Vishvaas:PG85The End!-preview of VW2 pg1! - Page 13

that was just outstanding keep up the gr8 work.


❤️hiri❤️

its soo nice awesome 😳
plzzzzzz do continue soon 😛 👏

shona waiting where is the next part 😆

ok next part
oh yh from now on i will call Shera Vishva:

Dharam and Sia stand on their ground

Harsh: tumhari itni himaat ki tum humse bewafiye karo

Sia: himmat nahin marzi...hum tumse nafrat karte hai...

Harsh: kis ke liye..iss ke liye

He points at Dharam

Dharam: ungali niche kar varna

Harsh: varna kya...kar kya sakte ho tum?

Harsh pushes Dharam

Dharam: BAAS

Dharam raises his hand n Harsh moves forward to attack Dharam...who dodges and gives Harsh blow after blow...Harsh trys to give Dharam a kick but Dharam catches it in air n shows Harsh how its done

Sia is watching all this amazed at Dharam's ability to fight n laughing at Harsh being beaten

Harsh accidentally pushes Sia while trying to escape from Dharam and this further angers Dharam who is now after Harsh's life....Harsh trys to use Sia to stop Dharam who pulls Sia out of Harsh's clutches and then runs after Harsh and gives him a final blow before Harsh runs away saying

Harsh: hum humare pitahji ke saath ayenge...harsh ke saath dushmani tumhe bhari padeh gi Sia

Dharam: agli bar Sia ko ankh uttah kar toh dekho...

Sia: Dharam tum teekh toh hona

Dharam: tum teekh ho...

sia nods

Dharam: toh mein bhi teekh hoon

He goes over n hugs her

Sia: ek baat bole

Dharam: bolo

Sia: hum...hum jab bhi tumhare saath hote hain tab humme esaas hota hai...surakshit hone ka....

Dharam: sia hum tumse bohat pyar karte hai....tumhe kisi aur ki hone nahin denge....

Sia: hum yahan nahin reh na chate...tumhare paas rehna chahte hai...hum kyun aaj bhag kar mangni nahin kar sakte

Dharam: nahin Sia...chup kar kyun...hum kule amm tumse shaadi karenge...tab tak humme ye duriyan bardash karni padehgi-He looks sad at this thought


Sia: humare paas ek yojna hai... jo humme aryanagar ke seema ke paas leh ayegi

Dharam: kya?

Sia: hum jab ayege tab tumse milenge...

Dharam: baatao toh sahi

Sia: humme char din intazar karaya toh tum bhi todha intazar kar lo...

Dharam gives her a small kiss and departs on his horse...turning back to only see a smiling Sia

Sia goes back to the palace and tells her mom about a mandir near aryanagar where all unmarried girls go to tie a dhaga for their happy married life and seeks permission to go there tomorrow...her mum agreed and questions abt Harsh as he came there to pray with her but Sia replies she doesnt know where he went

DV meet up in the morning...Aryavardhan has summoned them and Jai n agni to the Courtroom

Dharam: kya baat haai pitahji?

Arya: paas ke rajya,Kinakpur ke maharaj ne yudh ka elaan kiya hai...Yudh ki tayari ki jaye

Once everyone is over the shock n starts bustling around Arya comes to DV

Arya: ye tum dono ka pehla yudh hai iss mein yaad rakh na ke praja ke liye jaan dena raja ka farz hai

Veer: aryanagar ke liye jaan dena humari khush kismati hogi


DV in a room getting ready for war
Veer: yidh mein ja rahe ho...kahin daar toh nahin lag raha

Dharam: daar...kis baat ka...ayranagar ke liye yudh karna humara sapna hai

They smile...hug n leave for war

Precap: Sia is curing Dharam's wounds and Vishwa is arming herself for war even though Veer is telling her not to


enjoy n leave comments

Shona

thanks so much Shona very nice 😳 Keep up the good work... 👏 👏 Actually cant wait for the next part " Sia is curing Dharam's wounds 😳 and Vishwa is arming herself for war even though Veer is telling her not to. 😳 😳" Just imagine if Vishwa gets injured in War & Veer is all worried...aweee that will be cho chweet 😃

Originally posted by: meghaparti

thanks so much Shona very nice 😳 Keep up the good work... 👏 👏 Actually cant wait for the next part " Sia is curing Dharam's wounds 😳 and Vishwa is arming herself for war even though Veer is telling her not to. 😳 😳" Just imagine if Vishwa gets injured in War & Veer is all worried...aweee that will be cho chweet 😃

2morros part will include action but romance bhi jari rahe ga

also Sia's charecter will mature alot in next few parts but she will always remain a childish at heart

yayyyyy me here... 😳

though i felt that Veer was angry with Shera for a relatively small reason (poor thing only asked him what he was doing na😭...koi bhi itna gussa to karta apne bf se agar woh aise kisi aur ladki ke saath flirt kar rahaa hotaa) awww but i liked that we got to see Shera was sitting and crying.. you really feel sorry for her. and most importantly if it were not for that.. we wouldnt get to watch the most wonderful Veer bedroom waale scenes... me thoroughly enjoyed reading them... they were soooooooooo cute... 😳 i dont even know what to say.. 😳

i really liked these dialogues

Shera: toh kal kyun humme Veer se milne abhi jaana chahiye

omg this was so sweet -> looking at it she cud tell it was Veer's room because of the colour schemes and the way everything was laided out.
There was a big painting of DV and there was Veer's sword

hmm i didnt understand this bit.. why does he say achchi dost? he was very forward with her when they first met and spent time... so why is he suddenly taking many steps back? i am sure i am the one who hasnt understood it 😳

Veer: Shera mein....Shera mein kya...Shera tum ek achi dost ho

Shera: Shera iss ka matlab samaj gayi

i loved these dialogues

Veer: aur ek baat...jo haath Veer ek bar thamle usse zindagi bhar nahin choodh ta

Veer: agar maa ko paata chal gaya toh khabhi nashta karne layak nahin rahenge hum...jao

this was sooooooooo funny... omggggg 😆Shera: ladki mein hoon aur fikar tumhe itni kyun ho rahi hai

Veer: woh.... woh...izzat meri bhi ja sakti hai.

