Vishvaas2-The End-Page 46 Part 16 - Page 6

Hey Shona😊..... nice start........and i liked this part tooo 😃 u always come with good twists and turns 👏..... this post marriage story is really interesting...... 😳 something diff and new.😛 keep it up...... i thought something serious is gonna happen, but precap says some masti is there is store alone with VV's mission.😃

yayy congrats to myself 👏 I hav yet again dun it...4gotten 2 comment on part 1 🤢 🤢 I am sooo angry with me 😡 😡 but 1st part was awwesum and need 2 scan dictionary 4 adjectives 2 comment on 2nd part.U hav kept the romance qoutient barakarar in part2 and thanxx 4 that 🤗 VV scene with Parth was MAST 👍🏼 VIshwa aur VInisha ka kya coordination dhundha hai 😉 keep it up 😃 wen will next part cum

heyy is Sambha inspired from Sholay😳And 1 request...kya Sia kabhi disguise leke apna naam nahi badal sakti😍(I think u got me☺️)

Originally posted by: **Shona**

hey i commented on ur part 2 did u read my comment?

yes i did, but cudnt reply till today

thanks for commenting😃

Originally posted by: jigs_b

VINISHA!!😆😆😆....oh god!! Shona, i thought u were just making up...but u really named vishva..as vinisha👏Nahhh....She Wznt Kidding...It Wz Tru...!😳

arre abb hamari raajkumari vinisha ka kya haal hoga ye to soch leti...ab to tumhari story me woh sach me uske prince ke saath rehne wali hai!!😆😆...Lolz...Story Mein *Bhi* Uske Saath Rehne Wai Hai...😆....

Vini, r u ok na,dear??😆...Yuuppps Trying To b Okay...!😆😆😆

Originally posted by: jigs_b

🤗...ok Shona, i think u know that this hug is for u...but hey u desrve more tahn this😊

aww thank u...i'd like to give u as many hugs in return🤗

fabulous, fantastic, awesome...har baar naye naye words kaha se lau??😆

lol its ok if sagars can do so much recycling its ok for u to recycle a few words because they mean so much to me 😳

wow!! veer go alone without taking any soldiers with him!! he is really so brave.... sure isn trust on himself👏👏...ok new entry...Parth!! seems he has taken Dharam's place, i mean not emotionally but practically the protector for veer😛😛...n veer also trusts him as much as he trust on Dharam n Vishva...so gud...I m happy u give him other friend in absence of Dharam😊

yh definately while running a kingdom Parth is becoming one of Veer's best friends but he's not exactly the sme as Dharam because there will always remain that barrier of status-veer is the king n parth is just on of the men in his army n someone who helps him in running a kingdom 😊 like Saanvi, Parth is also one of my fav characters

And finally they hv reached at Ashtik gaon....oh wait...heres another new entry😆...shambha...rajgarh ka guptchar...poor guy...beated so badly😕

but i like ki in that state also he abeled to give the info abt all conspiracy against Rajgarh👏...oh god!!poor guy is still alive!!

yh very injured but alive n gets the message across correctly

finally veer decided to investigate about this whole matter...but asked to Parth leave from there with Sambha...and inform dharam abt this...he was also worry abt sambha's health and khatra which can harm him again...such a kind Maharaaj he is!!😛

yh a very large hearted maharaj indeed

ohhhhh!! he finally decide to take a new disguise of common man...but what?? Vishva also want to go with him as veer denied but she is Vishva😆

lol yes vishva toh vishva hai...how can she let veer go anywhere alone

how can she let him go alone??😳... and Parth is also very chalaak...smiled slowely as he knows about his maharaj and maharani...😆

yes Parth knows about the deep affection his king n queen share and he himself started beleiving in love only after meeting this couple...see his lady love will (re)enter soon as well

Vishva is a really dutiful wife...who care for him,love him as well as stands by him in any difficulties!!😳

they left for main Ashtik village, but what yaar??they robbed and bitten by some people😭

dont worry nothing serious...u'll find out in next part

veer said he is vepari and his name is vansh😉

and he looks at vishva not to say her real name...and what is this...?????????/

VINISHA!!😆😆😆....oh god!! Shona, i thought u were just making up...but u really named vishva..as vinisha👏

well i wanted new names for the disguise n they both had to begin with V n i guess i like the name Vansh very much so i used it...it was hard to choose-i had abt 10 names to choose from for Veer...as for Vinisha well i wanted a female name that began with V n we had a girl on our forum whyo is Our Rajkumari n her name begins with V as well n i thought it wud be gd if i used it...

arre abb hamari raajkumari vinisha ka kya haal hoga ye to soch leti...ab to tumhari story me woh sach me uske prince ke saath rehne wali hai!!😆😆

yh lol she will really love this...being wid her prince in my script

Vini, r u ok na,dear??😆

hope she is... 😆

those men throw them on floor...lol....

