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Posted: 16 years ago
bola : jaan bol to tere liye chand le aayoon..........
aandhanika thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
Shera blushes and suddenly remembers that they have to reach the mehal befor Dharam or Sia go up...
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Posted: 16 years ago
@ aandhanika - Haila...tum kabse one line likhne lagi..? 😲😆

@ Shikhar - i noe pehle mujhe sabko yaad dilaana padhta tha..😕😆...bt wat to do...ab zyada likhne ki habit ho gayi hai...😉

Shera - '' VEER...jaldi chalo hame mehal b toh wapas jaana hai....bahot der ho gayi hai...agar Dharam aur Siya uth gaye toh mahal mein hungama ho jayega...'' 😕
VEER - ''haa chalo chalte hai...mai toh bhool hi gaya tha...''
He carries he up and let her sit on the horse...and then himself sits at d back and starts riding...

They soon reaches the mahal and Shera was almost drooling because of tiredness and was almost slept...VEER quietly takes her down in a comfortable way so dat Shera duznt wake up and takes her to the room..! As soon as he reaches the door, sees Siya has already woken up and is worried for Shera..

[ Seeing VEER coming towards the room carrying Shera, Siya says - '' VEER kaha they tum...

VEER giving her the action to be quiet as Shera was sleeping and he didnt wanted anyone to disturb her sleep...Shera was laid down on bed by VEER...




Siya continues but in a low voice - ''Ananya ko kya hua, yeh theek toh hai na...Hum yaha har jagah Ananya ko dhundh dhund ke pareshaan ho gaye..''


VEER - '' Siya bhabhi maaf karna mai aapko bata ke jaa sakta tha par Ananya mujhse milne ke liye pehle hi Mahal se itni raat ko akele jaa chuki thi mujhe bata ke..isiliye kisi ko bina bole mai isko dekhne chala gaya aur sahi waqt par pahuch gaya...''😕

Siya - '' ey bhagwan yeh Ananya bhi na...! sahi waqt par..? matlab..?''

VEER - '' woh sab mai aapko baad mein bataunga, agar Dharam uth gaya toh bekaar mein pareshaan ho jayega..''



Siya - '' Haa theek hai tum jao...'' 😊
VEER stops at the door and says ...'' woh bhabhi aap Ananya ka khyal rakhna aur isko samjha bhi dena...Yeh abhi bilkul ek bachi ki tarah hai, bina soche samjhe mere liye kuch bhi kar deti hai...Pagal hai thodi, yeh bhi nai jaanti agar Ananya nai hogi toh VEER ka kya hoga ! aaj bhi apni jaan khatre mein daal di thi......pata nai aaj isko kuch ho jaata toh mai kya karta...''

Siya - '' Tum darro mat VEER mai Ananya ko samjha dungi...woh tumse bahot pyaar karti hai na, isiliye bina soche samjhi kuch b kar baithti hai..''

VEER - '' jaanta hu...😛...acha bhabhi mai chalta hu..''
Saying this VEER leaves !😳


RT_vinisha....!🤗
living for...😳😳😳
❤️RAJAT❤️forever😍😍😍


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Posted: 16 years ago
Siya smiles
Sia: bhagwan kare kisiki nazar na lagey inke pyar ko aur ye hamesha is tara pyar mein khush rahe
Veer heads back to the room where Dharam is pacing the room restlessly
Dharam: veer kahan teh tum ab tak
Veer: dharam mein woh...
Dharam: kya veer?...hum kabse parishaan teh...
Veer: Dharam shant ho jaom, mein teek hoon
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Posted: 16 years ago

@Vinisha,

No yaar there is nothing of such... i thought that i would come back latter to come and make it a bitt longer but in the mean time i had fallen insleep (cause it even was very late here) Dharam- veer SHANT HO JAO khe bache... kya tumhe pata hai mein kabse tumhara search kareha hoon... looks like i have to open a detective accentie next time.. Veer started laughing Dharam- mein mazak nahi kar raha hoon.. waise bhi mujhe tumse kuch baat karne hai
Veer laugh even more
Dharam- veer kabhie to serieuse ho
Veer- theek hai theek hai mein jaanta hoon khi tum itna parishan kyun hoon ... sia bhabhie se nahi mila na ... kuch din kha toh baat hai.... sabre karo
Dharam agrees and gives some soort of blushing smile
Veer (being a bitt naughty) - are wah mujhe pata nahi tha khi mere bhai larkiyon khi jaise sharmata bhi hai... yeh batao shaadi khe din kya tum sharmaoga yah phir babhie
Dharam gives Veer a not so funny look
Veer- accha baba batao kya kehna chata tha tum?
Dharam- woh maa ne kaha hai that we have to go to the nearest kingdom to select a magalsutra for our future wife and that only the nearest kingdom in the west has the best and beautifull mangelsutra's
Veer- but why do we have to go can't the seller come here?
Dharam- nahi... we (the boys only; Dharam, veer, Agni and sanjam) have to go and select the one we want and the girls may not see it befor the maraige
Edited by aandhanika - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

veer." well main shera ko ek pet bhi gift karna chahta hoon"

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Posted: 16 years ago
dharam--accha?? to tum sia se poochh lena...ladkio ko kya jahiye vo to sia se behtar kaun jan sakta hai
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Posted: 16 years ago
veer: Paagal ho gaye ho kya? Jaante nahi ho ki meri Shera tumhari Siya ke tarah nahi hai?
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Posted: 16 years ago
dharam--haan vo to hai...ek ex-dakoo aur ek rajkumari....koi baat nahi....tumare pyaar ne usse thoda to Sia ke jaisa bana diya hoga...
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Posted: 16 years ago
veer: ohhhhhoooo.........
mujhe pata hai use kya dena hai.....
ek white rabbit........

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