The Parting of Ways - ShivKara and Gauri OS - Page 3

No matter what kind of a jerk they try to portray Shivaay sometimes I just cannot help but love him. Being the wall, the father figure to Omkara and Rudra is his very identity. I have been meaning to write something on Shivaay'and Omkara ever since Omkara's engagement to Swetlana but writing doesn't give me the pleasure of reading something well written on them lol. And I am happy that I read this. I loved how it was Shivaay's perspective. I imagine Shivaay to undergo the same pain when he sees Omkara. The pain of a father when he realizes that his son may not need him anymore.

Originally posted by: Patharsitara

Wonderful 👏

Please write a intense passionate love making scene on rikara. I know I am asking shamelessly. But you are Excellent writer and I want to visualise my fantasy in your writing . So I am requesting you😃

Originally posted by: LoveToWrite

Beautiful is all I can say.
You do have an amazing way with words.
A good read, for sure.

- Harshada

Originally posted by: AngelicTomboy

I've always had a certain weakness for ShivKara bonding.. I dnt know why.. But they just pull me towards them.. This just made me think into the future where such a situation might arise.. Thankyoufor writing it, Sakura

Originally posted by: kaku17

Sakura my dear 🤗 ...you have so beautifully captured the dynamics between the two brothers...both strong and vulnerable in their own way 😊...Shivay really is the benevolent older brother who can move mountains for his loved ones especially his brothers...he is like a mother hen looking after his brood...but such is the vagaries of time that eventually his brood will have to move out of his protection to discover themselves and though he would be apprehensive but he would have to let them go..

I loved how he pinned his hopes on a stranger to bring his brother back to him and somewhere he had the faith that this women with soft brown eyes will be the light which will show his beloved brother his way and eventually lead him back to where he belongs...

Originally posted by: -Ila-

No matter what kind of a jerk they try to portray Shivaay sometimes I just cannot help but love him. Being the wall, the father figure to Omkara and Rudra is his very identity. I have been meaning to write something on Shivaay'and Omkara ever since Omkara's engagement to Swetlana but writing doesn't give me the pleasure of reading something well written on them lol. And I am happy that I read this. I loved how it was Shivaay's perspective. I imagine Shivaay to undergo the same pain when he sees Omkara. The pain of a father when he realizes that his son may not need him anymore.

Brilliantly written :)

SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL👏

Originally posted by: DamseLInActioN

SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL👏

LOVED IT TO THE CORE ❤️

Hey Sakura!!
Awesomely very well written.!!!

Shivay's feelings portrayed just so superbly!! All his pain, struggle, dilemma, his helplessness... You penned it perfectly..!!
How much he want, how much he long...to keep him with him, to hold him back in his protective arms... But he have to let him go..let him fly..let him face his own journey..!!!

Loved ShivKara's understanding, trust and bond..!!! It indeed is difficult to part the ways...!!! That too with someone this special..!!! Splendid..!!!

Do continue to write more...!!!!
MaDiee 👏

Originally posted by: MaDiee

Hey Sakura!!
Awesomely very well written.!!!

Shivay's feelings portrayed just so superbly!! All his pain, struggle, dilemma, his helplessness... You penned it perfectly..!!
How much he want, how much he long...to keep him with him, to hold him back in his protective arms... But he have to let him go..let him fly..let him face his own journey..!!!

Loved ShivKara's understanding, trust and bond..!!! It indeed is difficult to part the ways...!!! That too with someone this special..!!! Splendid..!!!

Do continue to write more...!!!!
MaDiee 👏