Back in Aryanagar, Nivitri feels somebody is following her..(But why is she in Aryanagar?? dont she live with veer at Rajgarh???)nope...if she wanted to live in Rajgardh why be in Aryanagar all these years...she doesnt want to go back to Rajgardh for the memories of her husband will always keep her sad instead she just stays in aryanagar...Veer is happy with this too a maid namedvrinda...but why she wan to reveal the truth after 17 yrs??😕and also she scared to do so!! why??/

well see vrinda has a disease n is dying n b4 dying she wants to tell niviriti everything

Precap: looks like veervishva.... khatti mithi husband wife nok jhok...and ruthna manaana😳😳😳...👏...interesting!!m waiting from now....😆

yh nok-jok after so long...cant wait til writing it

So overall fantastic episode!!👏👏 👏suspense making story more interesting...VV's post marriage love story is also rocking😳😳...love this part!!😉

thanks nima...thats a real boost...i was kinda worried abt VV love story after marriage but hopefully ppl still enjoying it... n yh suspense is still there 😆

keep it up Shona!!👏🤗

thank u nima ji🤗🤗🤗

Originally posted by: vinisha_RAJAT

Finally Am Here Wid My Essay Type Comment...! ok will mark the essay now!!

VEER N Vishwa Out Of Da Palace...! Oooo Parth...Bharosemand Sipahi....Huh....... yup Parth is really loyal n understanding not u mention brave too
Ya Dats Tru...Shud Take Atleast One Soldier In Da Secret Mission...VEER Iz Really Intelligent...! yup he is
Lolz...Yupps He Wud Surely Trust Vishwa On Handling Sword...As Both Of Dem Hav Sword Fyting Many A Tyms Be4 Olso... yh he has seen her handling wid the sword b4 n trusts her for sure wid a sword

Sambha...lolz...Kool Name......But Guptchar Injured......Ab VEER Wud B Tensed...

Ohhh So Dis Wz Da Twist...Nao VV Nt Going To Meet DS...... yh they wont meet just yet But Neva Mind We'll Hav Fun In Reading A Mission

Again A Twist....Whu Can B VEER's Enemy...??? tht is to be seen in future parts

VEER's New Name Vansh...Wah Wah.......Tumhari Bowl Wali Trick Kaam Aayi Shona......Da Name Iz Suiting Da Character...! yh the bowl trick worked n it was the name i really liked as well

Vishwa Iz Really Greattt In Terms Of A Gud Wife......She Noes Dat Ders Danger Bt Still She Noes Wat Her Duty Iz...Dat Iz To B Wid Hiz Hubby.......Hats Off Vishwa... she practically onli lives to be with Veer n if anything happens to veer then she really wont be able to live

Vishwa's Dialogue...Ssshh Bahot Bolta Hai VEER.......Yupps Truly He Speaks A Lottt....But Wateva He Speaks Iz Really Sweet N ''Dil Se'' yh i guess

Loved VEER's Dialogue For Vishwa...''Aap Kabhi Nahi Badlogi...''........He Noes Dat...N Same Can Go Wid VEER Hmself... yh both of them will always be da sme n always say dis to each other

Wowww....Great Script Shona...Vishwa's Eyes Speaks Da Luv For Her Hubby...Hw Tru......Eyes Speaks More Den Words... yes Vishva has beautiful eyes n they speak more than words do

VEER Wz Struck By Sum1 On Hiz Head......n Vishwa Wz Nt Able 2 Do Anything...!

Both R Badly Beaten...!...How Rude...!...That Man Na...!

Lolz...VEER giving Vishwa a dont say it look..!.

Vishwa Finally Names Herself As Vinisha...! yh she thought of taht straight away

Awww Shona...!

VEER N Vinisha....Vepari Hai...Kool...! vini i changed veer's name also...its vansh n vinisha 😆 😆 ...u just remeber urself n ur veer 😆

Da Man Threw VV On Floor N Den Still Laughing...! maybe veer has a plan up his sleeve 😆 anything can happen...maybe a new twist in the tale

Nivriti Wz Out N Sum Lady Follows Her...!....Wanted To Reveal Da 17-yr Old Secret...!...

Lolz...My Advice 4 Da Lady...Either Tell Her Da Secret Or Dun Follow Nivriti...!! i think option A may be fixed 😆

Wow...Precap.....VEER Calling Vinisha...!
Lolz...Hubby N Wife Mein Fyt Ho Gayi...! Hw Sweet...Choti-Moti Nok Jhok...! yh VV had a choti se hubby wife fyt n now Veer is paying for it 😆

Ummmm....Again A Suspense...! ...Why Iz VEER Apologizing...N Why Iz Rki Vishwa (Vinisha )...Angry...? wait n watch(read) hopefully quite alot of suspense will be over in next part 😳

Awesum Work Shona...! thankoooooooo

Looking Forward 4 Da Nxt Update...! hopefully up by friday

Superb Update Shona...! thanks once agen

Originally posted by: ppiyu

Hey Shona😊..... nice start........andi liked this part tooo 😃 thank u...im glad u like this toou always come with good twists and turns 👏 lol yh i try to..... this post marriage story is really interesting...... 😳something diff and new.😛 yh i tried something new...hopefully it'll be gdkeep it up...... i thought something serious is gonna happen, but precap says some masti is there is store alone with VV's mission.😃 yh serious syuff will happen but more masti n fun will happen