n tomatoes on me for this 🤪SS
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Really love the intensity!!!
update soon hun😳
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Interestin...cont soon 👍🏼
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Black panther 🤪 interesting ...😳
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nice dear..continue soon😊
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looking interesting... upload soon dear...
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It us very nyc.. n awsom.. do keep writing. . N update soon..
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Please continue yaar!! Really liked it👍🏼
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OMG awesome but where is antara
update soon

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