Vishvaas 2 Part4:
Firstly my sincere apologys to all my readers for bring so late to post an update...i was really busy
nways thank u everyone for reading and commenting
brief recap: veer and vishva have new names( vansh n vinisha) they have new disguise. Vishva throws a tantrum but later apologises. VV figure out that some dakoos are giving information about their kingdom to other rival kingdoms. Both decide to go pashchim and find out more about the dakoos
NOTE: will add pix in a few minutes so do check out!! heres next:
Veer and Vishva get into yet another get up...this time being that of a rich man and his wife...they wore very expensive clothes and jewellery for this get up
Vishva: vee...mera matlab vansh humme phir bes kyun badhla
Veer: kyunki woh dakoo ne humme dekhliya hai...chalo
both stop in the afternoon and settle dowm with the yatri who have come from all parts of india to visit mata rani's mandir
Veer asks vishva to sit inside and that he will be back shortly
Vishva walks outside a while through the back
she is shocked
Her handsome king of a husband was making chappatiis
Vishva: ye app kya kar rahe hai
Veer: mein woh bas
Vishva: app shayad bhool gaye hai...apki shaadi ho chuki hai...ye mera kaam hai...aur app ek maharaj hai...ye apko shobha nahin deta...app uthiye...mein kar leti hoon
Veer: nahin agar hum maharaj hei toh ap humari maharani hai...humne apse is liye shaadi nahin ki takke hum apko apne saath har makshad par lejaye aur apki jaan khatre mein dalen...aur nahi humne apse isliye shaadi ki take ap humare liye in halaton mein roti banaye...
Vishva: par veer ...humari baat toh suniye
Veer: kya ap baatein he sunaiyengi ya kuch kaam mein haath batayengi
He has a naughty look on his face
Vishva looks outraged and get some flour and
Vishva: lijiye madat kar deten hai...
she n veer share some cute hubby-wife moments as they make food together n later eat
after lunch both go to mata rani's mandir to pray....while walking threw the back veer sees a blocked door...he points this to vishva who joins him and both go to the door and press their ears against it and hear some faint voices
they catch the word "rajgardh" "barbadh" "hum kar denge"
Veer and Vishva get a way to open the door and enter....it was like a dimly lit cave
inside were about 20 men all whom stopped on their tracks at the sight of the 2 visitors
the sardar of the lot gets up
sardar: kaun ho tum
Veer: tumhari maharaj veer aur Rajgardh se kya dushmani hai
sardar: kaun ho tum
Veer: tumhara dushman he samajlo
sardar orders his men to attack VV
VV are too well prepared and blast sardars men in all direction...VV had almost all of the men finished...sardar fled and onli one man was left...VV capture him and demand to know about the plan they are making against Rajgardh
Veer points knife at his neck
Veer: jaan pyari hai toh sab kuch bak do warna is duniya ko alvida keh do
The man stutters and then slowly begins saying everything
Man: humare tabile ke bhil ki rani ko maharaj veer ke dadaji ne mar dala tha aur tabse humare bhil rehte toh rajgardh mein hai...par kaam rajgardh ke dushmaan ke liye karte hai
Veer: rajgardh ke dushmaan he kaun
Man: woh..woh
Vishva: ek dungi na rak ke....
the man is frightens in squeals
man: Ujjain ke raja Pratap Singh
Veer: Ujjain aur Rajgardh ke beech aisi koi dushmani ke bare mein meine toh nahin suna ...
Vishva: lagta hai humme apke dadaji se baat karni hogi...ya phir nivriti maa se
Veer nods
The man looks horrified
Man: app...app maha...maharaj veer ho...sardar...SARDAR!!!
Veer trys to shut him up but he was screaming loudle...Vishva pierces the daggar into his chest
Veer looks at her...taken aback
Vishva: woh...humare liye khatra tha...
on the otherhand in Aryanagar both Parth and Sambha have reached safely
Dharam: arre Parth tum..Veer aur Vishva kahan hai...kya woh tumhare saath nahin aye..aur ye kaun hai
Parth: pranam maharaj Dharam...ye sambha hai...rajgardh ka kaas guptachar...
Dharam: sainik Sambha ko undar le jaye...araam ke liye
Sambha goes with the sainik
Dharam: bolo Parth veer kahan hai
Parth: woh apke paas ah rahe the par (parth recalls the whole story to Dharam)
Dharam: veer ko aise nahin jana tha...kuch sainik ko toh apne saath le kar jata
Parth: app toh jante hai unhe...woh talwarbazi mein kudh ke ilawa maharani vishva, apke aur mere siva kisi pe bharosa nahin karte....
Dharam: woh dono(vv) khabhi nahin badlenge
on the otherhand Nivi is coming inside the palace from the gardens when she has that akward feeling if being followed
suddendly she catches sight of a figure...Nivi chases the figure and finally catches the figure...the face is revealed to be Vrinda
Nivi remebers taht Vrinda was her nurse at around the time veer was born but suddenly she left a few days after Veer was born
Nivi: toh tum ho jo mera peecha kar rahi thi...itne dino se...kyun
Vinda doesnt reply
Nivi:BATAO!!
Vrinda: yahan nahin...kisi khufiya jage
Nivi brings her to a chamber where nobody ever came...
Nivi:kyun leh ayi ho mujhe yahan
Vrinda: rani maa apse kuch kehna tha...ek sach jise mein aur chupa na nahin chahte...
Nivi:kaunsa sach...kaisa sach
Vrinda: rani maa...17 saal pehle...woh tofani raat....meine apke haath mein ek bacha diya tha...ye bolke woh apka hai...
Nivi:haan woh mera bacha veer he toh hai
Vrinda: nahin woh apka beta nahin...apka bacha janam lete he marchuka tha...app ye janke zinda nahin reh pati...uss waqt ek shramik widhwa ko bhi beta hua tha...meine uska beta apke haathon mein deh diya tha
Nivi: kya!
colour from nivi's face fades away...everything seemed hard to take in....
Nivi: ye nahin ho sakta...jhooth hai ye
Vrinda: yehi toh Sach hai!!!
Nivi: mujhe abhi kyun baata rahi ho....tum jhooth bol rahi ho
Vrinda: rani maa...mere paas kuch waqt bacha hai jeene ka...mujhe bohat badi bemari hai aur bachna namumkin...mein is raaz ke saath chain se nahin maar paati ye jante hue ke ek shramik Rajgardh ke singasen pe behta hai
nivi: VRINDA....veer mera beta hai...
Vrinda: rani maa sach ka samna kijiye
Nivi: tum ye baat kisi ko nahin batao gi....ye raaz kisiko pata lagna nahin chahiye.....sumji
Vrinda: ap jaisa chahe
nivi lets vrinda go
She thinks about their conversation...nivi falls to the ground unable to come to terms with the fact Veer isnt her biological son
she wipes her tears slowly
Nivi: veer mera beta hai....koi sach...koi insaan...koi bhagwan ye nahin baadal sakta...Veer mera beta hai...sirf mera!!!
enjoy
Shona
NOTE: next update will be some tim in mid august!!Edited by **Shona** - 17 years ago