SS - Eyes of the River...(Wrapped Up!) - Page 9

Mehak: Oye meri behna.... tera wo rocking waala gaana , got me singing... it's rocking.. all the time now.... 😆 I know, you have been busy with exams and were intending to read the story one shot... I hope you like it... will wait for your comments!

Kan: Thank you sooo much for the comments . The story has been updated and I hope you like it! THank you for taking the time to read and comment for being patient with me, what with my delay in updating soon!

Kaira: Thank you so much! Glad you liked the concept. The story has been wrapped, I hope you enjoyed it!

Sanaya: Firstly to answer your question, no I have not written anything before on DMG , and this is indeed the first short story I have penned on DMG forum and so yeah , you really havent missed anything there!

Am so humbled and immensely moved, that you could relate to the character of Niha in someway and to the twirls as well... am glad you enjoyed that... I enjoy that too! And oh.. you were making perfect sense there! 😉 But I am really moved that I could brighten up your day with the story!!! Its such wonderful feeling to know , that we could bring a smile on someone's face albeit for a little while!

beckytower: Thank you soooo much , am so glad you enjoyed the story!

Hinal: Am so glad you enjoyed the story. The story has been completed and I hope you like it. Will look forward to your reactions! 😉

Originally posted by: Sanaya_86

u made my day!!
BEAUTIFUL!!MUAAAH! 🤗

And you've made mine!!! Thank you sooooo much Sanaya.! Its really humbling to know!😳

Originally posted by: ginak

Awesome. The description in the oceanside part, one almost feels oneself at the oceanside feeling the breeze and watching the sun go down with the waves crashing on the rocks.

It is like a story with scenes flashing by.

The narrative style is nice and easy, very intimate.

Liked the easygoing but warm relationship between the characters, the concern for her on the doctors side and his effort to get her wish fulfilled. The way he enjoys her liveliness, her joie de vivre is nice.

and then the Suspense is thrilling but killing........

Thank you soooooooo much Gina! Am so glad you found the narration appreciable.. It's something that I've deviated from my usual . Its more conversational and I jus saw the story visualize afore me... and then as usual it flowed....Am so glad you liked her character and could visualize as you read the story. Makes my effort really worth the while !! Deeply humbled to get such wonderful compliments from you!!Thank you soooo much!

And yeah, I finally ended the suspense!😉

Originally posted by: ashvez

Hey sareeta..its very well written, I love ur style..infact I keep looking for ur posts .
I use to wonder very often & thought of sending a PM , suggesting u to write a FF.Iam sure u must have got many requests.
It was like a wish come true when I saw ur FF on the posts.
The details of both the characters are very well defined, so are the emotions.
Awaiting eagerly for u to complete it.
😊
In one of the posts a while ago I read that u use to write for KAA, and the members waited eagerly for ur posts rather than the soap eppy's...I think u wld repeat the history here too. 👏 👏

Ash.

Oh Ash, you really leave me speechless!!! I am really at a loss of words! Thank you so much for all the kind words, I do hope you enjoy the story, for its now complete!

And KAA IF was a memorable experience and people were really kind to me and it was fun being a part of it!

Originally posted by: vaarti

@ sareeta....am not going to say anything at all till the story is done! you will understand why when you do post it all up and i am ready with my comments. its not fair to give my opinion now and remember i am trained to read in a particular manner? i will and can give you a layman's perspective, but somehow i find myself getting into technicalities, writing style, character dissection and lots more and till i see the end i cannot and will not offer anymore details about what i feel.

Aarti, I competely understand , you not saying at all until the story is done and now having completed it, I have dared to request for your reactions!

Waiting with bated breath for your reactions to the story! *Kneels and requests for reaction*

Originally posted by: swansea

hi
ohhhhhhhhhhh that was so sweet i loved it 👏 well done that was the best ff it was so emotional and touching it made me feel so real its a real point of view i really thing it was great 😳
i hope you make more fanics of peoples point of view, that was the best ever
😉 swansea 😉

Thank you soooooooooo much swansea! Deeply humbled! *bows to the applause* Touched that you could relate to the story and the characters so deeply and enjoyed it!

Thank you soooooooo much!

Originally posted by: vaarti

hmmmmmmmmmmmm....

Aaah, the hmmmmmmmm is scaring me... and giving me the jitters...!!!

Awaiting your critique, with bated breath...*takes a deep breath*

Originally posted by: ifrahnaqash

Just finished reading it..
will comment later.. Gotta restore my pc rite now!

Will look forward to them Ifrah!😉

Originally posted by: mahalakshmi2303

hey sareeta just caught up with the story and i just loved its really a fab story and really superbly written........... 👏
u really deserve this applause i was really felt tat i was kinda of reading a poetic explanation of events........ 😃 😃 😃
the story is fab and dying to know wat happens next.......... 😆 😆
i will be waiting for u to update it.......... 😉 😉

*bows to applause*

Thank you soooooooo much , but the story stands complete and the end was intentional and if it gave a sense of a new beginning .. then the intent of it has come through! 😉 What happens next is left to your imagination... Aah , the pleasures of being the reader!😆

Originally posted by: ginak

Hi! Awesome as usual.

Just wanted to say the Armaan potrayed in your SS reminded me of this song -

Like a bridge over troubled waters by Simon and Garfunkel.

Aaah, thatz a beautiful song and bang on, it sure fits Armaan and emotional state and Niha is sure the bridge over the troubled waters, that he stands to get across!😉

Good to know, you are SG fan too.. I love their music!