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Posted: 17 years ago
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Vishvaas 2 Part3:



credit for pix goes to vinisha_RAJAT-shukriya Vini
Vansh and Vinisha are thrown to the floor but smile

They slowly get themselves up and leave from there...into the depths of the jungle

Veer: humara kaam toh hogaya

Vishva: ye log kitne bewakuf nikle...

Veer: par abhi tak baata nahin chal paya hai ke woh kis rajya ke teh

Vishva: unke haath pe kaisa ajeeb sa nishan tha

Veer: toh tumne bhi dekha

Vishva nods

Veer: umm waise wahan kya naam baataya tha tumne apna

Vishva: Vinisha

Veer:vinisha...naam mein dum hai...

Veer had this comment to her for the third time and she loved it every time he sed it

They had purposely got themselves kidnapped and injured because Parth had already found out the location of teh people who were helping their enemies
Veer and Vishva wanted to find out more about these people and know them better and get to their enemies which is why they got themselve kidnapped and found a strange marking on all those peoples hands

Veer: humme Ashtik ja ke is nishan ke bare mein paata lagana hai aur apne dushman ke nazar se bachna hai...isliye hum bar bar behs badlenge par...naam wahi honge...Vansh aur Vinisha

Vishva: lijiye hum Ashtik ponch gaye...

They were at the exit of the secret shortcut leading into Ashtik

Veer and Vishva managed to get themselves into new clothes and sort the'r wounds out

Veer: tumhe ziyada choot lagi toh nahin na?

Vishva: naa....par tummhe lagi hai...ye dekho...(she points out a cut) aur akele chale teh is maksad pe

Veer looked into her eyes which were glowing with love for him

Both enter Ashtik as a married couple and look around the shops and stalls...trying to find a man who would help them discover the meaning to the markings they saw earlier

Vishva sees a bangle stall and cannot control herself and drags Veer with her to the stall

Vishva: arre wah kitni achi choodiyan hai...zara dekho toh ji


Veer is looking in another direction because he thought he saw some people who looked suspicious

Vishva: arre dekho toh

Veer: nahin...woh

Vishva: batao ye mere haath pe kaisi lagti hai

Veer: nahin kuch acha nahin hai

Vishva: KYA

Veer loses sight of the people whom he was suspicious of and looks down at Vishva who looked furious at him

Veer: nahin vish..vinisha mein toh...woh

Vishva: humme kuch nahin sun nah...bas humse dur hojao...tumhare pas humare liye koi waqt he nahin

Veer: nahin aisa nahin

Vishva walks off...Veer follows...he looks a littloe worried...vishva was really angry and he knew it was his fault...he should have given attention to her

Veer: arre vinisha rooko...mujhe maaf kardo

People look on as Veer grabs Vinisha's hand and stops her

Veer: mujhe maaf kardo...dubaar aisa nahin hoga...idhar ek bar dekho toh sahi

Vishva turns to face him...Veer looks apologetic

Veer: woh...ye...

he doesnt know what to say

He slowly takes Vishva's hand into his own and takes some bangles from his hand and slowly slides them into vishva's hands
His actions make Vishva's heart melt...without saying anything Veer says everything



amongst the small crowd which had gathered a woman comes forward

woman: bade kismat wali ho jo pati is tara maafi mang raha hai...isko maaf kardo

Vishva: is ne jab kuch galat nahin kiya toh maafi kaisi

Veer: kya matlab

Vishva: woh gaalti meri thi...

crowd slowly vanishes

Vishva: veer humme aisa bachpana nahin karna chahiye tha...woh maafi

she gestures for apologys by holding her ears

Veer looks as though he's thinking about it and then smiles at her

Both proceed towards a small room where an elderly man is sitting with a huge book infront of him

Veer and Vishva had found a man who would tell them the meaning of the markings they had spotted

Veer drew out the marking for the man who told them that it was the marking of a Dakoo organisation which had caused chaos in Rajgardh few months back and they only bring danger to the place...they have some old enemity with Rajgardh

VV look at each other

Vishva: vansh itne parishan kyun ho?

Veer: paata nahin...is nishan se kuch nahin pata chala...kya karo...kaise karo...mujhe itna bhi nahin pata mein kis taraf se khoj shuru karo un logo ki jo mere rajya ke dushmaan hai

Vishva: pashchim se...

Veer: par kyun

Vishva: mata ka mandir us taraf hai...aur ab mata rani he humari madat karegi

Veer: kal tak humme in dakoo ke bare mein sab jana na hai

VV look at each other and try to think of a way to find out about these dakoos


Precap: Veer captures on of the dakoos who gives him the name of the kingdom which wants to attack Rajgardh


Shona

Overall i think this part was pretty rubbish n apologise for it

Edited by **Shona** - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Lolz shona u got another wrd for thanx....!😆😆😆...abhi m smiling...nxt tym wont lev u...!😈

wooo...nishaan ka raaz...kewl..huh...! jus lyk a mystery....hav 2 go thru it...🤓...😆...!

Veer:vinisha...naam mein dum hai... ☺️☺️☺️....😍........!

wow...awesum dialogue...huh.....🤗....😉....!

lolz...da comment 4 da third tym....😆

ohh so dey were kidnapped puposely jus to find out whu da enemy iz...!!!😛😛😛

ya sure sure...VEER takes greattt decisions...naam wahi honge......!😆

awww....loved such dialogues in ur FF...vishwa's eyes...depicts immense luv 4 VEER....!😳😳😳

lolz...zara dekho toh ji.....!!!😆😆😆....

