Vishvaas:PG85The End!-preview of VW2 pg1! - Page 17

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Posted: 17 years ago
amazing Shona I read it just now and was left speechless.You story is spellbinding.keep it up 😃 sweetheart 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
its awesome dear 👏
plzzz continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
@-megha-thx...if i joined the sagars i will catch their blooper disease 😆yep ur rite romantic parts to come ahead
@hiri-thank u
@aavshi-thanks...you shud write ur story,it'll be better than mine
@RT&MCfan-thank u...sia will join them v. soon
@bhuvana- thanks...me too liked parts 25&26 very much...sorry didnt wanna make u cry...me too loved sanvi's charecter
@spandita-thanks for ur compliments and keep reading
@ekta-thanks and i hope u like this part also


ok heres next:

A tear drooped out of Veer's eye on recalling Sanvi's smile

Vishva at the door

Vishva: Veer

Veer quickly wipes his eyes

Veer: ao...mein tumhare he paas aneh wala tha

Vishva: koi khaas baat

Veer: Sanvi janti thi ke uski maut ah rahi thi...usne ek sandesh likha tha tumhare liye

Veer hands Vishva the letter

Vishva opens it and read it

agen im gonna write the letter in english

Shera,
hum chahte hai ke tum hamari jaga lo
Sumaiya mein...pitahji ki zindagi mein...
humme ummed hai ke tum ye karogi

Jahan tak hum piitahji ko jante hai woh
tumhe Ambika Maa ke Gurukul bhejenge
jaise unhone humme bheja tha

Agar wahan jao gi tummhe sab samaj mein
ayega...praja kya hai...ek rajkumari ko kya karna chahiye...
aur yahan ja kar tumme Rani banne ke kuch
siksha miljayegi

baas hum chahte hai ke tum humari
kuch adhure armaan pure kardo
humare pitahji ko ek beti ke kami
khabhi mehsoos kar
ne mat dena

Veer ek acha rajkumar hai
aur tum dono ki jodi khob jamegi
...uski dost hone ke nate
ye zaroor kahoon gi...uske chehre
pe hamesha muskuratha rakhna...

Shera Sumaiya ke praja ko ek rajkumari
ki zaroorat hai

aur ek baat khabhi bhi apne apko
akela maat samajna...
meri pitahji tumko apni
beti ke tarha rakhenge

ab kya kahoon
umeed karti hoon ke tum
ye sab maan kar Rajkumari
bano gi

Sanvi


Vishva controlled her tears

Vishva: veer hum kal ja rahe hai...Maharaj Samar...pitahji ke saath Sumaiya aur wahan se Ambika Maa ke gurukul jayenge...Sanvi ki sari ichayen hum puri karenge

Veer: hmmm...abb kab milna hoga

Vishva: mein tumse dur he kahan ja rahi hoon...apne dil mein jakh lena...vishva hi vishva milegi

Veer: tum toh abhi se Rajkumariyon ki tarah baat karne lagi ho...Maa se mili ho

Vishva: bohat achi hai...sochti hoon ke agar is duniya ki har ek maa aise hai toh mujhe bhagwan ne ye sukh kyun nahin diya

Nivritri enters

Nivi: Arre Vishva tum yahan

Vishva: ji mein..woh

she glances at Veer

Veer: maa kya baat hai

Nivi: bade bhaiya tumko aur Dharam ko bulaya hai

Veer: ji

Vishva: ahh rani maa mein bhi chalti hoon

Nivriti is left alone thinking:

Nivi: kitni achi jodi hai...Veer aur Vishva


Dharam was much better now and cud manage to walk by himself

DV came to a room where Aryavardhan was standing...with agni and Jai

Arya: ao

Veer: maharaj...apne humme bulaya

Arya: rajya sabha ko lagta hai ke abb Aryanagar ke teeno Rajkumar ko Rajya Vidyale bhejna chahiya..ta ke woh Raja bane ka gyan sikh sake

Dharam: ye toh bohat khushi ke baat hai...kab nikal na hai aur ye vidyale kahan hai

Arya:kuch hi dino mein...ye vidyale Ambika maa ke gurukul ke samne hai

Veer smiles to himself thinking that atleast he will be closer to Vishva

On the otherhand Sia is back in Avail

S'sMum: Sia tumhare aur Harsh ke beech mein kya hua...woh kahan chala gaya

Sia: hum....woh...

Sia gets an idea

Sia: maa...woh maa....Harsh ne humare saath batamizi ki...woh

S's mum: kya

Sia: maa hum jhooth nahin bol rahe hai

After a continuation of of the conversation Sia mom said

S's mum: ye shaadi hum kudh todh denge...uski himmat kaise hua humari beti ke saath batamizi karne ki

Sia smiles to herself

Precap: Sia is also going to Ambika Maa's gurukul amd on seeing Vishva there:

Sia: tum!!


enjoy

Shona



Edited by **Shona** - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Awesome.. cant wait for gurukul !! no precap ? 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
that was really good keep up.


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Posted: 17 years ago
Awee that was great shona... 👏 Me toooo cant wait for the next part jaldi jldhi bhejo shona 😳 😳 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
bhuvana3 Precap hai to sahi tumne pada nahi lagta hai 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: meghaparti

bhuvana3 Precap hai to sahi tumne pada nahi lagta hai 😃

I saw that now Megha.. maybe i missed it or Shona edited it later on.. thanks for pointing out 😃 n my name is Bhuvana 😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
but I guess 3 added to it is more sweet 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: meghaparti

but I guess 3 added to it is more sweet 😆

okay 😳

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