Samyukta of D & V - 'It sinks in'- Part 3 - Page 2

Lashy, you've done a great Job once again!! To tell you the truth, I skimmed through it breify! Tommorw i will sit down and read it in detail..and Give you my view! 👏

lashy, 🤗

I am running out of words to describe how beautiful you write, ⭐️ 👏 the way the scenes are described, its mindblowing. You are a very talented person. 😊 All I really really want is for you to be the scriptwriter of DV and PRC. 😊

I loved the way 👏 👏 👏 the way you :

• described the meaning of samyukta and the basis of the story
• the scene where the child runs into her grandmothers arms and show she holds veers tears, drags them back into the house - that is so touching and bring out emotions from all of us 😊
• when sonu calls them "bhaiya" and how veer asks if she wants to come and live with them and dharam also trying to find out which soldiers mistreat them. 👏 👏 👏
• how veer is in a hurry to take all the copper coins to gives them to the grandmother.
• how Veer climbs on to Dharam's horse, seats himself in the front and rests Dharam's head on his shoulder. shows how protective they are of each other and the brotherly love between them 😍 😍
• the scenes between veer and nivrit and how dharam always defames and denames him. Also how at the mention of dharam eating food made by the queen makes him jump out of bed 😆 😆 😆 I can so imagine veer saying this 😍
• how queen feeds dharam, and getting distracted by veer's comments. 😆 😆 Also veer enjoying being fed food 😆and when the queen says that she wants him to be married 😍😍
• the way you have described sia ⭐️ and how the queen finds the state of her room 😆 so cute scenes

fantastic! i love the way u write... 👏

again WOW!!!!!!!! 👏 👏 👏
beyond that i cant say anything....
i'm speechless 😊
btw r u a professional writer?

Shraddy,...... does it again 👏

I loved the way you give a proper character sketch of each person!! So much so that the problems/phobias/gaity of each of them become our own.

there is no evident favouritism with regards to scenes or characters.

I loved the way u enslave the words, who in turn obey all ur orders 👏 👍🏼

thank you diyaa.. sannu ... sara 😳

arshoo and ishoo... me stay away from trying to tutor 😆 but ill definitely be glad to help😛.. thank you soooooo much for those comments.. 🤗

Originally posted by: anjalipranav

really nice story....... i think u shud come up wid more chapters nxt time .... so tht i can read on for hours... after involved into ur imagination, its difficult to come out frm tht

those words of yours really touched me anjali 😳 very very much so thank you sooooooo much for them 🤗

Originally posted by: aashi parekh

U SERIOUSLY SERIOUSLY shud think about cumin to India n becumin the crative writer for Dharam Veer!!!
Needless to say...fantastic as usual..loved d way Dharam n Veer are realisin the plight og their praja...n ofcourse d humour bit was wow...where dey learn abt their gettin married n all!!!
seriously cool...plzz take d next flight to India!!

😆 sagars.. hmmm lets see... i am all in for it.. if they are happy too... and glad you liked the story yaar 😳

awesome lovely, completely brilliant, lashy u hv made even dh look respectable even though he is still stuck with his arya upbringing
and rajat says his ambition is to become a director, so now the script is gettig ready, actor wo khud hai, heroine ke liye mein hoon bas ab action bolne ki der hai 😆 😆

Originally posted by: kirantarani2007

awesome lovely, completely brilliant, lashy u hv made even dh look respectable even though he is still stuck with his arya upbringing
and rajat says his ambition is to become a director, so now the script is gettig ready, actor wo khud hai, heroine ke liye mein hoon bas ab action bolne ki der hai 😆 😆

Good Idea Kiran,No one can be more fitting that Lashy to pen down his stories😳and the whole thing will be super successful thing because of it's brilliant script writer,Shraddha😉,But why have u come in between😕these two genius😆

BTW,Shraddha,as of always.............BRILLIANT!!👏👏

thank you khushi, dil, bhuvi, sephora... 🤗 thank you for these encouraging words....

awww kuna no yaar i am not a professional writer... but i take that question as a complement if you wouldnt mind 😳

Originally posted by: dee7

lashy, 🤗

the scene where the child runs into her grandmothers arms and show she holds veers tears, drags them back into the house - that is so touching and bring out emotions from all of us 😊 awwww thank you 😳
when sonu calls them "bhaiya" and how veer asks if she wants to come and live with them and dharam also trying to find out which soldiers mistreat them. 👏 👏 👏
how veer is in a hurry to take all the copper coins to gives them to the grandmother.
how Veer climbs on to Dharam's horse, seats himself in the front and rests Dharam's head on his shoulder. shows how protective they are of each other and the brotherly love between them 😍 😍awwww thank you for this one.. i am hoping to see some scenes like this in the serial too
the scenes between veer and nivrit and how dharam always defames and denames him. Also how at the mention of dharam eating food made by the queen makes him jump out of bed 😆 😆 😆 I can so imagine veer saying this 😍 😃-> yes
how queen feeds dharam, and getting distracted by veer's comments. 😆 😆 Also veer enjoying being fed food 😆and when the queen says that she wants him to be married 😍😍
• the way you have described sia ⭐️ and how the queen finds the state of her room 😆 so cute scenes😆 i know reminded me of my school days and my mom

Originally posted by: minnie2308

Shraddy,...... does it again 👏

I loved the way you give a proper character sketch of each person!! So much so that the problems/phobias/gaity of each of them become our own. awwww 😭 me emotional now

there is no evident favouritism with regards to scenes or characters. i hope i am able to maintain this throughout... do let me know

I loved the way u enslave the words, who in turn obey all ur orders 👏 omg i was in fits when i read this... you intelligent one 😆👍🏼

omg! lashy...........
u r superb wrter....

i think someone frm sagar's tent shud read dis story....!.....

i think u shud apply for creative head post!.. 😳