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Shona

@shona.

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+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#691

gr8 part vini

i'll continue in a bit

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Shona

@shona.

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+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#692

ok so heres next: (vini im realli lazzzzzzzzzy so i didnt find pix so its not as gd as ur update)

Veer and shera are about to leve when Niviriti stops them

Niviriti: arre haan bacho ek aur baat...tumhari shaadi mein sirf teen din bache hai is liye aaj ke badh tum ek dusre ka chehra nahin dekh sakte

Dharam: kya?

Nivriti: haan...ye rasam hai beta

Veer(in undertone): ab aisi rasam kis budhu ne banayi

Niviriti: kuch kaha tumne veer

Veer: nahin toh

Shera surpresses laughter at veer's expression

they are all about to leave

Veer goes up to Niviriti and whispers in her ear

Veer: maa aaj toh mein Ananya ko sakta hoon na

Niviriti loudly replies: Haan aaj keh din tum apni Ananya ko je bhar ke dekh lo

Everyone laughs while veer blushes

They all go back to their rooms

Shera and Veer head to his room for a last meeting of their singlehood

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Vinisha

@-Vinisha-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#693

@ Shona - hailaa....its exacty like what i was thinking....😲😃...i mean that...wont c each other's face thing !😉

-all of dem hav gone soon after the ring ceremony while VEER n shera are still outside the hallroom...standing der looking at each other silently...Son after Dharam n Siya cums over there...😳

Siya - '' Kya hua VEER , kya ab Ananya k bina teen din b nai reh sakte...'' 😉
VEER [ in a low tone ] - '' ek pal b nai ''....

VEER turns back to look at Shera for Dharam was there to take him along wid Him...
Siya - '' Kya? ''
VEER - '' woh...kuch Nahi...''😕
Dharam - '' Chalo VEER bahot raat ho gayi hai..''
Siya - '' haa chalo ananya kal subah madir b jaana hai...''
Dharam n Siya hugs each other n Dharam takes VEER while Siya takes shera along wid dem...😉

Soon after Dharam n Siya sleeps...Shera was standing On the window seeing the moon...

Shera was remembering all the sweet memories wid VEER bt was feeling sad even for getting away frm Him for full 3 days......till they dont get married...
Jus then she gets an idea to meet VEER outside the mahal in jungle nearby if he agrees...but the problem was that she wasnt getting any waay how to tell this thing to VEER...
so she simple writes a letter to Him...
She looks for some sainik or daasi whu can giv dat letter to VEER,and finally gets one...
Shera - '' suno yeh sandesh Rajkumar VEER ko de dena''
Sainik - '' Kya kahu ....? hone waali Rajkumari ji ne diya hai..? 😉😆
Shera - '' tumse jitna bola jaaye utna karO''
Sainik - '' ji''
Sainik leaves and Gives the letter to VEER...VEER was first surprised that who it can b as shera neva wrote any letter before to Him...

but then Reads it...The letter says that To meet her [ shera ] in the nearby jungles where they used to meet and she'll reach there in a while...As soon as VEER reads it,he went Outside the Mahal running coz he knew its not safe for her to go out alone at this time...

VEER wasnt that xcited this time to meet her becoz he was more worried...
Shera was going In the jungles unknown of the fact that a group of dacoits might be following her...😲
Soon she felt as if someone is following her...😕...She turns n says ...'' Kaun hai waha''...no one answers...She starts walking...😊...Jus then those dacoits come in front Of her and stands around her!
Though she was brave enuf to fyt bt the dacoits were 4 in number and she was only one, and then felt helpless...😕
They saw her wearing the expensive and Royal jewelery and came 4ward to take it, bt shera 4 sure refused to give and started fighting with them...as soon as the first one was almost dead, the second one came forward and hold her hand tightly...Jus then VEER came running😳frm no where and kicked badly on the mouth of that person...

