weekend wid rahul muskaan 15!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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here u ppl! we eached WWRM 15!!! 😛

if ny1 willing 2 chk d previous WWRMs then here u go:

note: hav fun reading WW! buh better don drag d story of previous WWRM further as these may get a reason of confusion wid d previous1 n d present1!
if u donno d rule plz check d weekend id rahul muskaan 1!
dere r rules r given!
so here presenting:







note: don need d story 2 b like they has 2 confess at d end or something like dat! keep it steady! n we can cont wid d current epi theme next week!
starting theme!:

as requested by DD(Ika) - this one is starting with Rahul finding out his father may have cancer. So sad!!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Ok guys! Even though everyone wrote real well in the last WWRM.. not too many people were writing.
Lets do better this time!

So starting theme.. as stated above is after Rahul gets the call from his mother about his father being ill!




Edited by SuhaniSonia - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanks sonia for starting ... i vil try to write


EDITING.....
Edited by ramusk - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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The group dance ends...Muskaan was about to talk to rahul about something but he makes an exuse and leaves the stage....

The concert also ends...

Next day sanjevani

All the interns were gathered for thew briefing seession except for rahul...On the other hand muski's eyes were fixed onto the door awaiitng his presence..

He finally comes late and as usual gets some warnings from dr kirti ... But he was not caring about all these ..his mind was roaming somewhere else....she could easily tel by the look of his face that nothing was okay..

Rahul and muskaan both of them get a same case to deal.

Muski is examining the patient and

Mu: rahul plz woh case file dena....

he was not listening...thinking something else...

Mu: rahul...

Ra: haan ...tum kuch pooch rahi thi muskaan...???

Mu: haan woh main case file chahiye thi....

Ra: oh yeh lo...

Mu: rahul tu theek toh hain na...koi tension hain kya???

Ra: nahin ..kuch bhi toh nahin...main theek hoon...

Mu: are u sure...

Ra: yeh...

they complete their duty and rahul rushes out without saying a word to muskaan.....Muskaan was now realy worried abt him .....he never behaved like this....wat was his problem...

It was lunch time and he was not thr in the canteen so there is only one place where he can be apart from this ...its the terace..

he was sitting there with his face hid in his arms....

she goes and sits beside him and puts her hand on him....

He was about to get up go away wen she stops him...

Mu: rahul...kya hain woh baat...tum bahut pareshaan ho yeh saaf dikh raha hain...kya baat hain?mere bhai ke bare mein pareshan ho kya....

Ra:nahin muskaan aise koi baat nahi hain...chod de....

Mu: mein tujhe acchi se jaanti hoon....koi serius problem ho toh tab hi tu aise rehta hain.....tum mujhse kya chupa rahein ho....

Ra: muskaan plz....mein tujhe kuch bata nahin sakta..pehle hi tujhe bahut problems hain..mein aur usse bada nahin sakta....and gets up

Mu: she also getting up....rahul meri taraf dekh....tu aisa kahega toh main phirse apne aap ko akeli mehsos karungi....tune hi toh kahaan tha ki hum dono mile toh sab kuch theek ho jayega....and feeling a little awkward to wat she said..

Rahul hugs her involuntarily unable to bear this pain and frustration.

Muskaan is surprised by his sudden break down...she tries to pacify him...

Precap: vil rahul tel her his problem...and how vil muski react....

sorry guys made it too emotinal and serious.....dint find another way......plz bear with my writing...and do read and comment or criticize
Edited by ramusk - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Sri! That was perfect! You can't help but make all this emotional when everything already is so emotional to begin with on the show. But this makes sense to me.

Keep it goin guys!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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that was good 😃

umm ill try one soon
right now im gonna sleep
its 1 :36 am
anywazz im new i just joined after reading this fablous thread
Edited by Kiki_luvsRM - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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sri that was really great!!!i'm really happy with the RM track right now and really excited abt it!!!!well done sri!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome ramusk..Sorry don't know ur name!! someone please continue,i would but my hindi isnt so good lol
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Let me try me luck here...Editing...
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Muskaan - rahul...Bol...kya hua ?
* Rahul breaks away from the hug and just stares at her...unable to speak.. *
* Muskaan could see that Rahul was in pain...and it was no appropriate in her part to force him to say anything...so she instead cupps his face in her hands and gives him a hug *
Muskaan - Mujhe yeh pata nahi hai ki tumhe kya problem hain....lekin main tere saath hu Rahul...Hamesha !
Rahul ( suddenly ) - My dad has cancer..
* Muskaan breaks the hug shocked *
Muskaan - KYA ?
Rahul - Mummy ka phone aayatha...unhonehi mujhe bataya...
* Muskaan looks up at him...he was devastated...*
Rahul ( paasing his hand through his hair ) - Mujhe nahi pata ki main kya karoon
* Silent tears flowed from Muskaan eyes...She was unable to spay anything...But she had to comfort
Rahul...She had to tell him everything is going to be okay *
Muskaan - Rahul...Sab kuch theek hojayega...Main tere saath hu...
Rahul - Nahi Muskaan....dont get involved in my problems....I dont want you to suffer with me...
Muskaan - Rahul...You were there for me when I needed you...so now its my turn...
Rahul - Muskaan--
Muskaan places her finger over his lips..
Muskaan - Shh rahul !
And she gives him a big hug...

Edited by I-luv-Mayank - 17 years ago

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