☺️☺️😍People look on as Veer grabs Vinisha's hand and stops her😍 ☺️☺️ >>>> hw chweeet......!😳....VEER truly noes hw to make vishwa happy...didnt sid nything jus make her wore dose bangles...😳.....!

aww both VV understnd each other a lottt.....!😃...Vishwa takes it ova 2 her...dat it wz her fault..!👏👏👏

OOoooo a dakoo organisation...😲...jus check it if itz nt frm IF itself...😆

Nao Dey Jus thinking...hmmm...shud go in pashchim direction only...🤔....!

Precap...dey captured dakoo n he givz da nme of da enmity kingdom olso....!...yay...me w8ing 4 d nxt part....!😳

the update wz awesum shona...👏......dunno y u didnt liked it.......!

post d nxt part soon..!😃😃😃

!🤗......Great going.......🤗!



~vinisha...!😳
living for...😳😳😳
❤️RAJAT ❤️forever
😍😍😍


Edited by vinisha_RAJAT - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#73
oh that was gr8 shona darling and loved veer and vishwa's chori pic it's sooooooooooo romantic 😳 do cont it's mindblowing. 👏 👏


esha
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Posted: 17 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: hiri

oh that was gr8 shona darling and loved veer and vishwa's chori pic it's sooooooooooo romantic 😳 do cont it's mindblowing. 👏 👏


esha



thanks esha for ur comments 🤗 ...atleast someone likes this part...i dont like it at all

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Posted: 17 years ago
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😆Wow Shona...I like this part most because of VEER VISHVA nok jhok😆👏👏

Achha to VV ne intetionally apne aap ko kidnapped karvaya so they can find their enemy...👏

but so sad..they couldnt founf any proper key...except that symbol😕

Veer is impressed to know that Vishva also noticed that symbol..😳

Arre ye kya?? Shona jaanbujhkar m...meri cute si chhoti si pyaari sis ko heart attack dena chahti ho??😆abhi to uski umar hi kya hai?? u know abt that phir bhi tumne veer se ye bulva diya??😲....kya naam bataya tha tumne apnaa?? hmmm Vinisha...Naam me dam hai....n woh bhi 3 times veer ne kaha!!😳😳😳

Vini, dear r u ok na??... Shona tumhe pata hai uski kya haalat hui hogi?? pata nahi apne dreams/shock me se bahar aayi hogi ya nahi!!😆😆😆

Chalo to VV finally ashtik village pahunch hi gaye...woh bhi phir se dress badal kar(kaash sagars bhi aisa karte😆)

Vishva worried for Veer as hurt a little bit...😳...n tease him...akele chale the maksad pe...apna bhi importance dikhati hai😆...cute scene betwn them😳

Vishva go to the bangle shop...hmmmm....bechaara veer😆

use kya pata tha ki suspicious logo lo dekhne me uski hi vaat lag jaayegi...to woh kabhi nahi dekhta un logo ko😆...Vishva is tooo much... 😉

Veer knew it was his fault...poor veer😆...vishva bhi use bhaav nahi de rahi...hmmm chahti hai ki woh use mnaaye....

haila! sab logo ne bhi dekh li unki nhok jhok😲....but veer to mannakar hi rahega na...because he is veer...i liked the way he convinced her😳...he choose some bangles for her...and finally she melt....I loved this whole part👏

arrey logo ne bhi samjana suru kar diya....maaf kar do...but Vishva's answer was un expectable😳...usne kuchh kiya hi nahi to.....👏

And she asked for apology...wow...aur woh hi kaan pakadkar!! usko apna bachpana samaj me aa gaya😆...chalo dono me sulah ho gayi finally😆

Finally they met that man who wud tell them abt that symbol👏 and they came to know abt some dakoos who hv old enimity with rajgarh😕

wow!! Vishva cleared Veer'sconfusion abt from which side they hv to strt their search....from temple of maata raani...khub socha vishva👏

Precap: Ohhhhh!! veer captures on one of the dakoos....who will give him the name of the state who is doing all this conspiracy against Rajgarh👏

I like VV khatti mithi nok jhok....veer manana vishu....n vishu make apology to veer....true love of husbund wife😳

Awesome, mindblowing and more than that....LOVELY....

/thanks Sweety🤗

Edited by jigs_b - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: hiri

why shona wy not?



its badly written n doesnt seem logical to make much sense
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Posted: 17 years ago
#77
thank u esha-wow u really think it was gd!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Tumko Shraddha di ki bimaari lag gayi Jotsi(ab sab naam badal rahe hain to u deserve a name naa 😳 )she said 1 partwas not gud but ppl liked it and so r u.It was so sweet and roomantic.VInidi got such nice pics 👏 She truly deserves 2 b Veer's patni 😉 That matarani part only shows VIshwa's immovable trust in GOD.Veer ka patent dialogue"naam mein dum hain"bechaara kya karega aisi patni mili hai jo baarbaar naam badalti hai 🤣 luved the way u continuously keep referring to part 1 😃 Choodiyan scene was sweetest 👍🏼
Keep it up 🤗 🤗 🤗
and dont dare to thank me 😈
luv u ❤️
Edited by rock 2 d2v - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: aandhanika

Love the update shona! 😉



aww thank u hun 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks for the lovely update Shona... 👏 👏 👏 one request pls. show some more luvy moments between VV in the next Part 😳 😃

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