Originally posted by: MaDiee
Hey Sakura!!
Awesomely very well written.!!!
Shivay's feelings portrayed just so superbly!! All his pain, struggle, dilemma, his helplessness... You penned it perfectly..!!
How much he want, how much he long...to keep him with him, to hold him back in his protective arms... But he have to let him go..let him fly..let him face his own journey..!!!
Loved ShivKara's understanding, trust and bond..!!! It indeed is difficult to part the ways...!!! That too with someone this special..!!! Splendid..!!!
Do continue to write more...!!!!
MaDiee π
Hi MaDiee,
Thank you so much for your lovely words. You know, I feel for Shivaay, no matter what darker shades he reveal at times, as a brother no one could be more perfect. He is practically a parent to OmRu than TejVi ever were. So I guess he would feel like a father does when his children grow up.
Their parting of ways would come definitely at some point or the other, where both has to let go, and what can be better right, than to have someone you trust that you can hand over your responsibilities to?
I'm really happy you enjoyed it, and this long comment really means a lot.
Love,
Sakura
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