The Parting of Ways - ShivKara and Gauri OS - Page 2

Originally posted by: appynehra

yayayay!!! I was crying in the morning for this on Shrenal AT!! Its awesome!! 👏

Thankuu so much for this- helps me prepare for my tasks tomm! And a very well written part 😃

Originally posted by: MahaAli2905

really nice loved it

Originally posted by: nut-kut-86

Res 😊 unres sorry main bahar gai thi isliye aapke kahani pad nahin paayi aur uspar lilh nahin paayi
Dekh sakti hoon aappne shivaay ke andar ki bhavna ko kitni achi tarah likha hai.yeh hum sab ke saath bhi hota hai na.humare niece ya nephew jab chote hote hai tab hum unko kitne chaav se sambhalte hai aur shayad unki sambhal hum puri zimdagi kar sakte hai.phir hab who bade hote hai tab apni school lyf and college lyf ki problms khud sambhalte hai tab aisa lagta hai ke khud jaaye aur unki maasumiyat barkaraar rakhe par nahin karte aur kahin na kahin khush bhi hote hai ke who aapne aapko iss jahan mein rehne layak bana rahe hai.and haan last mein bring my brother back and i know you will bahut khubsurat likha hua tha.aap likhte rahiye ga

Originally posted by: nut-kut-86

Unres on pg no 1

Originally posted by: priyanvs

Well written dear

Loved it

Originally posted by: dafla

Its wonderful..do write more

Wonderful 👏

Beautiful is all I can say.
You do have an amazing way with words.
A good read, for sure.

- Harshada

I've always had a certain weakness for ShivKara bonding.. I dnt know why.. But they just pull me towards them.. This just made me think into the future where such a situation might arise.. Thankyoufor writing it, Sakura

Sakura my dear 🤗 ...you have so beautifully captured the dynamics between the two brothers...both strong and vulnerable in their own way 😊...Shivay really is the benevolent older brother who can move mountains for his loved ones especially his brothers...he is like a mother hen looking after his brood...but such is the vagaries of time that eventually his brood will have to move out of his protection to discover themselves and though he would be apprehensive but he would have to let them go..

I loved how he pinned his hopes on a stranger to bring his brother back to him and somewhere he had the faith that this women with soft brown eyes will be the light which will show his beloved brother his way and eventually lead him back to where he belongs...