Samyukta of D & V - 'It sinks in'- Part 3 - Page 3

👏 i know i'm a bit late here but great JOB 👏
how do u do it???

Originally posted by: kirantarani2007

even dh look respectable even though he is still stuck with his arya upbringing
and rajat says his ambition is to become a director, so now the script is gettig ready, actor wo khud hai, heroine ke liye mein hoon bas ab action bolne ki der hai

kiran sab main khud ki faida bhi doondthi hai nishu.... tabhi tho 😆

anyway thank you so much nishu.. and kiran... and anu...im glad you were able to read it.. thank you sharon.. all your support keeps me going 😳

wow.. its wonderful lashy,👏
few parts i just loved were:
1)veer agreeing to give everything to sonu. Dharamis also ready to help.. but keeps everything in limit n stops veer from giving more... Excellent introduction abt their different characters even though both r close friends.. Also u didn't make dharam look bad in this too👏 👏
2)Interaction between nivriti and veer. Veer complaining that dharam is a problem for him.. but immediately asking abt his health.😛
3)Queen feeding dharam and veer, and the reaction of DV when their hear her talking abt dharam's marriage😃
4)Sia's entry- much much better than how sagars have shown. 👏
Pls continue with the 4th part soon.. waiting for it 😳

kool one...i juss found it
itzz amazing 😊

howw the world did i miss this third update😲😔
Gosh....ab dekha itzz alreadyy been 3 pages and i neva saw it😔

I juss loved ur update,it was jus splendid👏
speciallyy the last part of Sia paintin🤣kooool girl!!!..juss tooo lovlee for words!!!!!😆

I find the seriousness of Sharmik's more in ur update than in the actual soap.In DV i rarely feel nething for Shrmiks😕i mean they are somehow not showing it too effectivly
But ur update,i can picturise the scenes so clearly.

This is the way the actual story shud hv gone,showing emotions very well.

The scene were Veer is eating frm his Aunt is so nice..😆i cud picturise it all reallyy well....😳

I am saving it all in myy PC,asking permission for copywrite (agar nahi diya thi bhi chupke se copy karoongi😆)

Originally posted by: lakshmim_84

wow.. its wonderful lashy,👏
few parts i just loved were:
1)veer agreeing to give everything to sonu. Dharamis also ready to help.. but keeps everything in limit n stops veer from giving more... Excellent introduction abt their different characters even though both r close friends.. Also u didn't make dharam look bad in this too👏 👏
2)Interaction between nivriti and veer. Veer complaining that dharam is a problem for him.. but immediately asking abt his health.😛
3)Queen feeding dharam and veer, and the reaction of DV when their hear her talking abt dharam's marriage😃
4)Sia's entry- much much better than how sagars have shown. 👏
Pls continue with the 4th part soon.. waiting for it 😳

Originally posted by: minz~12

howw the world did i miss this third update😲😔
Gosh....ab dekha itzz alreadyy been 3 pages and i neva saw it😔

This is the way the actual story shud hv gone,showing emotions very well.

The scene were Veer is eating frm his Aunt is so nice..😆i cud picturise it all reallyy well....😳

I am saving it all in myy PC,asking permission for copywrite (agar nahi diya thi bhi chupke se copy karoongi😆)

how did you miss the third update? cos busy spamming about rajjy - thats why 😆

awww thank you both about all the detailed complements.. with analysis… ... 😳 i wil keep them all in mind when i write the next update.. as it helps know what attracts whom.. 😳

o wow! this is like reading a very very interesting and beautiful novel!

siya's entry was ultimate!

imagine what it would take for me to repay for feeding us such delicious bits 😳

🤗 I really have no words to describe your ff which moves in such a sensible way!! I really love the importance you gave for Dharam's character and his concern for shramiks unlike the version of Sagars

brilliant 👏 👏 👏

Wow Shradhha 😃

Loved it 😳 Amazing work 👏, I love ur writing skills 😉.

Loved ur Dharam and Veer and their brotherly love..... ohh so cute 😛 and Sia's entry😆😆

thanx nehu, ppiyu...prcrules 🤗

Originally posted by: *Jr.Nancy_drew*

imagine what it would take for me to repay for feeding us such delicious bits 😳

🤗 I really have no words to describe your ff which moves in such a sensible way!! I really love the importance you gave for Dharam's character and his concern for shramiks unlike the version of Sagars

brilliant 👏 👏 👏

Originally posted by: *Jr.Nancy_drew*

imagine what it would take for me to repay for feeding us such delicious bits 😳

🤗 I really have no words to describe your ff which moves in such a sensible way!! I really love the importance you gave for Dharam's character and his concern for shramiks unlike the version of Sagars

brilliant 👏 👏 👏

it is no doubt that veer is the ultimate hero of the serial.. but i do feel that unless you actually grow to like dharam.. it is not possible to feel their agony if and when they have a misunderstanding... 😳

though now-a-days i do feel that dharam's character is having some meat in it unlike the starting episodes (except when he keeps drooling at sia for no reason)

and please abhy dont extoll me so high 😳