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Sonia Bhalla

@SuhaniSonia

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Posted: 16 years ago

#11

Ika - That was great! Yes it was emotional but it made sense.. and your part was fine afer Ankita's even though you did not see that their. Hmm.. totally made me cry but love the poem, pics idea, and that he was basically like our love is forever and that he would wait for her.

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ramusk

@ramusk

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Posted: 16 years ago

#12

Muskaan is totally shocked to read all this.

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She was so shattered by knowing how much he loved her secretly...

Mu: ( to herself) am sorry rahul...mein tujhe samajh nahin paayi...mein jaanti nahin thi ki tu mujhse itna pyaar karta hain...

Ab main jaanti hun ki mujhe kya karna hain...aur mujhe koi nahin rok sakta...tu sach kehta tha rahul humari kahani ka anth nahi hai aur naa hi hoga ...Hamari kahani toh ab shuru hone waali hain...and deciding firmly she leaves the room...

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He entered the hospital in vch his father was treated....

He saw Dr kirti standing thr and giving out duites to all the interns....He involuntariily gets attracted to the place and he too starts taking the instructions...He was standing by the side of muskaan and nudging her...the next moment he was standing in front of the deserted reception of the hospital...

Ra: uhh can i know where is Mr .Garewal admitted into vch room???

Lady: room no 7 first floor....

Ra: thank u

he walks thro the corridor ... He sees atul coming from the other side singing and dancing in his ususal way...

At: hii rahul mere bhai and gives him a jhappi...he too hugs and then next moment he sees himself alone ....

He was passing thro stores of the hospital.... He went to peep into it....
There he saw a Rahul threatening muski who inturn was threatening him and who were fighting like a cat n rat....A smile flashes on his face...

voice: excuseme sir ..may i be of any help to u....

this brings him to reality.....the smile vanishes and he makes excuse n leaves the place...

He goes into the room whr his dad is admitted..he meets his fathern gives hope tat he is with them and evrything vil be alright. and consoles his mom...He comes out and suddenly he starts bursting out...he goes running to the terrace to hide his feeling...

on the terrace:

He was burying his head in his hand and crying his heart out...

" yeh mere saath hi kyun ho raha hain".." ek taraf dad aur doosri taraf mere dost aur usse jyada meri.." " i want to get outta all this...wat shud i do now...".." mein jise bhi pyaar karta hun usse khota kyuun hoon"

Suddenly he feels a hand running around his hair and then to the shoulders...He raises his head and she was there ..

voice: rahul papaji ko kuch nahin hoga..hmm tu bas himmat mat haarna...mein hun na tere saath...sab theek ho jayega....hum dono milke sab theek kar lenge...

Ra: muskaan tu aa gayi thank u muskaan ......and he hugs her..she too hugs him but then vanishes again bringing him back to reality...

Edited by ramusk - 16 years ago

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Apoorva

@0o.Leah.o0

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Posted: 16 years ago

#13

This is amazing....I am too shattered 2 write....I guess I will 2moro...Cya !

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Ika

@-De.De-

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Posted: 16 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: ramusk
hey ika that was a very lovely part.....really u made it so beautiful but sad though....i wudnt hav done this much justice....

Aww..Thankyou so much🤗

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Ika

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Posted: 16 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: SuhaniSonia
Ika - That was great! Yes it was emotional but it made sense.. and your part was fine afer Ankita's even though you did not see that their. Hmm.. totally made me cry but love the poem, pics idea, and that he was basically like our love is forever and that he would wait for her.

Aww..thanks Sonia😳... Poems idea and poems were by Sri😊. So credit goes to her😃.
Yep, totally!!😳

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Ika

@-De.De-

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Posted: 16 years ago

#16

Omg Sri - The part is too emotional and sweet, just loved it so much!👏👏 Great job sweetie, we'll cont. it more 😊

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Sonia Bhalla

@SuhaniSonia

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Posted: 16 years ago

#17

Sri - That was so good! Really made me cry again though..😭 I have a feeling this is going to be the hardest thing to write and read for us but it may give us some closure. Lets keep it going..

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Neha

@nehaluvsKSG

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Posted: 16 years ago

#18

hey sri tht part for the first time(reading any story) brought tears in my eyes!!!!!!!

tht was awesome!!!

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Komal

@AshiYuvi4life

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Posted: 16 years ago

#19

okay editing!VAwsome job Ankita, Ika, and Sri!!! You guys... why does this have to be the last one? We can still do it you know. Kya hum R-M ko apne dilon mein aur writing mein zinda nahi rakh sakte? We love them naa. We should continue doing this!

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Ika

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Posted: 16 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: AshiYuvi4life
okay editing!VAwsome job Ankita, Ika, and Sri!!! You guys... why does this have to be the last one? We can still do it you know. Kya hum R-M ko apne dilon mein aur writing mein zinda nahi rakh sakte? We love them naa. We should continue doing this!

Thanx Komal... i dont know aobut last for this WWRM but for me its last WWRM.. I'm leaving soon.
Anyways tum bhi likho na.