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Posted: 17 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: rock 2 d2v

Tumko Shraddha di ki bimaari lag gayi Jotsi(ab sab naam badal rahe hain to u deserve a name naa 😳 )she said 1 partwas not gud but ppl liked it and so r u.It was so sweet and roomantic.VInidi got such nice pics 👏 She truly deserves 2 b Veer's patni 😉 That matarani part only shows VIshwa's immovable trust in GOD.Veer ka patent dialogue"naam mein dum hain"bechaara kya karega aisi patni mili hai jo baarbaar naam badalti hai 🤣 luved the way u continuously keep referring to part 1 😃 Choodiyan scene was sweetest 👍🏼 Keep it up 🤗 🤗 🤗 and dont dare to thank me 😈 luv u ❤️



i dont know...i dont like this part
lol all shradhha di's parts are brillient
im glad u liked this part
yh the matarani showed vishvaas trust in god
lol yh Vishva has gone through 3 name changes
yh i do refer to part one often 😳
wow u liked the choodiyan scene which i think i completely messed up

lol shukriya chalie ga with lots of hugs 🤗

shona
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Posted: 17 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: meghaparti

Thanks for the lovely update Shona... 👏 👏 👏 one request pls. show some more luvy moments between VV in the next Part 😳 😃



thx megha for comments
i'll try n add a dose of VV in next part
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Posted: 17 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: jigs_b

😆Wow Shona...I like this part most because of VEER VISHVA nok jhok😆👏👏

thankoooo hun 🤗

Achha to VV ne intetionally apne aap ko kidnapped karvaya so they can find their enemy...👏


but so sad..they couldnt founf any proper key...except that symbol😕

yh they got themselves kidnapped intentionally but it was of no use

Veer is impressed to know that Vishva also noticed that symbol..😳

yes...she seems to have learnt to analyse and notice things like this by staying in his company most of the time

Arre ye kya?? Shona jaanbujhkar m...meri cute si chhoti si pyaari sis ko heart attack dena chahti ho??lol no intentionally😆abhi to uski umar hi kya hai?? u know abt that phir bhi tumne veer se ye bulva diya??😲....kya naam bataya tha tumne apnaa?? hmmm Vinisha...Naam me dam hai....n woh bhi 3 timesveer nekaha!!😳😳😳

yh thats his trademark dialogue wen she changes name and i had to use it

Vini, dear r u ok na??... Shona tumhe pata hai uski kya haalat hui hogi?? pata nahi apne dreams/shock me se bahar aayi hogi ya nahi!!😆😆😆

lol...i'll pay the bill if anything happen...like over dose of daydreaming 😆 😆

Chalo to VV finally ashtik village pahunch hi gaye...woh bhi phir se dress badal kar(kaash sagars bhi aisa karte😆)

lol kepping this in mind i get them to have costume change often 😆 😆 😆

Vishva worried for Veer as hurt a little bit...😳...n tease him...akele chale the maksad pe...apna bhi importance dikhati hai😆...cute scene betwn them😳

yh she wants to clear the fact taht she is not weak even though she's a girl from veer's mind and get her importance felt 😆

Vishva go to the bangle shop...hmmmm....bechaara veer😆

yh typical pati-patni situation

use kya pata tha ki suspicious logo lo dekhne me uski hi vaat lag jaayegi...to woh kabhi nahi dekhta un logo ko😆...Vishva is tooo much... 😉

yh veer ke vaat lag gayi n he had to compensate for not giving wife enuf attention

Veer knew it was his fault...poor veer😆...vishva bhi use bhaav nahi de rahi...hmmm chahti hai ki woh use mnaaye....

lol onli a typical hubby-wife situation where both are to be blame

haila! sab logo ne bhi dekh li unki nhok jhok😲....but veer to mannakar hi rahega na...because he is veer...i liked the way he convinced her😳...he choose some bangles for her...and finally she melt....I loved this whole part👏

yh everyone saw this and saw veer's exclusive style of biwi ko manana 😆...im glad u enjoyed this part nima 😳

arrey logo ne bhi samjana suru kar diya....maaf kar do...but Vishva's answer was un expectable😳...usne kuchh kiya hi nahi to.....👏

yh everyone felt taht veer was sincerly sorry 😆

And she asked for apology...wow...aur woh hi kaan pakadkar!! usko apna bachpana samaj me aa gaya😆... yh she understood n apologised n veer's immediately accepts her apologychalo dono me sulah ho gayi finally😆

yup

Finally they met that man who wud tell them abt that symbol👏and they came to know abt some dakoos who hv old enimity with rajgarh😕

there will be some history here 😳

wow!! Vishva cleared Veer'sconfusion abt from which side they hv to strt their search....from temple of maata raani...khub socha vishva👏

yh she is convince god will provide the way n decides to take route which leads to mata rani

