Vishvaas:PG85The End!-preview of VW2 pg1! - Page 14

@ lashy:

so he doesnt know whether he likes vishva or saanvi? nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiii-confusion hogayi...on one side he has vishva who he likes very much but the Saanvi is liek the second princess he has come across(1st being Sia)and he is totally bowled over by her attitude and personality
😛

Saanvi is so intelligent = the author who is writing about he should be intelligent = the author = shona...

aww thank u...i never thought of it taht way 😳 😆


omg... thank you yaar.. awwwww... me planning to make a dedicated FF waala thread... so all the scripts/FFs (your's, pragy's, akanksha's, mine etc) would all be included in that.. and it becomes easier for people to search for whichever one they want... hai na... yep thats a gd idea...

it was great shona.


❤️hiri❤️

where is the next part 😃 I ma waiting sweetie 😆

hi shona!! love ur ff, i saw it and startes reading in the middle, but it was so interesting that i started to read it all and i have to congrats u 👏 👏 👏 bcz making me read is a very difficult task 😉
its a fff (fantastic fan fiction) 😆 and i like it very very much, especially the romantic parts 😳
but i have a doubt, do u update ur ff every day, once a week, or when u are able to do so???
once again, 👏

thank u everybody who reads and follows my FF-need to think of a name naa? any suggestions?

ok the next bit:

DV takes orders from Aryavardhan and take his blessings
Nivriti does their arti n they take her blessings too

Nivi: vijaybhava

The boys were given orders to join Charusena where they will shortly be joined by Maharaj of Sumaiya maharaj Samar Singh-Saanvi's dad

as the war began Charusena(CS)asked his part of the army to attack

CS: akraman

and all hell broke loose...there were swords clashing left rite and centre....

Dharam was fighting with the elder prince of Kinakpur, Aryaan who was very attached to his father and kingdom...he was pretty gd with the sword
Veer was fighting with the queen of Kinakpur's newphew Shyam who was a brillient swordfighter


Dharam pulled off a breathtaking stunt and sliced Aryaan in the arm who winced slightly and came back by cutting dharam on the hand and shoulder

Veer on the other hand was successful in injuring Shyam on the shoulder,leg,ribs and only getting injured slightly on the upper arm

Shyam was advancing towards Veer with his sword when Veer ducked turned back and pierced the sword through Shyam...writing his end

He looked over at Dharam who was putting up a brillient fight against Aryaan....Aryaan ducked and dodged every attempted blow Dharam gave him....Dharam kept his mind cool even though he was getting fustrated at his misses...he knew Aryaan's reflexes were getting slower and slower bacause of his wound and loss of blood so he continued forcing Aryaan to use every bit of energy left in him then out of no where Dharam struck Aryaan in the chest leaving Aryaan damaged beyond repair....Aryan's last words were:

Aryan: Aryan ka apko antim Pranam pitahji....Jai...Jai bholenath

Veer smiled to himself at Dharam's victory but was slightly upset at a brave warrior's death(shyam n Aryan)

Veer saw how injured Dharam was and helped him into their army camp

They recieved a shock there to see Sia there

Dharam: Sia tum yahan kya kar rahi ho

Sia: hai bhagwan...ye..ye ghaw(wounds)...tum teekh to ho?

Dharam: haan hum teekh hai

Veer: kya teekh hai...dekho kitna koon beh raha hai

Veer goes to get a lep and goes to apply it on Dharam wen he catches Sia's eye and hands it over to her and leaves the room

Sia applies the lep on Dharam's hand...crying ...Dharam looks at her and she looks at him

Dharam: ye kya Sia...tum roh rahi ho

Sia: kyun na roye...tumhe kitna dard ho raha hai

Dharam: haan ho raha hai...tumhare aasoo dekh kar...Sia hum aise kahin ghaw ka sakte hai par tumhare asoo nahin dekh sakte

with his not so injured hand he wipes her tears off...she continues appling lep...she was pressing down harder that shud be causing Dharam pain

Dharam: ahh

Sia: woh galti hogayi...kisi ko pehle kahbhi lep nahin lagaya naa

Dharam: haha mazak kar raha hoon...aur shayad ye dekh raha hoon ke mujhe taklif mein dekh tumhe taklif hoti hai

Sia looks at him

Dharam: ek baat toh poochna he bhool gaya... tum yahan kaise?