Dharam: woh humne kaha tha na humme uss din ka intazar hai jab tumhe pyar ho jaye ga...aur aaj dekho tumhari haalat pyar karke

awww and one really feels sorry for saanvi....btw....saanvi is so intelligent (which means you are very intelligent😛)

and i liked this dialogue too..

Veer: hmm...ek baat bolun...tum mein kuch hai jo mujhe kudh ki yaad dilati hai

Originally posted by: lashy

yayyyyy me here... 😳

though i felt that Veer was angry with Shera for a relatively small reason (poor thing only asked him what he was doing na😭...koi bhi itna gussa to karta apne bf se agar woh aise kisi aur ladki ke saath flirt kar rahaa hotaa) he gets angry coz he expected Shera to support him in his lie to Saanvi not doubt him
awww but i liked that we got to see Shera was sitting and crying.. you really feel sorry for her. and most importantly if it were not for that.. we wouldnt get to watch the most wonderful Veer bedroom waale scenes... me thoroughly enjoyed reading them... they were soooooooooo cute... 😳i dont even know what to say.. 😳

i was inspired by the rain scene that came in Dulhan recently with Amar n Divya in the rain n i started imagining Veer n Shera ... n as for the sneaking in the bedroom...well its normally the guy who does that but i wanted it the other way round

i really liked these dialogues

Shera: toh kal kyun humme Veer se milne abhi jaana chahiye

omg this was so sweet -> looking at it she cud tell it was Veer's room because of the colour schemes and the way everything was laided out. There was a big painting of DV and there was Veer's sword

hmm i didnt understand this bit.. why does he say achchi dost? he was very forward with her when they first met and spent time... so why is he suddenly taking many steps back? i am sure i am the one who hasnt understood it 😳

Veer: Shera mein....Shera mein kya...Shera tum ek achi dost ho

Shera: Shera iss ka matlab samaj gayi

ok yh its confusing but like he was forward first but now he doesnt want to admit its love he doesnt want to show that he loves her very much because first he wants to see how much she likes him...also at this time i guess he's not as chilled out as he was at the begginning with the confusion in his mind as to weather he likes saanvi or shera/vishva

i loved these dialogues

Veer: aur ek baat...jo haath Veer ek bar thamle usse zindagi bhar nahin choodh ta

me too love this dialogue...i came up with it while i was on holiday...just needed a perfect scene for veer to say it

Veer: agar maa ko paata chal gaya toh khabhi nashta karne layak nahin rahenge hum...jao

this was sooooooooo funny... omggggg 😆Shera: ladki mein hoon aur fikar tumhe itni kyun ho rahi hai

Veer: woh.... woh...izzat meri bhi ja sakti hai.

Dharam: woh humne kaha tha na humme uss din ka intazar hai jab tumhe pyar ho jaye ga...aur aaj dekho tumhari haalat pyar karke

i really want to include more scenes where Dharam teases Veer n this is just one of them...cant wait for it to happen in the show

awww and onereally feels sorry for saanvi[Bi love Saanvi's charecter but still she's the one who is suffering teh most at the minute....btw....saanvi is so intelligent (which means you are very intelligent😛)Thank u...but kaise...how does it mean im intelligent...im not saying im not 😳

and i liked this dialogue too..

Veer: hmm...ek baat bolun...tum mein kuch hai jo mujhe kudh ki yaad dilati hai

me in BOLD^^^
A big thank u for ur comments shraddha di🤗

thanks for liking my dialogues...

also i love ur FF alot n well its an inspiration for me now

shona

Originally posted by: **Shona**

2morros part will include action but romance bhi jari rahe ga

also Sia's charecter will mature alot in next few parts but she will always remain a childish at heart

soo nice yar😳👏 waiting for tommorro vishwa and veer scence....😳

vishwa....its nice name but its boys name😕......Veer chahtha tha ki ohh shera se sherani bane...😳par ab firse boys name rakdi😊😆

Niceeee yar cool😳👏

🤗 awwww shona

ok yh its confusing but like he was forward first but now he doesnt want to admit its love he doesnt want to show that he loves her very much because first he wants to see how much she likes him...also at this time i guess he's not as chilled out as he was at the begginning with the confusion in his mind as to weather he likes saanvi or shera/vishva

so he doesnt know whether he likes vishva or saanvi? 😲 nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

i really want to include more scenes where Dharam teases Veer n this is just one of them...cant wait for it to happen in the show

awwww yes that would definitely be a treat to watch 😃

....saanvi is so intelligent (which means you are very intelligent😛)Thank u...but kaise...how does it mean im intelligent...im not saying im not 😳

Saanvi is so intelligent = the author who is writing about he should be intelligent = the author = shona... 😛

A big thank u for ur comments shraddha di🤗

biggggggg hug to you too...

also i love ur FF alot n well its an inspiration for me now

omg... thank you yaar.. awwwww... me planning to make a dedicated FF waala thread... so all the scripts/FFs (your's, pragy's, akanksha's, mine etc) would all be included in that.. 😳 and it becomes easier for people to search for whichever one they want...😊 hai na...