A Powerful Hold - A DrikShit Ficlet [Part 2 Pg 3 ] - Page 3

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Beautifully penned, but then you've always been fluid with your words.. 😃... Read both the parts in one go...

You brought out Rakshit's unsaid feelings so well... How I wish in the serial too they could have slowed down and explored the emotional aspect of Drikshit. Their story has moved with a jet speed. I feel great love stories require slow burn which they could not give it to them, maybe because of the genre.


Do keep writing more and hoping to see a new story soon...😃
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thank you for another part.
Hope you will write more on Drikshit. I enjoyed your writings in kzk2. Am happy that Drikshit has inspired you coz I left the other show. Now i can read your stories here😃
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Posted: 6 years ago
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That was a great read <3 It feels as if you're filling the missing gaps in the show because you have magic in your writing ⭐️
I always thought DrikShit's marriage was hastened in the show and we could not contemplate their budding relationship as boss and pa. Thanks to your writing, we've been able to catch some glimpses of how their relationship could've been developed.
Hope to read more from you.
Take care,
Jess.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: AMIKA14

Omg ...Am I glad that you wrote this!!!

Damn I loved it...You beautifully described Rakshits anxiety and all the Drikshit moments 👏
Do write more


Thank you so much. Really glad that you enjoyed reading this. ❤️
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: kaku17

Beautifully penned, but then you've always been fluid with your words.. 😃... Read both the parts in one go...


You brought out Rakshit's unsaid feelings so well... How I wish in the serial too they could have slowed down and explored the emotional aspect of Drikshit. Their story has moved with a jet speed. I feel great love stories require slow burn which they could not give it to them, maybe because of the genre.


Do keep writing more and hoping to see a new story soon...😃


This is such a sweet comment. Thank you very much. This really made me smile. ❤️

I think I am going to write more. There is no returning back from this ship anytime soon. 😳

Cheers
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Indulekha00

Thank you for another part.

Hope you will write more on Drikshit. I enjoyed your writings in kzk2. Am happy that Drikshit has inspired you coz I left the other show. Now i can read your stories here 😃


Oh so you were in that forum? I was feeling awful for not being able to recall where I saw you. That's so kind of you to say you liked my pieces in that forum for I don't think I have completed even a single story there.😆 I feel you. It is hard for a sane person to continue watching KZK. 🤢

Thank you so much. I will hopefully write a little more on these two. 😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sugar_Cinnamon

That was a great read <3 It feels as if you're filling the missing gaps in the show because you have magic in your writing ⭐️

I always thought DrikShit's marriage was hastened in the show and we could not contemplate their budding relationship as boss and pa. Thanks to your writing, we've been able to catch some glimpses of how their relationship could've been developed.
Hope to read more from you.
Take care,
Jess.


Thanks a ton, Jess for this wonderful, wonderful comment. You got me overwhelmed really. I know for a fact that I am a below average writer but people like you make me feel really special. I adore you all.

True that. Even I wanted some more bits of boss and PA before they turned husband wife. Not that I am complaining with current track but still. How sweet. I hope to write more too.

Cheers
-Harshada
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awesome parts
Loved both of them
Loved Rakshit'a care for Drishti
He promised her he will listen to her
Do write more
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ariyatogether

Awesome parts

Loved both of them
Loved Rakshit'a care for Drishti
He promised her he will listen to her
Do write more


Thank you. ❤️
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hmm it'd be nice too in real life if there was someone to lend an ear is what i thought after reading towards the end.



So full props for getting me immersed in the scene.


The rest i guess everyone else has shared their opinions.



Onwards then...
Edited by Hallyumint - 6 years ago

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