Sia cuts some of her dupatta and ties it on Dharam's forehead to stop the blood

Sia: hum Avail ke seema par he teh...Devi maa ke mandir mein Dhaaga bandh ne aye teh jab yudh ke khabar hui aur hum tumse milne aah gaye...

Dharam was bleeding from his lip...Sia wiped it with her fingers

Dharam: reh ne do hoothon pe koi lep nahin lagta

Sia: lagta hai

Dharam looks puzzled

Sia moves over n kisses him

just then to spoil teh moment a dasi calles

Dasi: Rajkumari Sia

Dharam: ye tumhari Dasiyan hamesha galat waqt pe ati hai

Sia smiling stands up and goes to exit when Dharam catches her hand

Dharam: agli bar dasiyon ko saath mat le ana

he smiles and she blushes and leaves

on the other hand

Veer is looking through sword...trying to find a better one when he sees a hand holding a sword...he looks up...its Vishwa

Veer: Sher...

Vishwa: nahin humme humara naam badal diya hai...Vishwa

Veer: Vishwa...naam mein dum hai

they both laugh

Veer: kapde bhi badal diya hai kya

she was wearing a male war type of attire

Vishwa: hum yudh pe ahh rahe hai

Veer: nahin sh..Vishwa tum nahin ahh sakti...

Vishwa: kyun...hum ek ladki hai iss liye

Veer: nahin...socho agar tumhe kuch hogaya toh mera kya hoga

Vishwa: hum agar ye kahen toh

Veer: tum bohat zindi ho

Vishwa: tum bhi kaam nahin

Veer: teekh hai...chalo

Vishwa: Veer...agar humme sach mein kuch hogaya toh

Veer: mein jab tak zinda hoon tumhe kuch nahin ho sakta...mein tumhe itni jaldi nahin jaane dunga

Vishwa: rooko...she does tilak for him and hands him the talwar and says
Vishwa: Dushman par jeet pah kar he is talwar ko apne bayan(the case of the sword) mein wapas rakh na

Veer leaves from there taking the sword from her hands

Vishwa: koi ladki isse pyar kare bina reh kaise sakti hai 😳


Precap: Sanvi: aaj se Vishwa nahin...Rajkumari vishwa...

Enjoy

Shona

Originally posted by: Girl_2007

hi shona!! love ur ff, i saw it and startes reading in the middle, but it was so interesting that i started to read it all and i have to congrats u 👏 👏 👏 bcz making me read is a very difficult task 😉
its a fff (fantastic fan fiction) 😆 and i like it very very much, especially the romantic parts 😳
but i have a doubt, do u update ur ff every day, once a week, or when u are able to do so???
once again, 👏

aww thank u sweetie for reading n liking my FF
i update wenever i can mostly daily though 😛

hat was sooooooooooooooooooooo romantic shona thanx alot keep it up ma8.


❤️hiri❤️

i really loved the veer and vishwas's part it was out of world thanx.

❤️hiri❤️

Hi Shona, Loved ur FF..... and ur couples too 👏. Nice Work 😃.

I liked that scene when Dharam and Shera are teasing Veer😆. Awww... it was a change .... in the soap its ulta always naa..... I wished we get to see something like ur parts in the soap😍. Also Veer-Vishwa is nice go😳.

And Sanvi... poor girl..... 😭 Love triangle S-V-S..... but she is one perfect princess..... nice to know that she called herself Radha.😊 I think u r planning more sacrifices for her in future.😭

Ur Sia utimately turned into a matured girl😳. Your Dharam-Sia couple is cute yaar..... That 'lep-applying' scene is cute 😳 "He he... lep hoton pe lagta hai" 😆

Like the way u describe action..... short, simple and perfect. U killed brave warriers so early😕..... Aryaan and Shyam, Sorry.... but I did not get how war is related to the story?😕 Would love to read more of politics in ur story.😃

Love the way u r proceeding with FF.....👏 Keep it up....👏 Waiting for next update😛

lovely update I am waiting for the next part very eagerly Shona.... 😳 Post soon 😆 😆 😆