He was full of anger and was bout to burst like a volcano on the fact that how can anyone touch her Ananya...😡
VEER - '' Tumhari himmat kaise hui meri ananya ko haath lagane ki, himmat hai toh aao saamne..ek kadam b aage badha k dikhao tumhare paer [ foot ] kaat daalunga...
aao [ he shouts loudly ]
the other two men cums forward to fyt with Him...bt at that time even ten men at the same time cannot defeat Him...he plunged that sword hardly through that man...
and said [ 😳 ] - '' Koi bhi meri ananya ko haath nai laga sakta ''😡
VEER calms down as soon as he sees Ananya...her innocent face,she was full of fear at that time, standing aside irrespective of whats happening around,with corner of her Dupptata in her finger and standing still...
VEER comes over there and puts his hand on his shoulder and as soon as she sees in eyes of VEER,she bursted out in tears like a child who just got her lost mom back...😳😳😳

VEER hugged Him tightly and Shera felt Comfortable and Protective that as long as she's wid VEER no one can even touch Her...he walked along with her nearby just then he saw some firplace nearby...He decided to sit Over there for a while since Shera was not in a condition to walk and He wanted to talk with Her...
VEER taking her hand in his hand to apply some leaves medicine on her hand wich was wounded

and says - '' Tum theek toh ho na ananya..?''
She nods her head saying Yes...
VEER - '' Tumhe milna tha toh Mujhe batati na, mai kuch b karke kahi pe b milta...aise hi bas milne ke liye apni jaan ko khatre mein daalne ki kya zarurat thi....[ he raises his voice jus lyk a bit scolding ]....agar aaj mai waqt pe nai aata toh...? agar aaj tumhe kuch ho jaata toh..?
Shera makes a crying baby alike face...
VEER - '' acha acha rona mat...''
Shera puts her head on VEER's shoulder...

and VEER combs her hair wid his fingers...😳
VEER - ''Shera mai toh bas ye keh raha tha ki tumhe mahal se akele nai jana chahiye tha..aise bahot khatra hai Shera...mai apni wajah se kabhi tumhari jaan khatre mein nai daalna chahta...tum nai jaanti mai kitna darr gaya tha jab maine tumhara sandesh padha..''
Shera - '' agar jaan khatre mein nai daalti toh kaise mil paati aaj tumse..''
VEER - ''par yeh tareeka galat tha shera ...aaj agar tumhe kuch ho jaata toh mai kabhi khud ko maaf nai kar paata......Tum nai jaati tum mere liye kya ho...tum mujhe ek baar bolti ki tum mujhse milna chahti ho...saari rasme , kasme todh kar tumse milne aa jata...''
Shera remains quiet on understanding dat it was her fault this time...😕

VEER - ''accha chalo ab Mahal b toh wapas jaana hai na...aga Dharam ya Siya uth gaye toh musibat ho jayegi...''
Shera - '' Hmmm...par kaise jaayenge,Mere paanv [ leg] mein toh chot lagi hai...mai kaise chalungi...''
VEER stands up and give his hand to her and as she triies to stand Up, he takes her up in her arms and start walking...

VEER - '' aage nadi k paas mera ghodha [ horse ] hoga, fir usi pe jaayenge...theek hai..?😊''
Shera - '' haa...! Ummm VEER hume maaf kardo...hum aisa fir kabhi nai karenge, pakka ! 😭''
VEER - '' arre tumhe maafi maangne ki koi zarurat nai hai, mai jaanta hu tumne ye sab mere liye kiya tha, par haa aaj ke baad kabhi aisa mat karna...''
Shera agrees...😳

@ Shona...mera toh ho gaya...🥱...Lolz ab tumhari Turn..😉😆

RT_vinisha....!🤗
living for...😳😳😳
❤️RAJAT❤️forever😍😍😍

Edited by vinisha_RAJAT - 16 years ago

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Rashmi

@aandhanika

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#694

Veer with Ananya along in his arms reached the river where veer's horse was standing Shera then told veer that she wanted to wash her hands ... so veer agrees to go with her and also wash his face Shera- kya tumhe pata hai khi jab se mein tumhe mile hoon... i have been the happiest ever in my life... khaas aaj baba mere saath bhi hote Veer gives her a smile but in himself he thinks that shera is sad for not having here father by her side now when she is getting married Shera sees Veer worried and thinks something fast to change his mood

Shera- Veer do you know what i like doing the most

Veer- haan mere liyee kheer banana 😛

Shera- offo woh nahi

Veer- sorry i was just joking... you tell

Shera- splash people with WATER!

And then quickly splashed water on veer... without giving him a moment to react 😆

Veer started laughing

And did the same with shera (splash her back)

She smiled and they look at each other with lot of love