A Powerful Hold - A DrikShit Ficlet [Part 2 Pg 3 ]

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Jai Shree Ram

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Posted: 6 years ago

#31

Wow...I'm speechless. The two shots were beautifully written 👏

From Rakshit's hidden emotions to the banter of DriKshit to the silent care he had for her, everything was just perfect. ❤️ If only the show adopted a similar way of portraying characters and feelings.

I would love it if you continue this Ficlet.

Keep writing such wonderful pieces.

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IAdoreYou

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Posted: 6 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Aayat23
Beautiful

Thank you :)

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IAdoreYou

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Posted: 6 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Hallyumint

Hmm it'd be nice too in real life if there was someone to lend an ear is what i thought after reading towards the end.

So full props for getting me immersed in the scene.

The rest i guess everyone else has shared their opinions.

Onwards then...

Dear Alisha, people do lend an ear to others in real life as well. I do and I feel it is so important and needed, especially these days where everyone is so busy in their lives that none has time for others but we must never forget that humanity is our foremost religion, duty and more responsibility. A little time of us won't be a cause of trouble for us but lending an ear to someone when they are in need of it can actually make things easier for them. :)

Thank you for reading. I am glad you liked this.

Cheers

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IAdoreYou

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Posted: 6 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: Aquabutterfly
Wow...I'm speechless. The two shots were beautifully written 👏
From Rakshit's hidden emotions to the banter of DriKshit to the silent care he had for her, everything was just perfect. ❤️ If only the show adopted a similar way of portraying characters and feelings.
I would love it if you continue this Ficlet.
Keep writing such wonderful pieces.

Thank you so much. ❤️ So glad you enjoyed reading this. I think the show is doing great. I am loving it so far but thanks for your kind words. They do mean so much to me. I am not sure if there will be a more part to this or not (I don't know yet) but sure, I am writing something else.

Cheers

-Harshada

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Shreya

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Posted: 6 years ago

#35

Ada, as much as writing on this couple makes you happy, reading your work on them makes me happier. Two ficlets and I am in love with this, makes me wonder about their interactions before turning into man and wife. I am enjoying the way you portrayed angst between them especially in the second one...😳

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IAdoreYou

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Posted: 6 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Mayashika
Ada, as much as writing on this couple makes you happy, reading your work on them makes me happier. Two ficlets and I am in love with this, makes me wonder about their interactions before turning into man and wife. I am enjoying the way you portrayed angst between them especially in the second one... 😳

How sweet! Thanks a bunch, Shreya. I am so glad you enjoyed reading this. ❤️

Lots of love