Vishvaas:PG85The End!-preview of VW2 pg1! - Page 15

Originally posted by: **Shona**

Veer goes to get a lep and goes to apply it on Dharam wen he catches Sia's eye and hands it over to her and leaves the room

hee hee 😆

Dharam was bleeding from his lip...Sia wiped it with her fingers
Dharam: reh ne do hoothon pe koi lep nahin lagta
Sia: lagta hai
Dharam looks puzzled. Sia moves over n kisses him

😆 + 😳 + 😳 + 😆

Dharam: agli bar dasiyon ko saath mat le ana

😆 Dharam..... war camp main baitke bhi? ahem...

Veer: nahin...socho agar tumhe kuch hogaya toh mera kya hoga
Vishwa: hum agar ye kahen toh

👏

Precap: Sanvi: aaj se Vishwa nahin...Rajkumari vishwa...

oooooo 😛

Originally posted by: ppiyu

Hi Shona, Loved ur FF..... and ur couples too 👏. Nice Work 😃.

Thank u ppiyu 😛

I liked that scene when Dharam and Shera are teasing Veer😆. Awww... it was a change .... in the soap its ulta always naa..... I wished we get to see something like ur parts in the soapme too really wanna see a scene where Dhram is teasing Veer😍. Also Veer-Vishwa is nice go😳.

And Sanvi... poor girl..... 😭Love triangle S-V-S.....but she is one perfect princess..... nice to know that she called herself Radha.😊 I think u r planning more sacrifices for her in future.😭

one big one is coming in the update which will be up in a while

Ur Sia utimately turned into a matured girl😳. Your Dharam-Sia couple is cute yaar..... That 'lep-applying' scene is cute 😳"He he... lep hoton pe lagta hai" 😆

yh i think she shud mature a bit in serious scenes but then agen she will always be a lil childish

Likethe wayu describe action..... short, simple and perfect.actually it was my first go at action and i dont know abt u but i thought it was pretty rubbish from me 😳 U killed brave warriers so early😕.....Aryaan and Shyam,brave and good they are but the point was that DV has competition and it was provided...Aryan n Shyam had to lose so that other things can take placeSorry.... but I did not get how war is related to the story?😕well this war will change Vishwa's life permanantly and there will be a death of one of my fav charecters Would love to read more of politics in ur story.😃

will try to add

Love the way u r proceeding with FF.....👏 Keep it up....👏 Waiting for next update😛

a big thank u ppiyu for reading and liking it and for ur comments...really appreciate that

a update coming up shortly

Originally posted by: lashy

thank u shraddha di for comments
the war thing didnt work out i think...but a major twist is to follow!!!

shona

a BIG thank u to ekta,archana,hiri and megha for read !!!

ok next part:

Veer goes outside the camp and towards the battlefield Vishwa following him closly behind...Dharam cudnt even stand properly so he had to take rest

Veer was in a killing mood and was finishing off people left,right and centre and Vishwa was doing a good job too

The king of Kinkpur was shattered at the news of Aryan's death was still putting up a fight

It seemed obvious that Aryanagar were going to win...Veer didnt even know why Kinakpur attacked Aryanagar...Kinakpur was small and the army wasnt so big and they were weak.... anyways he had to fight for his kingdom and he was doing well...Charusena was lost somewhere and the only people Veer cod make out who stood out were Viahwa and another young lad

Veer was now fighting quite a distance away from Vishva and didnt see that she had been cut badly below the neck...the young lad who Veer spotted earlier took Vishva to teh side and near the camp...

in the camp the person took off the helmet and cloth covering the face off to reveal it was none other than Rajkumari Saanvi...she begins nursing Shera's cut

Saanvi: shera...yehi haina tumhara naam

Vishva: tha ab Vishva hai

Saanvi: Veer se bohat pyar karti ho

Vishva: Rajkumari Saanvi apko kaise paata

Saanvi: tumhari ankhon mein saaf dikh taa hai

Vishva: ap yahan kya kar rahi hai

Saanvi: jo tum kar rahi ho

Vishva: hum yahan Veer ke liye aye hai...

Saanvi: hum bhi kisi ki raksha karne aye hai

Vishva: app talwar achi chala leti hai

Saanvi: tum bhi

they both smile

Vishva: humme chalna chahiye...veer akela hoga

They both go

they figure that the king of Kinakpur and Veer had been fighting and Veer disarmed him and now the king was bowing to Aryavardhan

The king: maharaj aryavardhan humme maaf kar dijiye....

Arya: uttoh rajan...

