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tintin0602

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Posted: 12 years ago

ok Guys this is my first SS. I wrote FF before but never this. So i typically need your support and love for this SS Bodyguard. So i guess i should start now.

PROLOGUE

It was a warm morning but still this morning is different from others. Because it was not Kashmir but Mumbai and here the morning starts with the word sorry. Today, Antara has to go to Raghu to apologies to Raghu for the deed she has done. She has hurt his ego by SLAPPING him in front of everyone. And now Raghu is hell bent to create troubles for her and her family.

So today she decided to Apologies to him again for stopping such things for the sake of her family. because she personally didnt like him. For her he is a gunda. But Raghu again made another excuse and send Antara back by saying that he cant except her apology because of some reason.

she went back to her house. But she was hell angry on this guy Raghu. So she decided to first take out her family from this troubles that Raghu was creating. So finally she called someone whom she doesnt wanted to call, the person who has waited to them from decades.

ok guys thats it for now. If you like it then i will write further else going to stop here. ok wait how can i forget the character sketch.

CHARACTER SKETCH

Raghu naik: he is a goon, but a god for the basti. He protects people. he cant see girls in danger. he love kids and never scold them no matter what.

Antara Kaul: She is beautiful, intelligent, bubbly girl. She always loves to spread love. She loves her mother and her liitle brother Ishaa.

Jai Raj Kaul: He is Antara's grand father. He is the most powerful industrialist.

well all the characters in the ss are same as in the show.

now finally tell me your decision...

PART 1: PAGE 4

PART 2: PAGE 5

part 6: page 16

part 7: page 19

Edited by tintin0602 - 11 years ago

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BabyHimavari

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Posted: 12 years ago

hmm interesting...😊

do pm me and cont asap

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tintin0602

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ifians
hmm interesting...😊
do pm me and cont asap

thanks dear

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Posted: 12 years ago

aww sound interesting ..do continue ...

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kojagoryfan

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Posted: 12 years ago

interesting dear. plz cont. soon. eagerly waiting ..

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Kanishka

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Posted: 12 years ago

interesting...do continue dear n plz pm as well

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nahi12341

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Posted: 12 years ago

sounds interesting ...

love it already

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tintin0602

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Posted: 12 years ago

sure guys i will update soon and most probably till today i will update today or by tomorrow

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mjht_one

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Posted: 12 years ago

it sounds very interesting especially how you ahve included antara's grandpa in it...canit wait to read more

do update soon

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tintin0602

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: mjht_one
it sounds very interesting especially how you ahve included antara's grandpa in it...canit wait to read more
do update soon

i am still working on it

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