Vishvaas:PG85The End!-preview of VW2 pg1! - Page 16

Originally posted by: meghaparti

oh wow taht' was great shona cant wait for the next part...pls. post it soon 😃 & I know I shouldnt sya this but I ma glad that now only veer & Vishwa would be there in the story 😈

next part coming up soon megha
i like veer n vishva as a couple but sanvi was onli there to add spice to their storyline...see Veer's mom wud never let him marry a person like Vishva but what Sanvi has done is made her into a princess...Vishva will now have Nivriti as a mother figure for her and also now Vishva is no longer homeless

Originally posted by: bhuvana3

awwwwwww... I had tears in my eyes whn Sanvi dies n her last words to Veer 😭 I loved her character .. It was really unexpected her death now to see Vishwa learning to be a rajkumari.. I am looking forward to it 😊 but no more deaths n sadness please 😭

me too was very upset writing sanvi's death scene...Vishva n DV track with Sia also will be a funny n cute to watch

yh no more death or sadness will come

really nice story thanks and gud job shona

Shona Wrote:
next part coming up soon megha
i like veer n vishva as a couple but sanvi was onli there to add spice to their storyline...see Veer's mom wud never let him marry a person like Vishva but what Sanvi has done is made her into a princess...Vishva will now have Nivriti as a mother figure for her and also now Vishva is no longer homeless

😃 .....Welll now I understand the logic behind Saanvi..... 😆 Well I must say Shona u are great script writer...Pls. join the sagarss & give them ur ideas 😆

ok next update:

All Sanvi's death rites had been done...the chooth was gone and now Samar Singh was going to leave for Sumaiya.
Samar Singh and Aryavardhan were tlking about Vishva

Arya: abb Vishva ka kya hoga

Samar: hum usse godh lenge...humari maharani bohat saal pehle humme choodh kar chali gayi(she died) aur humare jeene ki vaja thi Sanvi...humari ekloti bachi....humne issi liye dusari shaadi nahin ki...ke Sanvi ko maa ka sukh koi aur na de paata...Sanvi ki har ek icha ko humne swikara hai aur ye toh uski akiri icha thi

Arya: par Samar zara socho...tum uss ladki ko jaan teh tak nahin

Samar: par sanvi janti thi...Sanvi sumaiya ke liye acha he karti...uske paas maangne ko toh bohat kuch tha par usne Vishva ko he maanga...iski vaja sirf Sanvi jaanti hai aur humme pura yakeen hai ke uska faisala sahi hoga...hum Vishva mein he Sanvi ko dhund lenge....

Arya: teekh hai jaisi apki marzi...waise bhi Vishva ache sanskaro wali lagti hai...Samar usse ek bar mil lenna


on the other hand Niviriti was talking to Vishva:

nivi: beti tumhare kandan mein kaun kaun hai?

Vishva: koi nahin...hum choote teh tab maa guzar gayi aur kuch dino pehle pitahji bhi...hum akele hai

Nivi: nahin aisa maat kaho...hum toh hai

A dasi comes in

Dasi: Rani ma ke jai ho...Rani maa Maharaj Samar singh ne Rajkumari Vishva ko bulaya hai

Vishva: hum ate hai

Vishva takes Nivriti's leave and goes to Samar

Vishva: Maharaj apne humme bulaya

Samar: haan beti...hum tumse kuch poochna chahte hai?

Vishva: ji poochye

Samar: app sanvi ki akari icha ke bare mein toh janti hai...aur hum bhi yahi chahte hai ke app Sanvi ki jaga le...kya app Sumaiya ki Rajkumari aur humari beti banegi

Vishva hesitates but then on seeing Samar's tears agrees

Vishva: teekh hai pi..pitahji

She touches Samar's feet and takes blessings

Samar: hum chahte hai ke app Rajkumari ban ne ke tor tarike sikhe...hum chahte hai ke app Ambika maa ke gurukul ja kar unki sishya bane...kya app jayengi

Vishva: haan hum jayenge

Samar: toh hum apko kal Sumaiya le jayenge...praja se milne aur uske badh apke jaane ka intazam karenge

Vishva: shukriya

Vishva leaves from there

Dharam was too busy being nursed by the vaidji

Veer on the other hand is in his room a little upset still when Prabhali(sanvi's maid)comes in

Prabhali: kya mein undar ah sakti hoon

Veer: haan..aye...

Prabhali: Rajkumar veer

Veer: sirf Veer

Prabhali: veer...Sanvi meri bachi ki tara thi...woh yudh pe anese pehle teen khat mujhe de gayi thi...ek mere liye aur do tumhare liye...mein woh khat tumhe dene ayi hoon

Veer takes the letters from her hand

She exits from there quickly..hiding her tears

Veer looks at the first letter

ok i've written it in english

Veer
What can i say to u
i dont want to hurt your feelings but
i want to also tell u mine
i love u and will do til my last breath
i know ur destiny is with someone else
which is fine by me
i only want to meet the fortunate girl once
and if i cant then u atleast give a letter which
is enclosed with this one
i know that i wont survive much
because when my real kundali was made
by the priest...he told me
how little time i have
i have tried to do everything i can
before my life draws to an end but
i have a few more wishes
my first wish is u and Shera get married
as soon as possible
i also want u to help my father in every
problem he has...he has no one with him
and
one last thing....i dont know how
much of importance i am to u
but for me ur my whole world...
and for the sake of friendship Veer

dont forget me...Veer i was jking
i know bad joke but i've never been gd at
comedy...it was always u

now the time has come for a final farewell

Yours Truely

Sanvi


a tear drops out of Veer's eye as he recalls Sanvi smiling


Precap:

Arya: DV tum dono aur Agni ko Rajya vidyale beja jayega...Ambika Maa ke Gurukul ke paas


Enjoy
n do comment

Shona

That was absoluately heart wrenching update it was amzingly writen by you shona thanx can't wait.

lovely yaar
im thinkin of writin a story just lyk urs 😆

its soo nice shona 😳
i felt bad to read letter from sanvi 😕
😭 😭 😭

waiting for next update... 😊 vishwa is going to gurukul and DV also going there..... 😛 wat abt Sia???
if she also came there it will be soo nice 😳

its Lovely shona.. trust me part 25 n 26 were the BEST so far in ur fanfic.. I 😭 at Sanvis letter n I cant wait for the ambika gurukul days.. 😛 Once again thanks for introducing a beautiful n immortal character of Saanvi.. 👏
Yr fan fic gets better n better with every part.. Keep it up 👍🏼 👏

very nice shona 👏 I really like Vishwa's console to Saanvis father & how emotion veer became reading sanivi last letter also I am eagarly witing for the next part as some nice romatic moments are instored for us I know 😉 😃