Thread 1 Rantara SS JAAN (UPDATE part 23 pg148)

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kaveriw2008

@kaveriw2008

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Posted: 12 years ago

#141

wow... this is so deep yaar

raghu is hurt of antaras thinking...sad

nice update

i wish some cute and sweet long eyelock in next part

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Sona (Samwllms)

@AVELINA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#142

nice updt but too small:-(

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Shimolina

@Shimolina

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Posted: 12 years ago

#143

Nice updat...
But raghu is sad...i cnt see him being sad yaar... 😔
anywayz luved ur updat...as usual it ws awsum...
But it ws small...u wr8 so wel dat yeh updat bhi mujhe chota lagta hai...
n ya...plzplz updt soon...

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MyAnastasia18

@MyAnastasia18

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Posted: 12 years ago

#144

WOOW awesome ;)

she was really scared of him...man u described her nd his situation soo well...bt felt sad for Raghu...hope Antara will say something sweet to him nd tht he'll clean her wounds😳

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BabyHimavari

@BabyHimavari

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Posted: 12 years ago

#145

well thats called a masterpiece👏

how to describe this in a words.raghu's every word made shiver in my spine.u have written them brilliantly.and the last part made me cry.

such an wonderfull update and u are a brilliant writer.👍🏼

Edited by ifians - 12 years ago

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856040

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Posted: 12 years ago

#146

wow such and intense moment

raghu speaking to antara in such a voice wow

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537048

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Posted: 12 years ago

#147

Wow loved it
awesome
the way raghu is hurt and u hv potrayed his emotions dats really too good
do update soon

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emanali

@emanali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#148

Wowww

Brilliant superrrb update
Ba tooo small...
Raghu ix panic ohhh poor raghu...now antra should console him in dramatic n romantic way ...
😉
Anywzz really u hv made my day love it...muahhh