Veer and charusena were standing close by...Vishva and Saanvi join them

The king looks to the right at one of his men and nods slightly...teh man he nodded at takes his dagger and throws...aiming for Aryavardhan but it goes towards Veer

Saanvi spots this and moves before Veer...and the dagger gets her right in the stomach...and she is about to fall when Veer catches her

Veer: SAANVI

Veer pull the dagger out and pierces it in the king's heart...he figured all this was a plan...the army of Kinakpur dispearses teh new of their loss and kings death and run away

Veer with Saanvi in his arms sits to the ground with Aryavardhan,Vishwa and Sanvi's father gathering

Samar singh: Saanvi...ye tumne kya kiya

Sanvi: pitahji...ye humari saheli hai...Vishva....humari akari icha hai ke...ap isse godh le aur isse ...Sumaiya ki Rajkumari aur humari jaga de...humari akari ichha

Vishva: nahin...rajkumari ji...mein sirf Vishva hoon apki jaga mein kaise

Saanvi: aajse Vishva nahin par Rajkumari Vishva...kyun pitahji...humari icha

Samar singh: teekh hai...agar apki yehi icha hai toh ye aajse humari beti hai...

all are crying

Veer still has sanvi in his arms

Veer: ye tum ne kya kiya

Saanvi: hum yahan...is..liye aye..teh..ke....agar tumhari maut...aye to ...ageh ba..badh kar...hum usse...gal..galle lagga le...khushi khushi...

Veer is crying now

Saanvi: Veer...Vishva..achi...ladk..ladki hai....

Saanvi was really struggling to tlk n all

Veer: saanvi...kuch nahin hoga......

Sanvi: Ve..veer..hum.....tu..tum..s..se..pya....pyar.

Saanvi was silenced forever in Veer's arm

Veer: nahin...Sanvi ootoh....SANVI

he cried at the thiught that some like Sanvi can die

Samar singh let out a Cry...Aryavardhan had tears in his eyes

Vishwa too was crying...Dharam some how managed to get there with support and saw what had happen....a few tears came o his eyes too

Sanvi's last ritual's were performed that night....she looked so incrediably beautiful even though there was no life left in her...her face seemed to be full of a glow of life and it appeared as though she wud wake up any minute now and give a million dollar smile

Her dad was crying uncontrolably....Vishwa too was crying....though she and Sanvi didnt know each other that well..there was a bonding between them...a link that joined them which was Veer and Saanvi's giving nature had won over all Vishwa's ill feelings towards her...she had made a homeless Vishva into a princess

Veer recalled all their moments together...he knew they weren't made for one another but he did want sanvi to be his friend....her last words rang in his ears so clearly...they were bearly louder tahn a whisper but he heard it

Precap:
Samar singh: rajkumari Vishva hum chahte hai ke app Rajkumari baan ne ke tor tareke sikhe

enjoy

shona

its gr8 shona
👏 plz continue

Shona..... so quick 😃.... nice part.... 👏

Wow now shera as Vishwa..... would be a rajkumari👏. What a twist.. nice story.😃 I think more humor is ahead.😛

And why did u kill Sanvi yaar. I feel bad.😭 Mein usse aur sacrifice aur uska dil aur tutate hue dekhana chahti thi.... oh.. i m sounding sadist, but she was so perfect and intelligent... u know perfect for Veer, but also vishwa is perfect. Anyways... i like the way u ended her part and gave nice turn to ur story. Kee p it up 👏 dear.

"Saanvi was silenced forever in Veer's arm " ..... such a touchy sentence. 🤗

oh wow taht' was great shona cant wait for the next part...pls. post it soon 😃 & I know I shouldnt sya this but I ma glad that now only veer & Vishwa would be there in the story 😈

awwwwwww... I had tears in my eyes whn Sanvi dies n her last words to Veer 😭 I loved her character .. It was really unexpected her death now to see Vishwa learning to be a rajkumari.. I am looking forward to it 😊 but no more deaths n sadness please 😭

Originally posted by: ektay11

its gr8 shona
👏 plz continue

thank u ekta 🤗
yep im working the update now 😛

Originally posted by: ppiyu

Shona..... so quick 😃.... nice part.... 👏

thank u piyu 🤗

Wow now shera as Vishwa..... would be a rajkumari👏. What a twist.. nice story.😃I think more humor is ahead.😛

yh with Vishva's journey as a princess there will be

And why did u kill Sanvi yaar. I feel bad.😭 Mein usse aur sacrifice aur uska dil aur tutate hue dekhana chahti thii cudnt...i she is so nice and all but i wanted a major twist in the story...a death that no one wud see comin...her true sacrifice for Veer.... oh.. i m sounding sadist, but she was so perfect and intelligent... u know perfect for Veer, but also vishwa is perfect. Anyways... i like the way u ended her part and gave nice turn to ur story. Kee p it up 👏dear.

thank u

"Saanvi was silenced forever in Veer's arm " ..... such a touchy sentence. 🤗i wanted a good way of ending her charecter n i wanted it filmy style..in the hero's arms...nways im gonna miss writinbg abt her

thanks piyu for u commments 😛 n keep reading n giving my feedback