Precap: Ohhhhh!! veer captures on one of the dakoos....who will give him the name of the state who is doing all this conspiracy against Rajgarh👏

yh now they will slowly discover teh mystery

I like VV khatti mithi nok jhok....veer manana vishu....n vishu make apology to veer....true love of husbund wife😳 im glad u liked this hubby wife romance 😳


Awesome, mindblowing and more than that....LOVELY....

Thank u so much nima 🤗

/thanks Sweety🤗


ur welcome 🤗 🤗 🤗

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Posted: 17 years ago
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im so sorry shona!! 😭 i read ur part but cudnt comment!
btw the part was really awesome! loved the chudiyan scene...and veer apologizing...aw! so cute 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: vinisha_RAJAT


Lolz shona u got another wrd for thanx....!...abhi m smiling...nxt tym wont lev u...! lol vini-wont cum up wid another code in future

wooo...nishaan ka raaz...kewl..huh...! jus lyk a mystery....hav 2 go thru it.........! yh theres a mystery thats solved soon

Veer:vinisha...naam mein dum hai... ............!

wow...awesum dialogue...huh.............! i thought u'd like it...lol me n nima were having concerns abt ur health...she thought u'd have a heart attack 😆

lolz...da comment 4 da third tym....

ohh so dey were kidnapped puposely jus to find out whu da enemy iz...!!! yes all veer's plan

ya sure sure...VEER takes greattt decisions...naam wahi honge......! lol i didnt wanna go through hassel of finding new names agen

awww....loved such dialogues in ur FF...vishwa's eyes...depicts immense luv 4 VEER....! yes vishva has very expressive eyes 😳

lolz...zara dekho toh ji.....!!!....

People look on as Veer grabs Vinisha's hand and stops her >>>> hw chweeet......!....VEER truly noes hw to make vishwa happy...didnt sid nything jus make her wore dose bangles........! yes he's an expert at biwi ko manana

aww both VV understnd each other a lottt.....!...Vishwa takes it ova 2 her...dat it wz her fault..! yes she realises the importance of their mission n that she is being immature n childish n accepts it

OOoooo a dakoo organisation......jus check it if itz nt frm IF itself... lol nope not from IF-IF dakoos love veer-these guys dont

Nao Dey Jus thinking...hmmm...shud go in pashchim direction only.......!yh they will go in that direction onli

Precap...dey captured dakoo n he givz da nme of da enmity kingdom olso....!...yay...me w8ing 4 d nxt part....! yh hopefully this part will be muxh better

the update wz awesum shona.........dunno y u didnt liked it.......! im glad u liked it vini...dunn ask me abt this part-it was horrible

post d nxt part soon..! hopefully today...if not then 2morrow for sure

!......Great going....... lol i wont thank u...jus give u hugs 🤗

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Girl_2007

im so sorry shona!! 😭 i read ur part but cudnt comment! its ok dear no need to apologise...as long as u read thats gd
btw the part was really awesome! thankooo loved the chudiyan scene...and veer apologizing...aw! so cute 👏 wow im glad u really liked those scenes

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: **Shona**



thanks esha for ur comments 🤗 ...atleast someone likes this part...i dont like it at all

hey i liked it tooo😛😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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@archana n seema- aww thanks hun!! im glad u guys like it!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hi shona

sorry for late reply

wow shona ur ff is too good

superb work...........keep it up

veer vishwa scences r really good & their nok -jhok..............

wht abt dharam and sia...........?????????😉😉

TEJASVI**

RAJAT TOKAS -TOKEN OF LOVE &FRIENDSHIP

U R SO cuteeeeeeeeeeeeeee RAJAT





ur smile makes my day..so keep smiling


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