weekend with rahul and muskaan 16!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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here u ppl! we eached WWRM 16!!! It might be the last one ever..

if ny1 willing 2 chk d previous WWRMs then here u go:
note: hav fun reading WW! buh better don drag d story of previous WWRM further as these may get a reason of confusion wid d previous1 n d present1!
if u donno d rule plz check d weekend id rahul muskaan 1!
dere r rules r given!
so here presenting:







note: don need d story 2 b like they has 2 confess at d end or something like dat! keep it steady! n we can cont wid d current epi theme next week!
starting theme!:

as requested by DD(Ika) again - will start with the hug scene on the terrace when rahul tells muskaan he is leaving.. lets make sure they get together in this story atleast!!!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Ok you great WWRM writers.. I ask you one last time to get together and write a wonderful story of RM together.. this may be the last time we can do this..

Start with : RM hug scene on terrace when Rahul tells Muski he is leaving..

Edited by SuhaniSonia - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Last one?? god sonia... you made me cry again!! 😭 anyway guys... Lets do this!! for the last time...

"I have to go muskaan!"… rahul whispered and gave a light peck on her forehead…

Muskaan-but rahul… humesha ke liye kyun? Tu wapas nahi ayega?

Rahul wiped the corner of his eyes… and loosed his grip around muskaan…

Rahul-I don't think so… tu aapna khayal rakhna… aur humesha khush rehna… okay?

Muskaan nodded… unsure of herself…

Rahul was about to go when muskaan pulled his hand…

Muskaan-woh mujhe kuch kehna tha… woh rahul… woh…

Rahul-haan bol…

Muskaan-I… I… matlab… hum sab tujhe bohot miss karenge!!

Rahul smiled and took a step forward… "pata hain!! Aur yeh bhi pata hain ki meri jungli beeli mujhe sabse zyaada yaad karegi!! Ek promise karegi??"

Muskaan-haan…

Rahul-don't cry ever… please muskaan… please…

Edited by muskaan_ankita - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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The last one....sob sob !
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Rahul: Main ja raha hon Muskaan humesha ke liye.

Muskaan gets dumbstruck, she don't know what's happening and why? Muskaan opens her mouth to say something but nothing comes out of her mouth, she feels her voice is gone. What's happening all of sudden? Nothing was making sense anymore.

Tears were flowing like insane river from both muski and Rahul's eyes. Muskaan hugs tightly Rahul as if never letting go. After few minture both of them break from hug and look at each other. They feel the vision is blur because of the tears in their eyes. Rahul takes her face in his hands and with his thumb slowly wipes off the tears.

Muskaan (feeling she can talk): Ra...hul.. I wish ke main tere saath chal sakti.... Lekin...

Rahul: Yeh lekin hi toh humare beech ke doori ka karan hai na Muskaan. Par teri bhi majbooriyaan hain main janta hon.

Muskaan can't help but to cry only. The love of her life is deprating from her and she cannot do anything.

Rahul: Meri flight ka time...

Muskaan looks at him in shock, Rahul feels he'll break into 1000 pieces in seconds if he doesn't leave now. Rahul hugs her one last time and whipsers "I love you Muskaan, tu meri zindagi mein pehli aur akhri ladki hai. Muskaan jab bhi apne pyaar ki zaroorat ho aik bar palat kar awaz de dena, tu mujhe esi modh par payegi. Main tera INTEIZAAR karonga. Kyunki main janta hon ke aik din humara milan hoga zaroor hoga sada ke liye hoga. Yeh toh sirf beech mein kuch umawaas ki raatein hain jo agayi hain. Lekin umawaas ki raaton ke baat chand phir se nikalta hai Muskaan. Yaad rakhna. Humara milan hoga, zaroor hoga. Tu himmat mat harna. I love You Muskaan, forever"

Saying all this Rahul kisses her forehead and Muskaan looks at him, tears are running again.

Without waiting for her response Rahul leaves from there, leaving Muskaan, Sanjivini, leaving his most dear ones in tears.

Rahul walking out of Sanjivini "Mujhe es jagah se bohut pyaar hai, sabse bohut pyaar hai. Main Ayuoga aik din lut ke zaroor ayonga.. Muskaan tu chinta mat kar, yeh humari kahani ka anth nahi hai, balke adhaye (interval) hai. Humari kahani ke anth mein hamara milan zaroor hoga".

Muskaan was sitting on her knees on terrace she was wailing, she was all of sudden feeling so empty, as everything is gone with Rahul.

Muskaan was feeling suffocating in terrace so she runs back in lockers room, everyone else was in canteen and were upset on Rahul's leave but no one had courage to face Muskaan's pain.

Muskaan goes directly to Rahul's locker and touches it like trying to feel Rahul there. She bangs Rahul's locker in anger, pain when suddenly it opens and a letter fall from there locker with few pictures.

Muskaan bends down and gathers the letter and pictures. She looks at pictures and is shocked, it's hers and Rahul's from their childhood.

Muski - Rahul ne yeh ajj tak sambhal ke???
She was shocked, amazed but happy.

She reads the letter and it totally shocked.

"jis din Muski mujhse pyaar ka izhaar karegi toh yeh main usko donga, haan thoda hasegi aur sochegi Rahul shair bhi ban gaya."

"Chand ki roshni teri ankho ki chamak k lieh hoti
pholo ki khushboo teri MUSKAAN k lieh hoti
qous-o-qaza k rung teri anchal k lieh hoty
aur kash k tu sirf merey lieh hoti
MISSING YOU"

MUSKAAN TERE HOTON SE KAHIN JAYE NA,
ANSOO TERE PALKON PE KABHI AYE NA,
POORA HO TERA HAR KHWAB,
AUR JO POORA NA HO, VO KHWAB KABHI AAYE NA'!"

"Zindagi nahen humain tumse sa pyari,
Tumpe pe hazir hai jaan hamari,
Aankhoon main hamarey aansoo hain to kia,
Jaan sa bhi pyari hai MUSKAAN tumharii."

Muskaan is totally shocked to read all this.

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Sorry guys, I know it's emotional but there was no other way to start the scene.
Btw.. Poetry given by Sri.. Thanx Sri😊

Ika






Edited by Day_Dreamer - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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it sucks...i cant believe its the last one sob sob...still it had a way to go...ankita nice part...

waiting for ikas part
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hmm.. I thought I was ok but reading your short part, Ankita, made me cry again! 😭
Maybe I can't do this!

Edited by SuhaniSonia - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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i cant believe rahul has to leave im gona miss the chemistry between drusthi and mayank i wonder wats gona happen wid muskaan after rahul is gone
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey ika that was a very lovely part.....really u made it so beautiful but sad though....i wudnt hav done this much justice....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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guys..im going for sometime..will come bak n type my part..

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