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Posted: 17 years ago
Wow, so romantic veer & shera
great work shona 👏

Keep it up 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sarajee123

acha i forgote to ask .. who is saanvi??? sorry yaar i havnt read ur previous parts ... sop have no idea abt her ?? is she in luv with veer ??? 😕




Thank u for reading my ff n im glad u like it


Saanvi is a princess n Aryavardhan wants Dharam to marry her but as Dharam is in love with Sia he doesnt want to so Veer meets her as Dharam n trys to reject her but sanvi falls for him but hasnt told him and know Veer has told her that him nor the real Dharam can marry her as they are already taken
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: **Shona**




Thank u for reading my ff n im glad u like it


Saanvi is a princess n Aryavardhan wants Dharam to marry her but as Dharam is in love with Sia he doesnt want to so Veer meets her as Dharam n trys to reject her but sanvi falls for him but hasnt told him and know Veer has told her that him nor the real Dharam can marry her as they are already taken

thanks 🤗

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Posted: 17 years ago
that was just mind blowing shona i liked when veer says to shera that i love you, i hope he says it in drama also can't wait keep up the gr8 work thanx. 😃


❤️hiri❤️
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Posted: 17 years ago
thank u everyone 🤗

ok heres the next part:

a tear trickled down Saanvi's cheek
she wiped it off immediantly and turned to face Veer

Saanvi: hum iss baat ke izzat karte hai ke apne humme sab saaf saaf baata dia...hum ye shaadi nahin hone denge

Veer: toh kya app shaadi ke liye mana kar dengi

Saanvi: nahin...aisa karki dono Rajya ke sambandh bigad sakte hai

Veer: toh hum kya kar sakte hai

Saanvi: waise appke bhai kahan hai

Veer: woh Sia se milne gaya hai...Sia aur Harsh ke kundali aaj milane wale hai...toh shaadi ka mahurat aneh ke badh woh kuch yojana banayenge

Saanvi: humare paas ek yojana hai...hum joothi kundali bana kar panditji ko denge aur uss kundali mein likha hoga ke hum mangalik hai aur ye shaadi tal jaye gi aur dono rajya ke sambandh bhi nahin bigadenge

Veer: kya tumhe pura bharosa hai ke ye yojana kamyab hogi

Saanvi: hmm ye Rajkumari Saanvi ki yojana hai...nakaam ho hi nahin sakti

Veer: hmm...ek baat bolun...tum mein kuch hai jo mujhe kudh ki yaad dilati hai

Saanvi: ab chaliye...humme yojana par kaam bhi karna hai

Veer goes off n Saanvi goes to her room...Prabhali is there

Prabhali: kya hua Saanvi...kya tumne apne dil ki baat baata di

Saanvi runs n hugs her tightly...crying

Saanvi: Prabhali...humme apna pyar panne se pehle he kooh diya

Prabhali: kya?

Sanvi narrates all that Veer had said

Sanvi goes over to a painting she had finished this morning...it was of Veer...Veer standing away staring at her...

Sanvi got the painting and ripped it up

Saanvi: woh bohat bura hai...bohat bura hai...hum usse nafrat karte hai...woh bohat bura hai

Prabhali: Saanvi shant ho jao....

she holds sanvi in a hug

Prabhali: dekho...shayad usse tumse pyar ho jaye...ya phir shayad tumhe koi aur Rajkumar mil jaye jo Veer ya Dharam se accha ho

Saanvi: ye mumkin nahin hai....par hum bhi Saanvi hai...hum humari puri zindagi sirf usse ki ban kar rahenge...Saanvi aaj se Veer ke Radha ban ke rahegi...kya hua agar woh mujhese pyar nahin karta par mein usse karti hoon aur mera pyar usse har khatre se bahar rakhe ga

Prabhali: par kyun saanvi...kyun barbadh kar rahi ho apni zindagi

Saanvi: pyar hai he itna ajeeb...kya kya nahin karata....app ye baat(the plan n veer's lie) kisi ko nahin baatayengi...apko humari kasam


on the otherhand it was almost nightfall when Dharam reached Avail

Sia instantly felt his presence and turned around and saw him

He got off his horse and advanced towards her

She almost made a run towards him where he stood arms opened
She hugged him tightly

Dharam: Sia...eeya kya hua?

Sia: humme chood kar ab maat jana...hum uss bewaf bandar se Shaadi nahin kar sakte

Dharam: mein aisa kuch nahin hone dunga...barosa hai mujhe pe

Sia: kudh se ziyada

Dharam: toh phir chinta choodho aur muskura do

n they hug again

Harsh sees them n shouts:

Harsh: SIA!!!

Sia and Dharam turn to see who it is...on seeing Harsh there Sia holds onto Dharam even tighter


on the otherhand Shera is at some mandir with the panditji

Panditji: beti tum kyun apna naam kira karma iss umar mein karna chahati ho

Shera: hum ek nayi zindagi shuru karna chahte hai

Panditji n Shera sit by the fire n he starts reading some mantras and ties dhaga on Shera's wrist

Panditji: abb tumhara naam kya hoga?

Shera: Vishva(the world/Earth)Veer ki Vishwa(veer's world)

Panditji does more mantras n all is complete now Shera has changed her name from Shera to Vishwa

Precap:
Veer: yudh shuru hone wala hai...kahin daar toh nahin lag raha hai

Dharam: kis baat ka daar...ye humara sapna hai ke hum Aryanagar ke liye yudh kare


Explaination for Shera's name change:
Well see Shera wants to start things afresh now and so has changed her name,attire and whereabouts.
She hates her father and so doesnt want to live with the name and identity he gave her.
She has told her father she is going on a mission n has left him permanately for Veer and for her own good


Enjoy

Shona




Edited by **Shona** - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow Shona.. you are really prompt.. I was just going to PM you n pester u to post the next part.. Iam reading it now n will tell u how I liked it 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
Read it.. I liked Dharam n sias scene together ... She trusts him soo much 😳 n I love the new name that u gave shera.. Vishwa, Veer ki Vishwa 😛 Is Saanvi going to turn negative ?? I loved this part.. next part tomorrow naa ? 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey sona great story 👏 Pls. continue...But I didnot like saanvi falling for veer...yaar veer aur shera dono ki love story mein Saanvi naam ka twist laana zaroori hai kya 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: meghaparti

hey sona great story 👏 Pls. continue...But I didnot like saanvi falling for veer...yaar veer aur shera dono ki love story mein Saanvi naam ka twist laana zaroori hai kya 😆



trust me this twist will give Shera alot to learn from
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: bhuvana3

Read it.. I liked Dharam n sias scene together ... She trusts him soo much 😳 n I love the new name that u gave shera.. Vishwa, Veer ki Vishwa 😛 Is Saanvi going to turn negative ?? I loved this part.. next part tomorrow naa ? 😛



naa,like i sed i can neva make Saanvi negative coz shes liek this ideal princess
Actually i want a name beginning with V that wud be unique and fit in with Veer so Veer ki Vishwa makes sense n i like the name

Dharam n Sia's love grows wen they spend time without each other coz its then wen the know how much they need each other

yep i guess next part 2morro...i have it all planned out yaar...dying to type it up

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